<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">hi all,<div><br></div><div>i've developed an alternate version of the draft that captures my understanding of the "narrow, time-limited" definition of the SCI. i'm putting it out here for discussion, partly to see if my understanding is correct and partly as an alternative for the group to consider.</div><div><br></div><div>with the exception of one nit-pick in the "Working Method" section, all of my changes are in the "General" section. Much of what i've done involved deleting prior changes -- so you may find it helpful to have Julie's draft and this one open side by side as you review it. i decided to treat this as a "fork" in the drafts rather than trying to pile my changes on top of the ones that were already there -- it started to get VERY busy. if people would prefer, i'm happy to do a draft that makes the changes "on top" of the ones that Avri and J Scott had already made.</div><div><br></div><div>thanks,</div><div><br></div><div>mikey</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div></div></body></html>