<html xmlns:v="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:vml" xmlns:o="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" xmlns:w="urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:word" xmlns:m="http://schemas.microsoft.com/office/2004/12/omml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40">
<head>
<meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=Windows-1252">
<meta name="Generator" content="Microsoft Word 14 (filtered medium)">
<style><!--
/* Font Definitions */
@font-face
{font-family:Wingdings;
panose-1:5 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0;}
@font-face
{font-family:Mangal;
panose-1:2 4 5 3 5 2 3 3 2 2;}
@font-face
{font-family:"Cambria Math";
panose-1:2 4 5 3 5 4 6 3 2 4;}
@font-face
{font-family:Calibri;
panose-1:2 15 5 2 2 2 4 3 2 4;}
@font-face
{font-family:Tahoma;
panose-1:2 11 6 4 3 5 4 4 2 4;}
/* Style Definitions */
p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal
{margin:0in;
margin-bottom:.0001pt;
font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";}
a:link, span.MsoHyperlink
{mso-style-priority:99;
color:blue;
text-decoration:underline;}
a:visited, span.MsoHyperlinkFollowed
{mso-style-priority:99;
color:purple;
text-decoration:underline;}
span.EmailStyle17
{mso-style-type:personal-reply;
font-family:"Arial","sans-serif";
color:windowtext;
font-weight:normal;
font-style:normal;}
.MsoChpDefault
{mso-style-type:export-only;
font-size:10.0pt;}
@page WordSection1
{size:8.5in 11.0in;
margin:1.0in 1.0in 1.0in 1.0in;}
div.WordSection1
{page:WordSection1;}
/* List Definitions */
@list l0
{mso-list-id:864294502;
mso-list-template-ids:-570162398;}
@list l0:level1
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:\F0B7;
mso-level-tab-stop:.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Symbol;}
@list l0:level2
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:o;
mso-level-tab-stop:1.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:"Courier New";
mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman";}
@list l0:level3
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:\F0A7;
mso-level-tab-stop:1.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Wingdings;}
@list l0:level4
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:\F0A7;
mso-level-tab-stop:2.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Wingdings;}
@list l0:level5
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:\F0A7;
mso-level-tab-stop:2.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Wingdings;}
@list l0:level6
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:\F0A7;
mso-level-tab-stop:3.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Wingdings;}
@list l0:level7
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:\F0A7;
mso-level-tab-stop:3.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Wingdings;}
@list l0:level8
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:\F0A7;
mso-level-tab-stop:4.0in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Wingdings;}
@list l0:level9
{mso-level-number-format:bullet;
mso-level-text:\F0A7;
mso-level-tab-stop:4.5in;
mso-level-number-position:left;
text-indent:-.25in;
mso-ansi-font-size:10.0pt;
font-family:Wingdings;}
ol
{margin-bottom:0in;}
ul
{margin-bottom:0in;}
--></style><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml>
<o:shapedefaults v:ext="edit" spidmax="1026" />
</xml><![endif]--><!--[if gte mso 9]><xml>
<o:shapelayout v:ext="edit">
<o:idmap v:ext="edit" data="1" />
</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]-->
</head>
<body lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple">
<div class="WordSection1">
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Apologies for missing the call. I had a crisis to deal with here.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif""><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"">Kristine<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif""><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<div>
<div style="border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in">
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> owner-gnso-irtpd@icann.org [mailto:owner-gnso-irtpd@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Alan Greenberg<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, September 08, 2014 8:49 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> James M. Bladel; Lars Hoffmann; gnso-irtpd@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report<o:p></o:p></span></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">I can live with it either way, The wording I proposed was what was mentioned on the call (by me) with no disagreement. 14 became semi redundant with the change to 13, and the intent was that in addition to the mandatory pointing to the
R&R/B&R, Registrars/Resellers could also point directly. With "..an additional best practice..", additional to what?<br>
<br>
Alan<br>
<br>
At 08/09/2014 09:13 AM, James M. Bladel wrote:<br>
<br>
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">I actually prefer the original language on this. But maybe we can wordsmith something better during our call.<br>
<br>
Thanks<br>
<br>
J.<br>
<br>
From: Alan Greenberg <<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</a> ><br>
Date: Sunday, September 7, 2014 at 23:45 <br>
To: Lars Hoffmann <<a href="mailto:lars.hoffmann@icann.org">lars.hoffmann@icann.org</a> >, "<a href="mailto:gnso-irtpd@icann.org">gnso-irtpd@icann.org</a> " <<a href="mailto:gnso-irtpd@icann.org">gnso-irtpd@icann.org</a>><br>
Subject: Re: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report<br>
<br>
One more small wording change. <br>
<br>
14 starts off with: <b>The WG recommends that, as an additional best practice, ICANN accredited Registrars...<br>
<br>
</b>That should have been: <b>The WG recommends that, in addition, as a best practice, ICANN accredited Registrars<br>
(See page 29 of the trascript - <a href="http://gnso.icann.org/en/meetings/transcript-irtp-d-18aug14-en.pdf">
http://gnso.icann.org/en/meetings/transcript-irtp-d-18aug14-en.pdf</a> ot at about minute 50 of the MP3).<br>
<br>
Alan a<br>
<br>
</b>At 07/09/2014 10:12 PM, Alan Greenberg wrote:<br>
<br>
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Sorry for the late comment. <br>
<br>
Rec 13 now reads:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:0in;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:12.0pt;margin-left:.5in">
<b>#13 The WG recommends that ICANN create and maintain a user-friendly, one-stop website containing all relevant information concerning disputed transfers and potential remedies to registrants. Such a website should be clearly accessible from the ICANN Registrants'
Benefits and Responsibilities page ( <a href="https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/benefits-2013-09-16-en">
https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/benefits-2013-09-16-en</a>).</b><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">I would suggest that "should be clearly accessible from" be changed to "should be clearly accessible from or integrated into"<br>
<br>
That gives those implementing the recommendation free reign to do this in the most logical and "user-friendly" manner.<br>
<br>
I will be on at the start of the call, but will need to leave within a few minutes, so if there are any questions about this, I would hope that they can be addressed at the start of the meeting.<br>
<br>
Thanks, Alan<br>
<br>
At 29/08/2014 10:36 AM, Lars Hoffmann wrote:<br>
<br>
<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Dear all,<br>
<br>
Apologies for the late distribution of this update but thanks to the slight delay I was able to include comments from ICANN's GDD Team that might be useful to the Group’s discussion.
<br>
<br>
It would be great if you found some time to go through the Report – especially the recommendations and observations in
<b>Section 4</b> and also consider the newly supplied comments from the GDD Team.
<br>
<br>
Main edits from the last version are related to Charter Question F and the additional recommendations 18 and 19. These can be found on pages 26, 27, 28, 29 and 30 – including the new Recommendation #19.<br>
<br>
Please also note the comments from ICANN’s GDD Team on: <o:p></o:p></p>
<ul type="disc">
<li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
page 14 <o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
Page 16 <o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
Page 18 <o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
Page 22 <o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
Page 24 (two comments) <o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
Page 26 <o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
Page 28 (two comments) <o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
Page 30 <o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
Page 42 <o:p></o:p></li></ul>
<p class="MsoNormal">Finally, please note that for ease of reading I have started the latest changes from a clean copy, meaning that only the edits from the last version are red-lined.<br>
<br>
Many thanks and have a good weekend and those lucky enough to have Monday off – have a great Labour Day, too!<br>
<br>
Best,<br>
Lars<o:p></o:p></p>
</div>
</body>
</html>