<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><div><div>Dear all,</div><div><br></div><div>I hope this email finds you well. I waited with the sending out of the agenda until today as it is the deadline that James marked in his email last week (see below). So far I have received no edits. In light of that, please find below the suggested agenda for Monday’s call.</div><div>Best wishes,</div><div>Lars</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><div><b>IRTP Part D PDP Working Group Meeting – 9 September 2014 15.00 UTC</b></div><div><br></div><div>1. Roll Call/SOI Update</div><div>2. Review of Final Report – especially GDD comments </div><div>3. Review next steps and confirming next meeting</div></div><div> </div></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><span id="OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION"><div style="font-family:Calibri; font-size:11pt; text-align:left; color:black; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0in; PADDING-LEFT: 0in; PADDING-RIGHT: 0in; BORDER-TOP: #b5c4df 1pt solid; BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 3pt"><span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span> James Bladel <<a href="mailto:jbladel@godaddy.com">jbladel@godaddy.com</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span> Friday, 29 August 2014 17:15<br><span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span> Lars HOFFMANN <<a href="mailto:lars.hoffmann@icann.org">lars.hoffmann@icann.org</a>>, "<a href="mailto:gnso-irtpd@icann.org">gnso-irtpd@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-irtpd@icann.org">gnso-irtpd@icann.org</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span> Re: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report<br></div><div><br></div><div><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><div>Thank you, Lars.</div><div><br></div><div>Team: Given that we have next Monday off, please use the time between now and our next call (8 September) to review the following items:</div><div><br></div><ol><li>List of GDD comments provided by Lars (below)</li><li>Text of Recommendations</li><li>Overall proof-reading and readability.</li></ol><div>Please submit your comments/edits to the list no later than <b>Saturday 6 September!</b> Otherwise they will need to be raised during our call.</div><div><br></div><div>Thanks—</div><div><br></div><div>J.</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><span id="OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION"><div style="font-family:Calibri; font-size:11pt; text-align:left; color:black; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0in; PADDING-LEFT: 0in; PADDING-RIGHT: 0in; BORDER-TOP: #b5c4df 1pt solid; BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 3pt"><span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Lars Hoffmann <<a href="mailto:lars.hoffmann@icann.org">lars.hoffmann@icann.org</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Friday, August 29, 2014 at 9:36 <br><span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>"<a href="mailto:gnso-irtpd@icann.org">gnso-irtpd@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-irtpd@icann.org">gnso-irtpd@icann.org</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>[gnso-irtpd] Updated Report<br></div><div><br></div><div><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><div>Dear all,</div><div><br></div><div>Apologies for the late distribution of this update but thanks to the slight delay I was able to include comments from ICANN's GDD Team that might be useful to the Group’s discussion. </div><div><br></div><div>It would be great if you found some time to go through the Report – especially the recommendations and observations in
<b>Section 4</b> and also consider the newly supplied comments from the GDD Team. </div><div><br></div><div>Main edits from the last version are related to Charter Question F and the additional recommendations 18 and 19. These can be found on pages 26, 27, 28, 29 and 30 – including the new Recommendation #19.</div><div><br></div><div><div>Please also note the comments from ICANN’s GDD Team on: </div><ul><li>page 14</li><li>Page 16</li><li>Page 18</li><li>Page 22</li><li>Page 24 (two comments)</li><li>Page 26</li><li>Page 28 (two comments)</li><li>Page 30</li><li>Page 42</li></ul></div>
Finally, please note that for ease of reading I have started the latest changes from a clean copy, meaning that only the edits from the last version are red-lined.
<div><br></div><div>Many thanks and have a good weekend and those lucky enough to have Monday off – have a great Labour Day, too!</div><div><br></div><div>Best,</div><div>Lars</div><div><br></div></div></div></span></div></div></span></body></html>