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<div>I actually prefer the original language on this. But maybe we can wordsmith something better during our call.</div>
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<div>Thanks—</div>
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<span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>Alan Greenberg <<a href="mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca">alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>Sunday, September 7, 2014 at 23:45 <br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>Lars Hoffmann <<a href="mailto:lars.hoffmann@icann.org">lars.hoffmann@icann.org</a>>, "<a href="mailto:gnso-irtpd@icann.org">gnso-irtpd@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-irtpd@icann.org">gnso-irtpd@icann.org</a>><br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>Re: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report<br>
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<div>One more small wording change. <br>
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14 starts off with: <b>The WG recommends that, as an additional best practice, ICANN accredited Registrars...<br>
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</b>That should have been: <b>The WG recommends that, in addition, as a best practice, ICANN accredited Registrars<br>
(See page 29 of the trascript - <a href="http://gnso.icann.org/en/meetings/transcript-irtp-d-18aug14-en.pdf" eudora="autourl">
http://gnso.icann.org/en/meetings/transcript-irtp-d-18aug14-en.pdf</a> ot at about minute 50 of the MP3).<br>
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Alan <br>
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</b>At 07/09/2014 10:12 PM, Alan Greenberg wrote:<br>
<blockquote type="cite" class="cite" cite="">Sorry for the late comment. <br>
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Rec 13 now reads:<br>
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<dl><dd><b>#13 The WG recommends that ICANN create and maintain a user-friendly, one-stop website containing all relevant information concerning disputed transfers and potential remedies to registrants. Such a website should be clearly accessible from the ICANN
Registrants' Benefits and Responsibilities page ( <a href="https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/benefits-2013-09-16-en" eudora="autourl">
https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/benefits-2013-09-16-en</a>).<br>
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I would suggest that "should be clearly accessible from" be changed to "should be clearly accessible from or integrated into"<br>
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That gives those implementing the recommendation free reign to do this in the most logical and "user-friendly" manner.<br>
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I will be on at the start of the call, but will need to leave within a few minutes, so if there are any questions about this, I would hope that they can be addressed at the start of the meeting.<br>
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Thanks, Alan<br>
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At 29/08/2014 10:36 AM, Lars Hoffmann wrote:<br>
<blockquote type="cite" class="cite" cite="">Dear all,<br>
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Apologies for the late distribution of this update but thanks to the slight delay I was able to include comments from ICANN's GDD Team that might be useful to the Group’s discussion.
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It would be great if you found some time to go through the Report – especially the recommendations and observations in
<b>Section 4</b> and also consider the newly supplied comments from the GDD Team.
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Main edits from the last version are related to Charter Question F and the additional recommendations 18 and 19. These can be found on pages 26, 27, 28, 29 and 30 – including the new Recommendation #19.<br>
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Please also note the comments from ICANN’s GDD Team on:
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<li>page 14 </li><li>Page 16 </li><li>Page 18 </li><li>Page 22 </li><li>Page 24 (two comments) </li><li>Page 26 </li><li>Page 28 (two comments) </li><li>Page 30 </li><li>Page 42 </li></ul>
Finally, please note that for ease of reading I have started the latest changes from a clean copy, meaning that only the edits from the last version are red-lined.<br>
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Many thanks and have a good weekend and those lucky enough to have Monday off – have a great Labour Day, too!<br>
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Best,<br>
Lars<br>
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