[gnso-improvem-impl-sc] REMINDER FOR REVIEW: Revised SCI Charter 04 June 2013

[Mike O'Connor]

ah.  good one.

i was thinking along the lines of "the last review by that chain of working groups that created and implemented the reforms."  so a clearer wording might be something like

	"is responsible for the final review and assessment by the {what ever that group of teams is called in aggregate}"

certainly don't want to imply final EVER, just final before transitioning to "normal" GNSO process.

thanks,

mikey

On Jun 10, 2013, at 1:31 PM, Avri Doria <avri at acm.org> wrote:

> 
> Hi,
> 
> I am fine with this.
> 
> one questions
> 
>> is responsible for the final review and assessment of
> 
> why final?
> 
> 
> avri
> 
> On 10 Jun 2013, at 10:32, Mike O'Connor wrote:
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>> hi all,
>> 
>> i've developed an alternate version of the draft that captures my understanding of the "narrow, time-limited" definition of the SCI.  i'm putting it out here for discussion, partly to see if my understanding is correct and partly as an alternative for the group to consider.
>> 
>> with the exception of one nit-pick in the "Working Method" section, all of my changes are in the "General" section.  Much of what i've done involved deleting prior changes -- so you may find it helpful to have Julie's draft and this one open side by side as you review it.  i decided to treat this as a "fork" in the drafts rather than trying to pile my changes on top of the ones that were already there -- it started to get VERY busy.  if people would prefer, i'm happy to do a draft that makes the changes "on top" of the ones that Avri and J Scott had already made.
>> 
>> thanks,
>> 
>> mikey
>> 
>> 
>> <SCI Charter Revisions - narrow.doc>
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>> 
>> On Jun 10, 2013, at 6:39 AM, Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund at icann.org> wrote:
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>>> Dear SCI members,
>>> 
>>> Per Ron's request to send this around again, attached is the SCI Charter as revised during the SCI meeting on 04 June 2013.  The changes from that meeting were grammatical corrections in the General and Working Method sections.  The other changes that are redlined and the comments are those proposed by the SCI Charter Drafting Team, and the inclusion of the Chair and Vice Chair election process as previous discussed and agreed to by the SCI.
>>> 
>>> Please send any comments to the list and this item will be on the agenda for the next SCI meeting that is scheduled for 02 July 2013.
>>> 
>>> Best regards,
>>> 
>>> Julie
>>> 
>>> Julie Hedlund, Policy Director
>>> <SCI Charter Revisions - 130604.docx>
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