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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you, Phil – as you’ll have seen, staff has suggested that it may be sufficient for Working Group members who wish to file minority statements to notify Petter and the group of their intention by 9 July (with the actual deadline for
filing to be determined by the group in consultation with Petter and Susan).<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On the filing of minority statements – staff would like to note for all members that, under the GNSO Working Group Guidelines, minority statements are filed in respect of policy recommendations for which a member disagrees with the final
consensus designation (i.e. “In cases of Consensus, Strong support but significant opposition, and No Consensus, an effort should be made to document that variance in viewpoint and to present any Minority View recommendations that may have been made. Documentation
of Minority View recommendations normally depends on text offered by the proponent(s). In all cases of Divergence, the WG Chair should encourage the submission of minority viewpoint(s).”)
<b><i>Minority statements should therefore be tailored to specifically address the final recommendations as well as proposals that were considered but not agreed on</i></b>.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">For the call occurring in less than an hour’s time, staff would like to suggest that the Working Group focus on the following issues:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">How to deal with George’s suggestions regarding jurisdictional immunity as a “quirk of process” in the context of the Swaine report and how the immunity plea will arise in a court
proceeding filed by a losing registrant;<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">How to deal with some suggestions that could be viewed as somewhat subjective, e.g.:<o:p></o:p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo1">George’s suggestions that the report reflect the following: (1) the view/possibility that the UDRP and URS “inadvertently interferes with or prejudices the rights of parties to have
a case decided on the merits in the national court”; (2) the likelihood that a court filing following a URS loss is lower than for the UDRP; (3) concerns the Summary Report.<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo1">Paul Tattersfield’s suggestion to include a statement to the effect that an “overwhelming majority” of registrars will be willing to assist IGO complainants in the first instance<o:p></o:p></li></ul>
</li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">Deadlines and next steps<o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Although staff has not yet had the opportunity to incorporate the suggested textual changes made by George and Paul, we note that most of them concern tightening up the text for consistency of usage, factual corrections to reflect changes
between the Initial and Final Reports, and other editorial updates. We will be happy to circulate a revised draft Final Report incorporating as much of these textual updates as possible following the call.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Thank you.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Mary<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">"Corwin, Philip" <pcorwin@verisign.com><br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, July 5, 2018 at 10:50<br>
<b>To: </b>"petter.rindforth@fenixlegal.eu" <petter.rindforth@fenixlegal.eu>, Mary Wong <mary.wong@icann.org><br>
<b>Cc: </b>"gnso-igo-ingo-crp@icann.org" <gnso-igo-ingo-crp@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Ext] RE: Re: [Gnso-igo-ingo-crp] George Kirikos comments on July 2, 2018 draft final report, Part 3 (was Re: FOR REVIEW: Updated Draft Final Report)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><a name="_MailOriginalBody">Thank you Petter and Mary.<o:p></o:p></a></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">I am the last person around who wants to prolong this WG.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Let’s see how far we get on today’s call. However, I note that George has sent three separate emails proposing a multitude of edits, and each deserves airing and a decision on whether it should
be accepted. Once that exercise is completed, I would suggest that a revised redline be posted to the entire WG list so that members who are not on the call have a decent opportunity to review and comment on them prior to final acceptance.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Again, I must state that 8 am ET on Monday the 9<sup>th</sup> is not an acceptable deadline for the filing of Minority Statements. The Final Report is still a moving target and may not be locked
down for several more days at a minimum. It is not reasonable to set a MS deadline that may be in advance of agreement on Final Report. Further, once I finish writing my statement I must run it past my superior for review before it can be filed, and right
now we are bot a day-and-a-half away from the end of the work week.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">I therefore repeat my request that, in the event that a Final Report is filed on July 9<sup>th</sup>, WG members be provided with four additional days until Friday the 13<sup>th</sup> to file
Minority Statements – after four years of work I don’t think that requesting four extra days is unreasonable. I would think that Council would be amenable to a placeholder section for Minority Reports given its decision to ask the WG to complete its task just
ten days after the close of the Panama meeting. Receipt of Minority Statements on 7/13 will still give Councilors six days to review them prior to the 7/19 Council meeting.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">In addition, given the Council’s intense focus on launching an EPDP relating to GDPR and WHOIS, as well as the fact that we are submitting a Final Report that is certain to generate GAC advice
that is highly negative, it is a distinct possibility that Council will opt to defer any decision on a Motion regarding the Final Report until its August meeting.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Thank you and best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Philip<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><span style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">Philip S. Corwin</span><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"><b>From:</b> Gnso-igo-ingo-crp [mailto:gnso-igo-ingo-crp-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Petter Rindforth<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, July 04, 2018 6:55 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Mary Wong <mary.wong@icann.org><br>
<b>Cc:</b> gnso-igo-ingo-crp@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] Re: [Gnso-igo-ingo-crp] George Kirikos comments on July 2, 2018 draft final report, Part 3 (was Re: FOR REVIEW: Updated Draft Final Report)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Thanks Mary and All WG Members,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">I definitely look forward with pleasure to a fruitful and effective final call tomorrow!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">As to the time: Mary, I hope it is possible to extend it to 90 minutes, if necessary?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Then, at the end of our call, if there is still some question marks, I can of course formally ask for an extension, but as it seems not so likely that such request will be accepted, I recommend
us all to focus on finalizing everything tomorrow.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">As to Minority Statement:
