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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">How about “a legally binding arrangement”?  I think that would cover all interesting cases.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Trang Nguyen<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, February 6, 2019 15:15<br>
<b>To:</b> Rosette, Kristina <rosettek@amazon.com>; Kurt Pritz <kurt@kjpritz.com>; gnso-epdp-team@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] Recommendation 13 - Responsibilities of the Parties - email list discussion<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Hi Kristina, All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Regarding “arrangement” versus “agreement”, ICANN org previously stated that “arrangement” could “take the form of an agreement, a policy, or a specification.”
 All of these would be legally binding. Here’s a link to the message where we previously stated this: <a href="https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fmm.icann.org%2Fpipermail%2Fgnso-epdp-team%2F2019-January%2F001367.html&data=02%7C01%7Cmarksv%40microsoft.com%7C12b360caa97642fb952508d68c88f62e%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C636850917226378566&sdata=Ea%2BH76pis0UVc6lvwlftUs3U7t93AAS9kTaWTBw44lI%3D&reserved=0"><span style="color:purple">https://mm.icann.org/pipermail/gnso-epdp-team/2019-January/001367.html</span></a>.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Dan and Trang<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">ICANN Org Liaisons<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">Gnso-epdp-team <<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org">gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of "Rosette, Kristina via Gnso-epdp-team" <<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org">gnso-epdp-team@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Reply-To: </b>"Rosette, Kristina" <<a href="mailto:rosettek@amazon.com">rosettek@amazon.com</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, February 5, 2019 at 6:39 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Kurt Pritz <<a href="mailto:kurt@kjpritz.com">kurt@kjpritz.com</a>>, "<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org">gnso-epdp-team@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org">gnso-epdp-team@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] Recommendation 13 - Responsibilities of the Parties - email list discussion<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><a name="_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Hi,</span><o:p></o:p></a></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">RySG is still considering Chris’ proposed change to the indemnification language, and may wish to discuss.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">We had separate comments on Recommendation 13, namely:</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black"> </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo3"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black"> RySG disagrees that “arrangements” is the correct word (instead
 of “agreements”). However, RySG is willing to agree to use of “arrangements” if (i) ICANN Org confirms by email to the list that “arrangements” is intended to refer to a legally binding instrument; and (ii) the recommendation contains a footnote that says
 this (ICANN Org confirmed that “arrangement” is intended to refer to a legally binding instrument.) along with a citation to the date and author of that email.    We note the recent ICANN Org reference to Article 26, which deals with Joint Controllers. Given
 the ICANN Org position that ICANN is not a joint controller, on the one hand, it seems inconsistent to cite that Article as the basis for use of “arrangements,” on the other hand.</span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo3"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:black">Separate from the issue Chris has raised below, RySG believes
 that the language in the original sentence should be changed from “Indemnification clauses shall” to “Indemnification clauses should.”  The RAs for some gTLDs (.arab, .amsterdam, and .helsinki, for example) do not indemnify ICANN because of the governmental
 status of the RO.  Changing from “shall” to “should” respects that existing arrangement.</span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><o:p></o:p></span></li></ol>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Kurt Pritz<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, February 05, 2019 1:37 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> </span></span><a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">gnso-epdp-team@icann.org</span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"></span></a><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] Recommendation 13 - Responsibilities of the Parties - email list discussion</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">You have seen Chris’ suggested language for Recommendation 13 below (and Kavouss’ response). The result is a less prescriptive or precise recommendation but also alerts us to possible reaction
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Please let me know if you disagree with or wish to discuss Chris’ recommendation. It would be great to receive feedback today so that we can schedule a discussion if need be, but please respond
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Thanks and regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Kurt<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">On Feb 4, 2019, at 1:58 AM, Chris Disspain <</span><a href="mailto:chris.disspain@board.icann.org"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">chris.disspain@board.icann.org</span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"></span></a><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">Hi Kurt,</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">I think your suggested language below brings together all of the points of view. </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">I do have one concern regarding the indemnification language “Indemnification clauses shall ensure that the risk for certain data
 processing is borne by either one or multiple parties that determine the purpose and means of the processing”. This goes beyond my understanding of ICANN’s plan to explore ways to possibly reduce risk to the contracted parties with respect to providing access
