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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Hi Jeff,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Just a quick question on page 48 where it states “…to enforce a pre-arranged contractual remedy, which could include sanctions and/or termination of the Registry Agreement.”
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I don’t recall any discussion of the WG on what remedies there should be for alleged breaches of PICs and RVCs, but this language seems to me to be endorsing sanctions and terminations. Even so, it refers back
to “pre-arranged” so maybe that is what you meant, but it is not clear who would pre-arrange those. Can you explain what this language is meant to do? If it is meant to endorse those particular remedies, I don’t think that actually reflects any work we did
and I think that language should be deleted from the draft. Thanks!<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Paul<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> Gnso-newgtld-wg [mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Julie Hedlund<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, December 15, 2020 3:52 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org; Kathy Kleiman <kathy@kathykleiman.com><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-newgtld-wg] FW: Review Revised Final Report - DUE Thursday 17 December at 18:00 UTC<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Resending per request.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Gnso-newgtld-wg <<a href="mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of Emily Barabas
<<a href="mailto:emily.barabas@icann.org">emily.barabas@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, December 15, 2020 at 10:06 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>"<a href="mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org">gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org">gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Gnso-newgtld-wg] Review Revised Final Report - DUE Thursday 17 December at 18:00 UTC<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Dear WG Members,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Please see for review the attached revised draft Final Report in Word and PDF, along with the Log of Final Report Action Items and Edits. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">The redlines in the attached revised draft Final Report reflect the edits made by leadership and support staff on the following:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"><b><span style="color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Actions agreed to by the WG during the WG meeting</span></b><span style="color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB"> held</span><span style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">
on 14 December<span style="color:black"> 2020, as noted in the Log with page references. These actions also were captured during
</span>the<span style="color:black"> meeting and circulated to the WG. </span></span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l1 level1 lfo3"><span style="mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Proposed edits to Topic 23: Closed Generics and Topic 9: Registry Voluntary Commitments / Public Interest Commitments based on recent Working Group discussions.
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<p class="MsoNormal">The redlines do not include any edits based on Topical Email 10, because the deadline for comments on this email has not yet passed. If any edits are made, they will be included in the next redline.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span style="color:black;mso-fareast-language:EN-GB">Note: In reviewing the revised draft Final Report WG members are requested to limit their review to the redlines in the revised draft Final Report, and to focus only on <u>errors
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<p class="MsoNormal">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
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