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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:#1F497D">On Package 6, please see below:<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:#1F497D">1. re 2.6.1 re “Application Queuing”,</span></b><span style="color:#1F497D"> the language shown below should be modified because the previous section is drafted as “more than 125” and the section below is
drafted as “less than 125”. Language should be revised does not cover what happens if you get exactly 125 IDN applications:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p style="mso-margin-top-alt:0in;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:0in;margin-left:1.0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l2 level2 lfo5;vertical-align:baseline">
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">If there are (</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:red">delete “less than”)
</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">125
</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:red">or fewer
</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">applications for IDN strings that elect to participate in the prioritization draw, then all such applications shall be assigned priority numbersprocessed in the first batch prior
to any non-IDN application.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;vertical-align:baseline"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></b></p>
<p style="margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;vertical-align:baseline"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">2. Section 2.8.1 – Objections<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
<p style="margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">I don’t understand why we would remove affirmations of Recommendation 2 and Recommendation 3 from this section. The
fact that these Affirmations are affirmed elsewhere in the report does not change their relevance in relation to the subject of Objections. Please clarify whether these Affirmations are “in” or “out.” They don’t appear to be deleted but there are comments
on the side saying they should be.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p style="margin:0in;margin-bottom:.0001pt;vertical-align:baseline"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Recommendation xx (rationale 3) Throughout this rationale, the word, “formal” has been inserted in front of the word,
“objection”. What is the meaning/need for the insertion of “formal” before “objection”? Is there a thought that there are “informal” objection processes? This language also appears in Rationale 6 and there are NUMEROUS insertions of this reference in the
Section on Deliberations. Is there some intended effect here with respect to Subsection d. which specifies that a change in Registry Voluntary Commitments that is made in response to a “formal objection” invokes an application change process? Is the idea
that if there are RVCs that are agreed OUTSIDE the “formal objection” process (i.e. via an “informal” objection), those RVCs are somehow NOT subject to an application change process and related public comment? I thought we had established that all new RVCs
need to be subject to an application change process and public comment.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="color:#1F497D">3. Section 2.9.1 Community Applications – Subsection c.</span></b><span style="color:#1F497D"> “New issues raised in deliberations since publication of the Initial Report, if applicable.”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Thanks for deleting the reference to the conclusion that the IRT should be the body that determines any needed changes to the CPE Guidelines. However, what was discussed when the “can’t live with” comments were
reviewed is that there is a need to specify that the WG is seeking public comment on the CPE Guidelines. We should be specifying at this point in the text that we are seeking that comment and we should provide the link at this same point in the text so that
we call attention to the request for public comment on the CPE Guidelines (but not the scoring.)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Thank you,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Anne<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> Gnso-newgtld-wg <gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Emily Barabas<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, July 10, 2020 10:44 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-newgtld-wg] Deadline Wed 15 July - "Can't Live With" Review of Package 7 and Final Check on Revised Package 6<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><strong><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif;color:black">[EXTERNAL]</span></strong><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:"Helvetica",sans-serif;color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear all,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">The following are now available for your review in the <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hh8Wj3IwXvi91Am1k4Zoooct2zmPOmVe1pLmjQLuQuo/edit?usp=sharing%20%5bdocs.google.com%5d">
production document</a>. The <b>deadline </b>for comments is<b> Wednesday 15 July at 23:59 UTC</b>.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<b>Package 7</b> sections of the Report are now ready for <b>“Can’t Live With”</b> review (<span style="color:black">beginning on
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hh8Wj3IwXvi91Am1k4Zoooct2zmPOmVe1pLmjQLuQuo/edit">
page 148</a>)<b>:</b></span> <o:p></o:p></li></ol>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1.0in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l3 level2 lfo3">
<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol;color:black"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:black">Please limit comments to items in the revised sections that you absolutely “cannot live with.” If there is text that you cannot accept, please fill out the attached form and send it to the WG by email. Please
do not provide your input in any other format.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol;color:black"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:black">Package 7 includes two report sections:</span><span style="color:black">
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol;color:black"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><u><span style="color:black">2.5.4 Applicant Support</span></u><span style="color:black"> (last discussed on
<a href="https://community.icann.org/display/NGSPP/2020-06-11+New+gTLD+Subsequent+Procedures+PDP">
11 June</a>) - </span><span style="color:black">For </span><span style="color:black">this section</span><span style="color:black">,
<b>please limit “Can’t Live With” comments to the new text in the section</b>, which is displayed in black. The text in grey has already gone through “Can’t Live With” review</span><span style="color:black"> as part of an earlier package.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1.5in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l3 level3 lfo3">
<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol;color:black"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><u><span style="color:black">2.3.2 Registry Voluntary Commitments (RVCs) / Public Interest Commitments (PICs)</span></u><span style="color:black"> (last discussed on
<a href="https://community.icann.org/display/NGSPP/2020-06-18+New+gTLD+Subsequent+Procedures+PDP">
18 June</a>)</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol;color:black"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:black">Comments will be tracked
<a href="https://community.icann.org/x/JDKJBw">here</a></span><span style="color:black">.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:1.0in"><span style="color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<b>Package 6</b> revisions of the report, now ready for a <b>final check</b> (beginning on
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hh8Wj3IwXvi91Am1k4Zoooct2zmPOmVe1pLmjQLuQuo/edit">
page 118</a>): <o:p></o:p></li></ol>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:1.0in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l3 level2 lfo3">
<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol;color:black"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:black">Please limit feedback to
</span><span style="color:black">errors in the edits, for example a revision that you believe does not accurately reflect the outcome of discussions about a “Can’t Live With” item</span><span style="color:black">.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:1.0in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l3 level2 lfo3">
<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol;color:black"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:black">Please send this type of feedback to the mailing list. Typo corrections can be sent directly to staff.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;margin-left:1.0in;text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l3 level2 lfo3">
<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol;color:black"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:black">For package 6 sections, </span>
<u><span style="color:black">please do not raise new issues, introduce new “Can’t Live With” items, or re-open deliberations</span></u><u><span style="color:black">.</span></u><span style="color:black"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol;color:black"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="color:black">A high-level summary of the “Can’t Live With” input<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>received<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>is available<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://community.icann.org/display/NGSPP/g.+Draft+Final+Report">here</a>.
And a detailed log<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span></span><span style="color:black">with</span><span class="apple-converted-space"><span style="color:black"> </span></span><span style="color:black">the<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>outcomes
from the WG’s consideration of that<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span>input is available<span class="apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1blgQjzh_vR7WQ1utsqBnHDb8_b2DD7IDQu-bcJVsmTQ/edit?usp=sharing">here</a>.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Emily<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-autospace:none"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Emily Barabas<b><o:p></o:p></b></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-autospace:none"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Policy Manager, GNSO Policy Development Support<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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