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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear EPDP Team,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Following today’s meeting, the staff support team has gone ahead and made the updates discussed in relation to the logging, auditing and response requirements building blocks. Please note:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">For the <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/130z5SNuYgGhlH9hnAHJcjuZ_9F5zP7uJ4P4g_XcILpU/edit">
logging building block</a>:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<ul style="margin-top:0in" type="disc">
<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo2"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">As noted by Janis, this building block is considered complete for now, but please flag if any of the updates do not align with today’s discussion as
 soon as possible.<o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">For the <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MsvOfYu7tV97tGzQNjh52hZNxSsCw5ps4-dLvfRiAyk/edit">
auditing building block</a>:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<ul style="margin-top:0in" type="disc">
<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo2"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">The staff support team has suggested a number of edits to address the comments raised during today’s meeting. Please review and flag
<b>by Friday 22 November</b> if there are any remaining issues that should be further discussed. We have noted a placeholder for the section that is to be further reviewed once
</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt">the EPDP Team has decided on the roles and responsibilities of the different parties in SSAD.<o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">For the <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KqfkWfbC6gBIrmE3OTTw7MYpThciaMc03Lu6M9skEEI/edit">
response requirements building block</a>:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<ul style="margin-top:0in" type="disc">
<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo2"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">As discussed, we have gone ahead and created a separate implementation guidance section where we have moved some of the details that appeared to be more
 implementation focused. We have also tried to address some of the other comments and suggestions – if there are any concerns about those edits, please note this in the google doc. Based on the remaining comments, the main open items appear to be:<o:p></o:p></span>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level2 lfo2"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Response time</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> – the following language has been suggested: “SSAD requests that meet the automatic response
 criteria must receive an automatic disclosure response. For requests that do not meet the automatic response criteria, a disclosure response must be returned within 1 day for urgent requests and 7 days for all other requests.”<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level2 lfo2"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Definition and timeline for urgent SSAD requests</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> – the following language is currently included: “A separate
 timeline of [less than X business days] will be considered for the response to ‘Urgent’ SSAD Requests, those Requests for which evidence is supplied to show an immediate need for disclosure. The criteria to determine whether it concerns an urgent request are
 limited to circumstances that pose an imminent threat to life, serious bodily injury, critical infrastructure or child exploitation.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level2 lfo2"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">How to deal with complaints</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> – the following updated language has been proposed: “If a requestor is of the
 view that the response from the entity disclosing the data is not consistent with these policy recommendations, a complaint should be filed with ICANN Compliance. If a requestor is of the view that the response from the entity disclosing the data is not consistent
 with applicable data protection legislation, the requestor should contact the relevant data protection authority”.<o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
</li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo2"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Please provide your input on these and any other issues,
<b>by Tuesday 19 November 2019</b>.  <o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Also, as a reminder, input on the following building blocks is also due
<b>by Tuesday 19 November 2019</b>:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<ul style="margin-top:0in" type="circle">
<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eZBzRclRtEXPp1EScDfftnfnv9tneD7ovxmGe84BQz4/edit">Terms of use</a><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KCzlakWVkt6GN5ZPl0my45WdR34JPes_bZwmJkY9Z3k/edit">Automation</a><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ci-wvA1P9yoKjJ5DPeRbZ5FOHL2D8ExGsN2SV9TPELM/edit">Financial Stability</a><o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Caitlin, Berry and Marika<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black">Marika Konings</span></i></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black">Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) </span></i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black">Email: <a href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"><span style="color:#0563C1">marika.konings@icann.org</span></a>  </span></i><span style="font-size:10.0pt;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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