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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D">Attached are my redline comments to the draft of Section 1.7. Most of the redlines begin on page 38.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> Gnso-newgtld-wg [mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Steve Chan<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, May 23, 2018 9:05 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-newgtld-wg] Proposed agenda - New gTLD Subsequent Procedures PDP WG - 29 May 2018 at 20:00 UTC<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><a name="_MailOriginalBody"><span style="color:black">Dear WG Members,</span></a><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">Below, please find the proposed agenda for the New gTLD Subsequent Procedures WG meeting scheduled for
<u>Tuesday</u><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>29<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>May 2018 at<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>20:00 UTC, for 90 minutes.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">Agenda Review<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">Roll Call/SOIs<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">Review of the Initial Report (continued).<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><i>* The purpose of this review is to ensure that preliminary outcomes and deliberations are accurately captured
and written in an understandable manner. The WG Co-Chairs have sought to make clear that this exercise is not intended to re-open substantive discussions, which is better served by the submission of public comments and subsequently when reviewing public comments
received.</i><span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><b><i><span style="color:windowtext">Please submit your comments about these sections to the Working Group mailing list (</span></i></b><a href="mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org"><b><i><span style="color:#954F72">gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org</span></i></b></a><b><i><span style="color:windowtext">)
in advance of the meeting.</span></i></b><o:p></o:p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level2 lfo3">Section 1.7 (Reserved Names; Registrant Protections; Closed Generics; String Similarity; IDNs; Security and Stability; Applicant Reviews: Technical/Operational, Financial and Registry Services;
Name Collisions) <o:p></o:p></li></ol>
</li><li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3">AOB<o:p></o:p></li></ol>
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<span style="color:black">For Item 3, the relevant documents are attached. As a reminder,<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>please note that a resource page has been set up on the Wiki to track the distribution of Initial Report sections, which you
can find here:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://community.icann.org/x/NwUhB"><span style="color:#954F72">https://community.icann.org/x/NwUhB</span></a></span><span class="MsoHyperlink"><span style="color:#954F72">.</span></span><span class="apple-converted-space"><span style="color:black"> </span></span><span style="color:black">As
you can see in the link, the following sections have been released:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">1.2: Overarching Issues<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">1.4: Pre-Launch Activities<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">1.5: Application Submission<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">1.6: Application Processing<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">1.7: Application Evaluation/Criteria<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">1.10: Contracting<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">1.11: Pre-Delegation<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="color:black">1.12: Post-Delegation<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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