 to non-public WHOIS data through a unified access model. As currently drafted, I think the language might prove challenging when it comes time for the Board to consider this recommendation. </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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 always rest with the party or parties that determine the purposes and means of processing, for example in the case of a data breach.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">I hope this makes sense. Happy to discuss as always. </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">On 30 Jan 2019, at 19:53, Kurt Pritz <</span></span><a href="mailto:kurt@kjpritz.com"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">kurt@kjpritz.com</span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"></span></a><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">To me, it seems as if we are in agreement with a set of principles and a variety of wordings will suit our purpose. </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">I believe we need to point directly  to the thorough work done by several of our team that indicates that JCAs are an appropriate
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">I also have learned that the responsibilities of the parties (contracted parties and ICANN) will vary for each purpose even for
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">Taking into account the Initial Report Recommendation, the work of the small group subsequent to that, and the comments on this
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">"The EPDP Team recommends that ICANN Org develop and implement any required data protection arrangements, as appropriate, with
 the Contracted Parties. In addition to the legally required components of such agreement, the agreement shall clearly specify the responsibilities of the respective parties for the processing activities as described therein. Indemnification clauses shall ensure
 that the risk for certain data processing is borne by either one or multiple parties that determine the purpose and means of the processing. Due consideration should be given to the analysis carried out by the EPDP Team ("Processors, Controllers, Co-Controllers
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">It’s my hope we can accept this as a team.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">Thanks for letting me weigh in on this and thank for the energy that’s gone into this discussion and the others.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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 concern about the EPDP proposing a "specific legal vehicle (i.e., Joint Controller Agreement)."</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>Subject:</b><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] Recommendation 13 - Responsibilities of the Parties - email list discussion</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif"> it seems like USG has suggested deleting the whole recommendation. I do not see any other opposition against JCA. 
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">Unless you <span class="xgmail-gr330">agreed</span><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>on something during the F2F, I don't think we should
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">On Wed, Jan 30, 2019 at 1:48 PM Heineman, Ashley <</span></span><a href="mailto:AHeineman@ntia.doc.gov"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">AHeineman@ntia.doc.gov</span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"></span></a><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From: "Heineman, Ashley" <</span></span><a href="mailto:AHeineman@ntia.doc.gov" target="_blank"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">AHeineman@ntia.doc.gov</span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"></span></a><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">></span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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 I think we should provide them a framework, the framework should consider ( as I gather from Alan and Thomas emails) legal, binding instruments that minimize the risk of fine and provides the appropriate and legal level of data protection for domain name registrants[
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 circumstances. Additionally, we heard and read about concerns, but no alternative has been suggested that would be a better solution to what we agreed on earlier. To me, that does not require a change of our recommendation. We are replacing a concrete recommendation
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">1. We say joint controllers and in fact the parties are independent controllers</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">In this scenario, there should not be any risk for the parties at all. </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">The reason for this assumption is that the data flows between joint controllers need to be legally sound as between third parties (or independent
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">In this case, legal requirements would not be fulfilled. There would be a breach that could be sanctioned. In a proceeding with a supervisory authority,
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">- a letter from the Art 29 WP suggesting a joint controller scenario might be present</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">- a memo from Wilson Sonsini pointing in the direction of joint controllers</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">- a memo from Hamilton suggesting a joint controller scenario</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">- a memo from ICANN quoting from the above and concluding that it should be independent controllers nonetheless.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">I am afraid that the authorities will then say that we could have known that joint controllers should be the way to go and that we increase the
 liability risk for everyone by not doing so. </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">In other words, we would need to have very good reasons not to go for a joint controller scenario. The language in the initial report ensures that.
