[Gnso-newgtld-wg-wt5] Initial Report - final version for publication
gregshatanipc at gmail.com
Tue Dec 4 17:50:44 UTC 2018
Staff and all,
The addition of the word “perceived” in the second edit is inappropriate,
adds a note of skepticism, and changes the meaning of the sentence.
*This needs to be removed before publication. *
Alternatively, we can add words like “perceived”, “claimed” and “alleged”
liberally throughout the rest of the document. I think the first option is
easier to deal with. Thank you.
On Tue, Dec 4, 2018 at 12:36 PM Emily Barabas <emily.barabas at icann.org>
> Dear Work Track 5 members,
> Thank you for your final input on the Initial Report. Working closely with
> the four co-leaders, staff has incorporated the following final edits based
> on the additional comments received:
> - Page 13, final paragraph of sub-section b: Since the purpose of this
> sub-section is to describe, in as accurate and neutral a manner as
> possible, what happened in the 2012 round, the text now reads: "There were
> varying outcomes; Some of these TLDs were permitted to move forward, some
> were only permitted where an arrangement could be reached with the
> geographic territory in question, and others were either not allowed to
> proceed or are still the subject of dispute."
> - Page 37, the sentence “Some of the problems and negative experiences
> that some Work Track members identified from the 2012 round include the
> following” has been changed to “Some Work Track members identified
> perceived problems / negative experiences from the 2012 round.” This edit
> follows comments that the sentence was phrased in an awkward manner and
> concern that it is redundant to use the terms “problems” and “negative
> experiences” in the same sentence. The edit seeks to address the underlying
> concern while acknowledging that these terms are related but have different
> meanings, and that Work Track members have used both terms to describe
> items in the list that follows.
> Attached you will find the final version of the Initial Report that will
> be published for public comment shortly. You will also find the text of the
> announcement that will be posted for this public comment period.
> Congratulations to all Work Track members for your hard work to reach this
> Kind regards,
> *Emily Barabas *| Policy Manager
> *ICANN* | Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers
> Email: emily.barabas at icann.org | Phone: +31 (0)6 84507976
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