[Gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt] Thick Transition policy draft v6 (candidate for the final version) for IRT review

[theo geurts]

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Theo


On 11-10-2016 16:20, Roger D Carney wrote:
>
> Good Morning,
>
> Fairly small items that I don’t think really changes anything, just 
> cleans up some items:
>
> In the Scope, should we use “or” instead of “and” for Registrars: 
> “…all Registrars sponsoring domain name registrations in the .COM, 
> .NET or .JOBS gTLDs.”
>
> I think it would read better if the last sentences in the Thin/Thick 
> definitions were the exact same, I like the Thick one better “Contact 
> information for the domain name is maintained by the sponsoring 
> Registrar.”
>
> In the Transition Progress Metrics definition the last “domain” should 
> probably be plural “domains” and the last sentence needs a period(.).
>
> In section 1.2, I think “All relevant registration data…” is more 
> accurate and clear.
>
> In section 2.5, typo in first sentence “…data for an EPP domaing 
> object <create>…”
>
> In section 2.6/2.7 the time seems clunky “…at minimum Monthly by first 
> day of the next month at 23:59 UTC.”, does this flow better “…at 
> minimum, Monthly by 23:59 UTC of the first day of the next month.”?
>
> Thanks
>
> Roger
>
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> [mailto:gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt-bounces at icann.org] On Behalf Of Dennis 
> Chang
> Sent: Monday, October 10, 2016 5:56 PM
> To: gtheo <gtheo at xs4all.nl>; Anderson, Marc <mcanderson at verisign.com>
> Cc: gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt at icann.org
> Subject: [Gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt] Thick Transition policy draft v6 
> (candidate for the final version) for IRT review
>
> Dear Thick Whois IRT,
>
> Attached is the Transition Policy draft with two updates as we’ve 
> discussed at the meeting and in the following email conversation.
>
> 1. Section 2.2 has been split into two sections per Marc’s suggestion 
> a. Section 2.2 is now for documentation only b. The new section 2.3 is 
> for the actual deployment of OT&E 2. Section 2.11 has added clause 
> “unless otherwise required by Registry Agreement” proposed by 
> Marc/Steve and IRT agreement.
>
> As you know, we are aiming for tomorrow’s meeting to be the final IRT 
> review meeting for the Transition Policy.
>
> This will ensure we keep to our schedule to open the Public Comment 
> and make the policy Announcement on 1 February 2017.
>
> Please note that we are seeking for your Final comment prior to 
> proceeding with the Public Comment.
>
> If you have no further comments, I’d appreciate your reply with the 
> support to proceed.
>
> This is the second item on the IRT agenda for the tomorrow’s meeting 
> but could be reordered to be the first based on our team agenda review 
> tomorrow; Steve’s request noted here.
>
> Thanks again for your timely support.
>
> —
>
> Kind Regards,
>
> Dennis S. Chang
>
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>
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