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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link="#0563C1" vlink="#954F72"><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Hi Kristina,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Thank you very much for these helpful and detailed edits. Based on our review they all very clear and we don’t have any questions. We will integrate them.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>Julie<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='color:black'>From: </span></b><span style='color:black'>Gnso-newgtld-wg <gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of "Rosette, Kristina via Gnso-newgtld-wg" <gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org><br><b>Reply-To: </b>"Rosette, Kristina" <rosettek@amazon.com><br><b>Date: </b>Thursday, June 28, 2018 at 3:11 PM<br><b>To: </b>Steve Chan <steve.chan@icann.org>, "gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org" <gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org><br><b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-newgtld-wg] - Initial Report Excerpts Red-lines and Updated Preamble<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>With the caveat that I may have missed something (and, in that case, my comments on the transcript take precedence), attached and copied below is a chart of my redline comments.</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><table class=MsoNormalTable border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=0 style='border-collapse:collapse'><tr><td width=150 valign=top style='width:112.25pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><b><u><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Section</span></u></b><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=474 valign=top style='width:355.25pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-left:none;padding:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><b><u><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Comment</span></u></b><o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr><td width=150 valign=top style='width:112.25pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>2.2.2.2.e.1 (Clarity of Application Process)</span><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=474 valign=top style='width:355.25pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Change question to: Is ICANN organization capable of scaling to handle application volume and, if not, what would have to happen in order for ICANN organization to scale?</span><o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr><td width=150 valign=top style='width:112.25pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>2.2.4.e, bullet 1 (Different TLD Types)</span><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=474 valign=top style='width:355.25pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Add as last sentence to bullet: If so, which categories </span><o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr><td width=150 valign=top style='width:112.25pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>2.2.4.f (Different TLD Types)</span><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=474 valign=top style='width:355.25pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Change last word in “validated registry” bullet from verified to validated</span><o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr><td width=150 valign=top style='width:112.25pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>2.2.6.f (Accreditation Programs)</span><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=474 valign=top style='width:355.25pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Change “A new RSP must be evaluated prior to the ultimate selection of the Applicant to manage one or more specific TLDs.” to “A new RSP must be evaluated before the Applicant signs the Registry Agreement for the applied-for TLD(s).”</span><o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr><td width=150 valign=top style='width:112.25pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>2.5.1.e, bullet 1 (Application Fees)</span><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=474 valign=top style='width:355.25pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Drop footnote to define “warehousing” and “squatting”</span><o:p></o:p></p></td></tr><tr><td width=150 valign=top style='width:112.25pt;border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-top:none;padding:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Fn 219</span><o:p></o:p></p></td><td width=474 valign=top style='width:355.25pt;border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid windowtext 1.0pt;border-right:solid windowtext 1.0pt;padding:0in 5.4pt 0in 5.4pt'><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Suggest deleting the link to my letter to John Jeffrey. (Link to decision in IO Community Objection against .AMAZON applications already included)</span><o:p></o:p></p></td></tr></table><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'>K</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;color:#1F497D'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:11.0pt'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:11.0pt'> Gnso-newgtld-wg [mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Steve Chan<br><b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, June 20, 2018 12:30 AM<br><b>To:</b> gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org<br><b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-newgtld-wg] - Initial Report Excerpts Red-lines and Updated Preamble</span><o:p></o:p></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal> <o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'>Dear WG Members,</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'>As noted by Jeff a short while ago, the red-lined excerpts have all been made available on the Wiki here: <a href="https://community.icann.org/x/NwUhB">https://community.icann.org/x/NwUhB</a>. On this page, you will a full set of red-lined excerpts, all sections in a single document. You will also find extracts of each section as well. All of these documents are available in Word and PDF.</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'>Included as well on this page is the latest version of the remaining elements of the Initial Report, which includes edits suggested by WG members to the Preamble. The next steps from the staff side are to complete some of the remaining elements in the Initial Report, as well as to begin integrating the excerpts into the report.</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'>If you have any questions, please do let us know.</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'>Best,</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'>Steve, Emily, and Julie</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:10.0pt'> </span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:9.0pt'>Steven Chan</span></b><b><span style='font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"MS Mincho"'>
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