<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">+ 1<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">It is to the point and less ambiguous<br class=""><div style=""><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Nov 30, 2017, at 18:50, Jeff Neuman <<a href="mailto:jeff.neuman@comlaude.com" class="">jeff.neuman@comlaude.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1; font-family: Helvetica-Light; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;"><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">With respect to the Scope of the Terms of Reference, please keep in mind that this section refers only to what will be discussed. It is intended to make sure the right questions are being asked and the right topics are being covered. It should also be neutral in nature to allow all sides of an issue to be discussed. <o:p class=""></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">Therefore, may I suggest a slight rewording of that first paragraph to the following:<o:p class=""></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt 0.5in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><i class=""><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: red;" class="">Work Track 5 will focus on developing proposed recommendations regarding the treatment of geographic names at the top level (both in ASCII and IDN form), including whether such names require consent or non-objection from applicable governmental authorities, evaluation criteria and potential grounds for objection.</span></i><span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif; color: red;" class=""><o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">This shorter rewording moves the consent or non-objection part up in the paragraph from where it is now. The new wording does not preclude any discussions on “approvals” nor does it implicitly endorse an approval-based model. It (hopefully) is neutral and by virtue of having the word “consent” in the paragraph will naturally lead to discussions on how one obtains consent or non-objection if required. <o:p class=""></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">In addition, the term consent is already in the Applicant Guidebook, so it is a term that we are all familiar with. And finally, according to<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="http://www.thesaurus.com/browse/consent" style="color: rgb(149, 79, 114); text-decoration: underline;" class="">http://www.thesaurus.com/browse/consent</a>, the term “Consent” is synonymous with, “approval, assent, authorization, permission, allowance, acquiescence”, etc.<o:p class=""></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class="">This is being provided as a suggestion only to move forward the conversation. It is not being provided in any official capacity.<o:p class=""></o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;" class=""><b class=""><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; color: rgb(15, 147, 71);" class="">Jeffrey J. 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font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 176, 80);" class=""><a href="mailto:jeff.neuman@valideus.com" style="color: rgb(149, 79, 114); text-decoration: underline;" class=""><span style="color: rgb(0, 176, 80);" class="">jeff.neuman@valideus.com</span></a></span></u><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; color: rgb(89, 89, 89);" class=""><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>or<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span><u class=""><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 176, 80);" class=""><a href="mailto:jeff.neuman@comlaude.com" style="color: rgb(149, 79, 114); text-decoration: underline;" class=""><span style="color: rgb(0, 176, 80);" class="">jeff.neuman@comlaude.com</span></a></span></u><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 10pt; font-family: Verdana, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 176, 80);" class=""><o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div style="margin: 0in 0in 0.0001pt; font-size: 11pt; 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