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Mary, please note already now that I will prepare and submit one in support for Option 3 of Rec 5.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">All the best,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">5 juli 2018 00:12:30 +02:00, skrev Mary Wong <</span><a href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">mary.wong@icann.org</span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"></span></a><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">>:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Thank you for your comments and questions.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Regarding the date of the GNSO Council call and the expected deadline for delivery of our Final Report - in our experience, the Council has never changed a scheduled date for a Council meeting
to accommodate the submission of a PDP report. That said, if the Working Group as a whole (including Petter as chair and Susan as Council liaison) wish to request for an extension to the 9 July deadline, our recommendation is that it be a formal request from
Petter on the group's behalf, sent through Susan.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Regarding minority statements - staff had suggested a possible deadline of 1200 UTC on Monday 9 July to try to have as much of the Final Report completed as possible. As the consensus recommendations
as well as the consensus levels had been settled on at the 21 June meeting, we had hoped that the time between then and 9 July might be sufficient for those wishing to file minority statements (especially since these are not edited or reviewed). However, should
any member wish to have more time for this purpose, may we suggest that those wishing to file minority statements at least notify the group by Monday 9 July so that staff can add a tentative placeholder to the relevant Annex, noting that a certain number of
minority statements are likely to be filed?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Regarding Word v PDF - typically, staff works on documents in Word format which are then converted into PDF for submission and distribution. That is why we had requested that minority statements
be sent in Word format, but I should think we can also work with PDF formats if that is how a member wishes to send in his/her minority statement.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">We note that George's comments include notes on consistency, typos and similar errors (for which we are grateful) as well as more substantive suggestions. We suggest that the Thursday call focus
on the substantive suggestions, and will do our best to provide a list to work through on the call.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">On 7/4/18, 16:09, "Gnso-igo-ingo-crp on behalf of George Kirikos" <</span><a href="mailto:gnso-igo-ingo-crp-bounces@icann.org"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">gnso-igo-ingo-crp-bounces@icann.org</span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"></span></a><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">
on behalf of </span><a href="mailto:icann@leap.com"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">icann@leap.com</span><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody"></span></a><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">This is the part 3 of my comments on the July 2, 2018 draft final<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">report. The earlier parts are at:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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(part 1)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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(part 2)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">This was all based on a single pass through the entire document. I<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">hours, to try to get as much agreement as possible on all points<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">(including concerns from others about the current draft). i.e. we can<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">(all page references relative to "Clean" PDF version of July 2, 2018<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">25. page 33, first paragraph: for INGOs, it would be Recommendation<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">the 6 options for the Recommendation #5).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">21, 2018).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">process", as a compromise; if you want to call it a "Consensus Call",<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">in the 2nd Section 3.7 appeal made on June 10, 2018).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">The third paragraph on page 51 is fine, but the 2nd needs to be<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Concerns were raised regarding the accuracy, transparency and<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">list, it became evident that more members of the PDP were willing to<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">engage further on the remaining issues than originally was recorded,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">and that it might be feasible to reach consensus on all 5<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">recommendations. The Working Group held meetings on 10 & 25 May 2018<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">to further revise the language of the proposed recommendations. After<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">the 25 May 2018 meeting, a two week process was started whereby PDP<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">members were encouraged to share their views on the public mailing<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">for Recommendation 5). On June 9, 2018, after reviewing the emails of<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">footnote referencing's Phil's resignation), set the initial<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">designations of consensus levels, consistent with the requirements of<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Working Group held further meetings on 12 & 21 June 2018, and<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">discussions on the mailing list, engaging in the iterative process of<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">21, 2018), while also agreeing on the appropriate designations levels<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">for the proposals that did not attain consensus.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">That's about as diplomatic as I can make it, without bringing in the<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">2nd Section 3.7 appeal, arguing over what a "Consensus Call" is, etc.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">31. page 56, 3rd paragraph "The Working Group scheduled community<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">sessions at each ICANN Public Meeting that took place after its<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">formation" --- not correct, as there were no calls during the Panama<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">meeting (and I don't think was a session at the prior meeting either).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">Easiest fix is to remove the word "each" and make "Meeting" be plural<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">"Meetings", leaving it more correct than it is as present.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">32. page 58: Phil Corwin's affiliation is listed as "BC", whereas it<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">33. page 58: in the table listing all the constituencies, "CBUC"<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">57-58). Or, alternatively, change "BC" to "CBUC" for all the relevant<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bookmark:_MailOriginalBody">members on pages 57-58.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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