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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Attached is my feedback on package 4.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Thanks<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Jim Prendergast<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">The Galway Strategy Group<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">+1 202-285-3699<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Gnso-newgtld-wg <gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Emily Barabas<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, June 3, 2020 6:13 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-newgtld-wg] REMINDER: Deadline 4 June - Comments on Revised Draft Recommendations - Package 4<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear all,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">As a reminder, the deadline for “can’t live with” input on package 4 is tomorrow,
<b><span style="color:black">4 </span>June</b><b><span style="color:black"> at<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>23:59 UTC</span><span style="color:black">.
</span></b><span style="color:black">Details are below.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Emily<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:black">From: </span></b><span style="color:black">Emily Barabas <<a href="mailto:emily.barabas@icann.org">emily.barabas@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, 28 May 2020 at 19:36<br>
<b>To: </b>"<a href="mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org">gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org">gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Deadline 4 June - Comments on Revised Draft Recommendations - Package 4<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Dear all,<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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The<span style="color:black"> leadership team is releasing the </span>fourth<span style="color:black"> set of revised draft recommendations for your review.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="color:black;mso-list:l1 level1 lfo1">There are <b><span style="color:windowtext">7</span></b><span class="apple-converted-space"><b> </b></span><b>topics<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>in<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>package<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></b><b><span style="color:windowtext">4</span></b><b> here,
 beginning on page </b><b><span style="color:windowtext">43</span></b><b>:<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1Hh8Wj3IwXvi91Am1k4Zoooct2zmPOmVe1pLmjQLuQuo_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwMGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=UAy6fqdE7uFkRCc7uzN4yui8bwTtqofadZHiQEIO1vw&m=uXGaPUSoFhKWmaFqsQ67trhkTSK9SeAw4GTGqGFtE_M&s=qX4m7Ii-oWrFm5sEB9ubA8stVlLr282zSv9_TKjy4wQ&e=">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hh8Wj3IwXvi91Am1k4Zoooct2zmPOmVe1pLmjQLuQuo/edit?usp=sharing
 [docs.google.com]</a></b><o:p></o:p></li></ol>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:black">2.</span>3<span style="color:black">
</span>Role of Application Comment (last discussed <a href="https://community.icann.org/display/NGSPP/2020-02-25+New+gTLD+Subsequent+Procedures+PDP">
25 Feb</a>)<o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]>2.7.2 Registrant Protections (last discussed <a href="https://community.icann.org/display/NGSPP/2020-03-02+New+gTLD+Subsequent+Procedures+PDP">
2 Mar</a>)<o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:black">2.7.4 String Similarity Evaluation
</span>(last discussed <a href="https://community.icann.org/display/NGSPP/2020-03-30+New+gTLD+Subsequent+Procedures+PDP">
30 Mar</a>)<o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:black">2.7.5 Internationalized Domain Names
</span>(last discussed <a href="https://community.icann.org/display/NGSPP/2020-04-28+New+gTLD+Subsequent+Procedures+PDP">
28 Apr</a>)<o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:black">2.7.6 Security and Stability
</span>(last discussed <a href="https://community.icann.org/display/NGSPP/2020-04-28+New+gTLD+Subsequent+Procedures+PDP">
28 Apr</a>)<o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:12.0pt">2.7.7 </span>Applicant Reviews: Technical/Operational, Financial and Registry Services (last discussed
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:black">2.7.8 Name Collisions </span>
(last discussed <a href="https://community.icann.org/display/NGSPP/2020-04-30+New+gTLD+Subsequent+Procedures+PDP">
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<p class="MsoNormal">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
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