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<div dir="ltr" align="left"><span class="673301100-09022013"><font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Arial">Marisa,</font></span></div>
<div dir="ltr" align="left"><span class="673301100-09022013"><font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Arial">I have taken your language and condensed it a bit as well as trying to clarify that if there is no recommendation from the WG before the Council, then there
would have to be a properly seconded motion in order to require the Council to seek public comment.
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<div dir="ltr" align="left"><span class="673301100-09022013"><font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Arial">I don't think anyone was intending to completely eliminate the requirement for a written report when the WG was making the recommendation. That written
Termination Report or Suspension Report was mandatory where the recommendation for suspension or termination came from the WG. That improvement was at the very heart of this initiative and so that language has been added back where you had deleted it.</font></span></div>
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<div dir="ltr" align="left"><span class="673301100-09022013"><font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Arial">On a more minor note, I also noticed that the earlier paragraphs in this same section refer to "PDP Team" and not "PDP Working Group". So I changed all
the references to PDP Team. It seems it should be one or the other consistently throughout unless there is some difference I do not appreciate between a PDP Team and PDP WG. I also think it would be fine for all references to be to PDP WG and that is the
term I hear used more often.</font></span></div>
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<div dir="ltr" align="left"><span class="673301100-09022013"><font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Arial">Attached is a new Feb 8 draft with the changes accepted. While working on this, I ended up losing track of the status of my redline and would appreciate
it if you could run a comparison btween this and the language the SCI reviewed in its last call so that all members can see the proposed changes in my draft.
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<font size="2" face="Tahoma"><b>From:</b> owner-gnso-improvem-impl-sc@icann.org [mailto:owner-gnso-improvem-impl-sc@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Marika Konings<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, February 07, 2013 4:10 AM<br>
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<div>Dear All,</div>
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<div>As discussed yesterday, please find attached for your review the suggested modifications to the last version of the language concerning the termination or suspension of a PDP. </div>
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