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<div>Thank you, Lars.</div>
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<div>Team: Given that we have next Monday off, please use the time between now and our next call (8 September) to review the following items:</div>
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<li>List of GDD comments provided by Lars (below)</li><li>Text of Recommendations</li><li>Overall proof-reading and readability.</li></ol>
<div>Please submit your comments/edits to the list no later than <b>Saturday 6 September!</b> Otherwise they will need to be raised during our call.</div>
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<div>Thanks—</div>
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<div>J.</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Lars Hoffmann <<a href="mailto:lars.hoffmann@icann.org">lars.hoffmann@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Friday, August 29, 2014 at 9:36 <br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>"<a href="mailto:gnso-irtpd@icann.org">gnso-irtpd@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-irtpd@icann.org">gnso-irtpd@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>[gnso-irtpd] Updated Report<br>
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<div>Dear all,</div>
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<div>Apologies for the late distribution of this update but thanks to the slight delay I was able to include comments from ICANN's GDD Team that might be useful to the Group’s discussion. </div>
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<div>It would be great if you found some time to go through the Report – especially the recommendations and observations in
<b>Section 4</b> and also consider the newly supplied comments from the GDD Team. </div>
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<div>Main edits from the last version are related to Charter Question F and the additional recommendations 18 and 19. These can be found on pages 26, 27, 28, 29 and 30 – including the new Recommendation #19.</div>
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<div>Please also note the comments from ICANN’s GDD Team on: </div>
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<li>page 14</li><li>Page 16</li><li>Page 18</li><li>Page 22</li><li>Page 24 (two comments)</li><li>Page 26</li><li>Page 28 (two comments)</li><li>Page 30</li><li>Page 42</li></ul>
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Finally, please note that for ease of reading I have started the latest changes from a clean copy, meaning that only the edits from the last version are red-lined.
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<div>Many thanks and have a good weekend and those lucky enough to have Monday off – have a great Labour Day, too!</div>
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<div>Best,</div>
<div>Lars</div>
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