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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dennis,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thank you for forwarding this template and giving us a chance to review/provide feedback. I don’t have any concerns with the template, but I don’t have some suggestions.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo4"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">RDS queries today are for Domain, Registrar or Nameserver. Whois as variously defined has different response fields for each of those query types.
For clarity it probably makes sense to include a column to specify which query response type(s) the additional field(s) applies to.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo4"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">It may be that the additional field(s) is optional. For clarity, a column to specify if the additional field is required or not might make sense<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo4"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Under instructions; (1) refers to cell C13, but on the form it’s actually C14. I suggest just stating that the TLD field must be filled out rather than
specifying a table cell.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo4"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Instruction (5) says “All yellow cell must be filled in.” mixing singular and plural. It is probably redundant with instruction (1) anyway and could
be removed.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo4"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Do you envision it being possible to use this form for more than one TLD? The form says TLD (singular) but it let me enter more than one string. I
suggest clarifying if it can be used for multiple TLDs or not.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo4"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">The rules state that only 40 additional fields may be submitted. Is that 40 additional fields per TLD or per form? I suggest clarifying.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo4"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">There are a number of rules around the Key Name. While I don’t have any issues/concerns with those rules, it would make sense to site the source (policy,
specification, IETF standard, etc.) that each rule comes from.<o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thanks,<br>
Marc<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt-bounces@icann.org [mailto:gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Dennis Chang<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Sunday, July 16, 2017 6:08 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [EXTERNAL] [Gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt] Thick WHOIS IRT: template for additional fields for CL&D<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear Thick IRT,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Attached is the proposed template for the CL&D Additional Fields should the registry operators wish to submit.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">We’d appreciate your feedback before we deploy the template.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black;mso-fareast-language:KO">Thanks<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black;mso-fareast-language:KO">Dennis Chang</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black"><<a href="mailto:gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt-bounces@icann.org">gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of Dennis Chang <<a href="mailto:dennis.chang@icann.org">dennis.chang@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, July 12, 2017 at 10:30 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>"<a href="mailto:gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt@icann.org">gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt@icann.org">gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Gnso-impl-thickwhois-rt] Thick WHOIS IRT meeting agenda: 18 July 2017</span><span style="color:black;mso-fareast-language:KO"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear Thick IRT,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Submitted below is the agenda for the IRT meeting next week.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">18 July 2017 </span></b><o:p></o:p></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo3"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Project status</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo3"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Transition: Project schedule update based on 1 August 2017 change to 29 November 2017</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo3"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">CL&D: prep for effective date of 1 August 2017; review of the proposed template for additional fields</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:0in;mso-list:l0 level2 lfo3"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Next Steps</span><o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><a href="https://community.icann.org/display/TWCPI/Thick+Whois+IRT+Meetings%3A+Agenda+and+Minutes">https://community.icann.org/display/TWCPI/Thick+Whois+IRT+Meetings%3A+Agenda+and+Minutes</a></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;color:black;mso-fareast-language:KO">Dennis S. Chang</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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