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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Hi Anne,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thanks for your thorough review of the document.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">I’ve added some comments to the document to help clarify where everything is captured. Where the responses to questions e.1-e.8 connected back to the preliminary recommendations, these have been included in
the summary document in the same section to make it easier to see everything on the related topic together. I noticed that there was one comment from RySG in response to e.7 that wasn’t sufficiently captured and have added that.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Where comments apply to either all of the recommendations or all of the recommendations and questions, the summary of the comment is included just once at the top of the outstanding issues section (I’ve added
a note in the document to highlight these for reference). Since this is a summary document, this is simply done for brevity to avoid repeating the same text again and again.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">On the clarification below from ALAC, I see that Justine has added some text to the document to reflect the below.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Please let us know if you see anything else that you think needs to be added or clarified.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Emily<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">Gnso-newgtld-wg <gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of "Aikman-Scalese, Anne" <AAikman@lrrc.com><br>
<b>Date: </b>Wednesday, 11 September 2019 at 00:40<br>
<b>To: </b>Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@icann.org>, "gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org" <gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-newgtld-wg] Proposed agenda - New gTLD Subsequent Procedures PDP WG - Thursday, 12 September 2019 at 20:00 UTC<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Hi All – it appears from the summary document section on Name Collisions that there are some cross references to public comment questions missing. The missing cross-references include 2.7.8 (e) (1) through
(8.) It would be helpful if these cross-references could be added to the summary document.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">The topic of “dependency” which Rubens and I have been debating on the list is treated in responses to 2.7.8.(e()1). Below I paste the public comment on 2.7.8.(e) (1) “Dependency”. The last box was cut off
but it is the ALAC comment re deferring to the SSAC and we have an updated clarification from ALAC as follows:
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Hi Jeff,<br>
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In reply to your request for further clarification, the ALAC is saying:<br>
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The Subsequent Procedures WG can conclude its work, and implementation may proceed, BUT EITHER ICANN may not launch the application window until the NCAP study(ies) are completed and any recommendations resulting from those study(ies) are addressed in implementation
OR ICANN may launch the application window and start the evaluation process, but no TLD may be delegated until the NCAP Study(ies) is/are completed and any recommendations resulting from those study(ies) are retroactively incorporated.</span></b><o:p></o:p></p>
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</span>Kind r</b><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">egards,<br>
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Justine Chew<br>
</span>ALAC liaison for Subsequent Procedures</b><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Thank you,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Anne</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Gnso-newgtld-wg <gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Julie Hedlund<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, September 10, 2019 7:51 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-newgtld-wg] Proposed agenda - New gTLD Subsequent Procedures PDP WG - Thursday, 12 September 2019 at 20:00 UTC</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear all,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Please find below the proposed agenda for the call on
<b>Thursday, 12 September 2019</b> at <span style="color:red">20:00 UTC (*NOTE NEW TIME*)
</span>for 90 minutes:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">1. Welcome and Updates to Statements of Interest</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">2. Review of summary documents:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">a. Role of Application Comment -- See:
</span><a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1Q6-5FDxsCvSA-5F3B7ArncO2U4tWNY3vH7Wi4nINrouR4AI_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=mBQzlSaM6eYCHFBU-v48zs-QSrjHB0aWmHuE4X4drzI&m=BIYavaVawWezh5IiC3mAez1ohGpveWKfqIzKanqbS2E&s=ypI2u5-nlNc8jzRw7oVlJZlFmhBvh-8vb-F0GYJ1zxs&e="><span style="font-size:11.0pt">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q6_DxsCvSA_3B7ArncO2U4tWNY3vH7Wi4nINrouR4AI/edit?usp=sharing</span>
[docs.google.com]</a><span style="font-size:11.0pt">, page 51, Outstanding Items</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">b. Name Collisions -- See: </span>
<a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1Q6-5FDxsCvSA-5F3B7ArncO2U4tWNY3vH7Wi4nINrouR4AI_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=mBQzlSaM6eYCHFBU-v48zs-QSrjHB0aWmHuE4X4drzI&m=BIYavaVawWezh5IiC3mAez1ohGpveWKfqIzKanqbS2E&s=ypI2u5-nlNc8jzRw7oVlJZlFmhBvh-8vb-F0GYJ1zxs&e="><span style="font-size:11.0pt">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q6_DxsCvSA_3B7ArncO2U4tWNY3vH7Wi4nINrouR4AI/edit?usp=sharing</span>
[docs.google.com]</a><span style="font-size:11.0pt">, page 55</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">c. Objections (time permitting) – See:
</span><a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1BkRn9nYeBNjyx2mTw-2D3nIDn22jTumWd4w1PZR-2DKNrPs_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=mBQzlSaM6eYCHFBU-v48zs-QSrjHB0aWmHuE4X4drzI&m=BIYavaVawWezh5IiC3mAez1ohGpveWKfqIzKanqbS2E&s=K5XtSyijG8sCNV4lY7cnMLUnaBtsU1tNNuOv7OA66Ko&e="><span style="font-size:11.0pt">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BkRn9nYeBNjyx2mTw-3nIDn22jTumWd4w1PZR-KNrPs/edit?usp=sharing</span>
[docs.google.com]</a><span style="font-size:11.0pt">, page 2 </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">3. AOB</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">If you need a dial out or would like to submit an apology, please email
</span><a href="mailto:gnso-secs@icann.org"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">gnso-secs@icann.org</span></a><span style="font-size:11.0pt">.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Kind regards,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-autospace:none"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Julie</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-autospace:none"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Julie Hedlund, Policy Director</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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