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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I am fine with both of Petter’s suggestions.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Also, maybe I missed it, but I couldn’t find anywhere in the draft where it was noted that Petter and I were selected as co-chairs. That should be in there,
so we can bask in the full glory of our achievement – or suffer permanent damage to our reputations ;-)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> gnso-igo-ingo-crp-bounces@icann.org [mailto:gnso-igo-ingo-crp-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Petter Rindforth<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, January 09, 2017 2:35 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Mary Wong<br>
<b>Cc:</b> gnso-igo-ingo-crp@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-igo-ingo-crp] FOR FINAL REVIEW: Updated draft Initial Report<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Initially, I want to thank you all for some fantastic years and excellent work on this topic!<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Let's hope that all other groups of interest in this topic appreciate the work, proposals and conclusions...<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I have only two minor suggestions - referring here to the clean PDF version:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span class="size"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"">Page 28f of the clean PDF version</span></b></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span class="size"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"">"As this initial consultation did not provide the WG with sufficient information and guidance
to reach substantive conclusions, the WG requested that ICANN assist it by engaging an external legal expert to provide it with a more detailed analysis".</span></span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">May I propose a more positive formulation, to not be readed as a complaint against Mr Hans Corell: <o:p></o:p></p>
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that there was still outstanding questions, a need for further information and guidance to reach substantive conclusions, and the WG therefore requested that ICANN assist it by engaging an external legal expert to provide it with a more detailed analysis."</span></i></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto"><span class="size"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Verdana","sans-serif"">"The WG reviewed and discussed the IGO Small Group Proposal at its meetings on 13 October and
20 October"</span></span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto">I recommend to add the year (2016):<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">6 januari 2017 17:58:38 +01:00, skrev Mary Wong <<a href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org">mary.wong@icann.org</a>>:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="onecomwebmail-msonormal" style="background:white"><span class="size"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thank you for your eagle eyes and helpful comments on the last draft of our Initial Report, last circulated in December 2016. Staff has now updated
the draft with all the suggestions and comments received. The updated draft Initial Report is available for download and review on our WG wiki space, in both clean and redlined Word and PDF versions (as you prefer):
<a href="https://community.icann.org/x/ZwG4Aw" target="_blank">https://community.icann.org/x/ZwG4Aw</a>.
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<p class="onecomwebmail-msonormal" style="background:white"><span class="size"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Please note that there are likely to be some remaining formatting and typographical errors that staff has not yet caught in this version; we will of
course be sure to review the final document carefully prior to publishing for public comment. Please note also that we have added in the latest WG Charter (as amended by the GNSO Council in April 2015) and new Annexes (per Phil’s suggestion) that show the
full text of the IGO Small Group Proposal and compilation of GAC advice on the topic since 2012. We have also restored the footnote numbering in Professor Swaine’s memo and added in a list of WG members.</span></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="onecomwebmail-msonormal" style="background:white"><span class="size"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">As agreed on our last call, please let us know if you spot any significant errors or omissions by next
<b>Friday 13 January 2017</b>. Following that date, staff will do one last pass through the document and prepare it for publication for public comment, early the following week (week beginning 16 January 2017). With a 40-day comment period, this means that
the public comment forum will close at the end of February, in time for ICANN58.</span></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="onecomwebmail-msonormal" style="background:white"><span class="size"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thanks and cheers</span></span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="onecomwebmail-msonormal" style="background:white"><span class="size"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Mary</span></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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