 The revised language not much so.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Thanks for reading all this.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">PS - In practical terms, I think joint controller agreements can be operationalized without insurmountable difficulties. In the long run, we should
 apply for a code of conduct anyway and we could present a different approach than joint controllers. If there is blessing for an alternative form the authorities via that route or by means of a guidance or other confirmation, we can certainly take a different
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Am 30.01.2019 um 14:40 schrieb Alan Woods <</span></span><a href="mailto:alan@donuts.email" target="_blank"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">alan@donuts.email</span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"></span></a><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">>:</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">I am perplexed, if not a little bit frustrated by continuous tendency to wordsmith matters out of existence here. </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">So this end, and regardless of the ultimate settling of Roles and Responsibilities can we just go back to basic principles and remind ourselves
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><b><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Art 28:</span></b></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span class="apple-converted-space"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> </span></span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">(processor)
 "Processing by a processor shall be governed<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><b><u>by a contract or other legal act</u></b>"<i>[emphasis added] </i></span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><b><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Art 26:</span></b></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span class="apple-converted-space"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> </span></span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">(Joint
 Controllers) "They shall in a transparent manner determine their respective responsibilities for compliance with the obligations under this Regulation, in particular as regards the exercising of the rights of the data subject and their respective duties to
 provide the information referred to in Articles 13 and 14,<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><b><u>by means of an arrangement between them</u></b>" <i>[emphasis added] </i></span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">I appreciate this is likely where Trang's suggestion is deriving from and I have no real issue with the concept of 'Arrangement' - but can we please
 be very clear, that as a contracted party, who's lead DPA is clearly going to be Ireland (as will also be the case for a number of other CPs), my interpretation MUST be led by the laws which will be applicable to me, which is the<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span><a href="https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Furldefense.proofpoint.com%2Fv2%2Furl%3Fu%3Dhttp-3A__www.irishstatutebook.ie_eli_2018_act_7_section_79_enacted_en_html-23sec79%26d%3DDwMGaQ%26c%3DFmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM%26r%3DNghSLFqweTwAOFMJpbYA3LcVJ0Vvvw6-wxrKoS5l6VY%26m%3D60m_aOsdEkY6GWkjCHR57L9EfaJYZUyZobpMTpXUfjU%26s%3DPyMXBr9-MlHnrZWj208jzbAJlPrj-2fx-uw5y7nK5to%26e%3D&data=02%7C01%7Cmarksv%40microsoft.com%7C12b360caa97642fb952508d68c88f62e%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C636850917226398583&sdata=xYmMK7X3ldCCx8MYOznWiaWhydjHCObojCRT9Qh8Njc%3D&reserved=0" target="_blank"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Data
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">"  Where 2 or more controllers jointly determine the purposes and means of the processing of personal data (in this Part referred to as “joint controllers”),
 they shall determine their respective responsibilities for compliance with this Part in a transparent manner<span class="apple-converted-space"><b><u> </u></b></span><b><u>by means of an agreement in writing between them</u></b>, save in so far as the said
 responsibilities are determined by the law of the European Union or the law of the State. <i>[emphasis added] </i></span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">So regardless of whether or not we are considered Processors, Controllers or Joint controllers   at some point in time, CPs will require a Contract
 (or more correctly an addendum to our existing contracts) with ICANN, in writing, that governs the processing of data. </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">So long as it is clear, on the record, that whatever word is used, be it agreement, arrangement, or Ketubah, it means a legally binding instrument,
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">On Tue, Jan 29, 2019 at 1:18 AM Trang Nguyen <</span></span><a href="mailto:trang.nguyen@icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">trang.nguyen@icann.org</span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"></span></a><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:20.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Thank you, Sarah and Kristina for circulating revised text for recommendation 13. We would like to make one additional suggestion:
 replace “…negotiates and enters into required data protection agreements…” with “…develop and implement any required data protection arrangements…” Referring to an “arrangement” instead of an “agreement” would provide greater flexibility during implementation,
 which might take the form of an agreement, a policy, or a specification. Accordingly, the following sentence should also refer to “arrangement” instead of “agreement.”</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:20.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Also, we would like to ask for clarity on the sentence regarding indemnification. Implementation discussions will work out the
 details of allocation of responsibility and liability and it’s not clear that liability should necessarily always rest with the party or parties that determine(s) the purposes and means of processing, for example in the case of a data breach. We look forward
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><b><span style="font-size:20.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">From:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></span></b></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:20.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Gnso-epdp-team
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 on behalf of "Rosette, Kristina via Gnso-epdp-team" <</span></span><a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:20.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">gnso-epdp-team@icann.org</span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"></span></a><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:20.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">><br>
