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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:JA">Apologies for the late submission – I initially failed to include the list when sharing with staff.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;mso-fareast-language:JA"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">James and I were tasked to review two things: (1) whether the verbiage required changing and (2) whether it was in the scope of the Charter to include it at all.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b>Verbiage<o:p></o:p></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Since the Charter does not directly prohibit such a thing, we proceeded to review the existing language.  We suggest only a minor grammatic change to the bullet.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1.0in;line-height:150%"><i><span style="color:#333333">“The EPDP Team recommends the SSAD, in whatever form it eventually takes:</span></i><span style="color:#333333"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1.0in;line-height:150%"><i><span style="color:#333333"> (a) Unless otherwise required or permitted, must not allow bulk access, wildcard requests, reverse lookups, nor Boolean search capabilities.</span></i><span style="color:#333333"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1.0in;line-height:150%"><i><span style="color:#333333"> (b) Must only return current data (no data about the domain name registration’s history);</span></i><span style="color:#333333"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1.0in;line-height:150%"><i><span style="color:#333333"> (c) Must receive a specific request for every individual domain name (no bulk access);</span></i><span style="color:#333333"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1.0in;line-height:150%"><i><span style="color:#333333"> (d) Must direct requests at the entity that is determined through this policy process to be responsible for the disclosure of the requested data.”</span></i><span style="color:#333333"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%"><span style="color:#333333"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Our comments are:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Bullet A<o:p></o:p></span></li><ul type="circle">
<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="mso-list:l1 level2 lfo3"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">During the F2F in Los Angeles, some members proposed removing this restriction entirely. This was opposed by others, including RrSG, RySG, and some ISPCP
 and NCSG.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="mso-list:l1 level2 lfo3"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">During the F2F in Los Angeles, some members proposed removing the first qualifying clause, beginning with “...not allow bulk access”. This was opposed
 by some members, and the preferred option for some RrSG, RySG and NCSG members.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="mso-list:l1 level2 lfo3"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">During the F2F in Los Angeles, some members have proposed leaving this item as-is. This was less desirable for some RrSG, RySG, ISPCP and NCSG who were
 concerned that these facilities would be required elsewhere in the system.<o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">Bullet C<o:p></o:p></span></li><ul type="circle">
<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="mso-list:l1 level2 lfo3"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">No objections, but redundant with the equivalent (first) prohibition listed in (a)<o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:150%">We also considered whether a further definition of “SSAD” might be helpful, resulting in the following text:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in;line-height:150%"><i><span style="color:#333333">“SSAD” is here defined as a system of data disclosure developed under consensus policy and contractually enforced by ICANN.  Development of SSAD does not prevent entities
 from developing additional data processing agreements outside of the consensus policy process to serve their business or customer interests.</span></i><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="mso-fareast-language:JA">Charter<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-fareast-language:JA">As mentioned about, the Charter does not directly prohibit us from discussing such topics.  However, Thomas’ reasoning is compelling and I attach it for completeness.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-fareast-language:JA"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-fareast-language:JA">Mark and James<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-fareast-language:JA"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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