<b>Reply-To:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>"Rosette, Kristina" <</span></span><a href="mailto:rosettek@amazon.com" target="_blank"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:20.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">rosettek@amazon.com</span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"></span></a><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:20.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">><br>
<b>Date:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Monday, January 28, 2019 at 5:14 PM<br>
<b>To:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>"</span></span><a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:20.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">gnso-epdp-team@icann.org</span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"></span></a><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:20.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">"
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<b>Subject:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b>Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] Recommendation 13 - Responsibilities of the Parties - email list discussion</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:20.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">Subject to a friendly amendment, RySG supports the RrSG proposed text for Recommendation 13.  Our friendly amendment
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:20.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#1F497D">As revised, Recommendation 13 reads:</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:20.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">The EPDP Team recommends that ICANN Org negotiates and enters into required data protection agreements, as appropriate, with the
 Contracted Parties. In addition to the legally required components of such agreement, the agreement shall specify the responsibilities of the respective parties for the processing activities as described therein. Indemnification clauses should ensure that
 the risk for certain data processing is borne by either one or multiple parties that determine the purpose and means of the processing. Due consideration should be given to the analysis carried out by the EPDP Team in its Final Report.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>Sent:</b><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>Monday, January 28, 2019 3:29 PM<br>
<b>To:</b><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span><a href="mailto:gnso-epdp-team@icann.org" target="_blank"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">gnso-epdp-team@icann.org</span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"></span></a><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><br>
<b>Subject:</b><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>Re: [Gnso-epdp-team] Recommendation 13 - Responsibilities of the Parties - email list discussion</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">Here is the RrSG's proposed text for Rec 13:</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana",sans-serif">The EPDP Team recommends that ICANN Org negotiates and enters into required data protection agreements, as appropriate, with the
 Contracted Parties. In addition to the legally required components of such agreement, the agreement shall specify the responsibilities of the respective parties for the processing activities as described therein. Indemnification clauses shall ensure that the
 risk for certain data processing is borne by either one or multiple parties that determine the purpose and means of the processing. Due consideration should be given to the analysis carried out by the EPDP Team in its Final Report.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<pre><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Sarah Wyld<o:p></o:p></span></pre>
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 the following compromise language to address the different positions expressed. (This is a resend of an earlier email with only the subject line of the email updated.)</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">as suggested by Diane during the meeting to reflect that GDPR Art 28 is unlikely to apply in this situation, and</span></span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo6">
<span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">by an addition (bracketed & bolded below) to reference the analysis in the Final Report that this team recommends the creation of Joint Controller Agreements, to appropriately
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">This language is intended to strike a balance between those preferring to leave some flexibility for ICANN Org and Contracted Parties to consider
 the appropriate agreements and those preferring to be specific about the type of agreement to be pursued.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">I understand this is a complex topic that might require additional discussion but it is also possible that we cannot be dispositive on this issue
 prior to a lengthy contract formation discussion that extends well beyond our time frames. For that reason, we are taking the liberty of making this recommendation and hope you accept it in the spirit it is offered.</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><b><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Proposed Recommendation #13 Language</span></b><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">The EPDP Team recommends that ICANN Org negotiates and enters into required data protection agreements such as a<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><s>Data
 Processing Agreement (GDPR Art. 28) or</s><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>Joint Controller Agreement (Art. 26), as appropriate, with the Contracted Parties. In addition to the legally required components of such agreement, the agreement shall specify
 the responsibilities of the respective parties for the processing activities as described therein. Indemnification clauses shall ensure that the risk for certain data processing is borne by either one or multiple parties that determine the purpose and means
 of the processing. [<b>Due consideration should be given to the analysis carried out by the EPDP Team in its Final Report.</b>]</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Please indicate on the mailing list whether you have any concerns about these modifications and/or what other aspects of this recommendation should
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Deadline: Monday, 28 January, additional email discussion might follow depending on responses. </span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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