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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Hi Paul,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US">The following will be added as a footnote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US">"The Working Group does not endorse any particular pre-arranged contractual remedy, but rather states the range of potential remedies. The term "pre-arranged" is used to ensure that
the possible remedies are documented in the appropriate contract. For example, in a dispute between two parties that is resolved by an RVC, the settlement agreement would contain which dispute provider would hear the dispute, would require that the parties
be bound by the decision, and would set forth the potential remedies that ICANN could impose upon the Registry if the dispute provider found a violation. ICANN will not have to create a remedy for the violation, but rather it will be able to select from a
list of options provided in the contract."<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Emily<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Gnso-newgtld-wg <gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of "McGrady, Paul D." <PMcGrady@taftlaw.com><br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, 17 December 2020 at 17:56<br>
<b>To: </b>Jeff Neuman <jeff@jjnsolutions.com>, Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@icann.org>, "gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org" <gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org>, Kathy Kleiman <kathy@kathykleiman.com><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-newgtld-wg] FW: Review Revised Final Report - DUE Thursday 17 December at 18:00 UTC<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Thanks Jeff. I think simply including what you wrote below “The intention…contractual options.” in the deliberation section or a footnote would do the trick.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Best,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Paul</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> Jeff Neuman [mailto:jeff@jjnsolutions.com] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, December 17, 2020 8:18 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> McGrady, Paul D. <PMcGrady@taftlaw.com>; Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@icann.org>; gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org; Kathy Kleiman <kathy@kathykleiman.com><br>
<b>Subject:</b> RE: [Gnso-newgtld-wg] FW: Review Revised Final Report - DUE Thursday 17 December at 18:00 UTC<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Paul,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The intention was not to endorse any particular remedies, but rather to state the range of potential remedies. And be pre-arranged, the intention there was to make sure that whatever the remedies were, that the possibilities were documented
in the appropriate contract. So, in a dispute between 2 parties that is resolved by an RVC, the settlement agreement would contain which dispute provider would hear the dispute, would require that the parties be bound by the decision , and would set forth
the potential remedies that ICANN could impose upon the Registry if the dispute provider found a violation. This way ICANN was not making up what the remedy would be, but rather selecting from the contractual options.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">If you think there is a better way to word that, please suggest some language.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I hope that makes sense.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Jeff<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> Gnso-newgtld-wg <<a href="mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>>
<b>On Behalf Of </b>McGrady, Paul D.<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, December 16, 2020 3:39 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Julie Hedlund <<a href="mailto:julie.hedlund@icann.org">julie.hedlund@icann.org</a>>;
<a href="mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org">gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org</a>; Kathy Kleiman <<a href="mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com">kathy@kathykleiman.com</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-newgtld-wg] FW: Review Revised Final Report - DUE Thursday 17 December at 18:00 UTC<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Hi Jeff,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Just a quick question on page 48 where it states “…to enforce a pre-arranged contractual remedy, which could include sanctions and/or termination of the Registry Agreement.”
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I don’t recall any discussion of the WG on what remedies there should be for alleged breaches of PICs and RVCs, but this language seems to me to be endorsing sanctions and terminations. Even so, it refers back
to “pre-arranged” so maybe that is what you meant, but it is not clear who would pre-arrange those. Can you explain what this language is meant to do? If it is meant to endorse those particular remedies, I don’t think that actually reflects any work we did
and I think that language should be deleted from the draft. Thanks!</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Best,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Paul</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b>From:</b> Gnso-newgtld-wg [<a href="mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Julie Hedlund<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, December 15, 2020 3:52 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org">gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org</a>; Kathy Kleiman <<a href="mailto:kathy@kathykleiman.com">kathy@kathykleiman.com</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-newgtld-wg] FW: Review Revised Final Report - DUE Thursday 17 December at 18:00 UTC<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Resending per request.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">From: </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;color:black">Gnso-newgtld-wg <<a href="mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-newgtld-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of Emily Barabas
<<a href="mailto:emily.barabas@icann.org">emily.barabas@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Tuesday, December 15, 2020 at 10:06 AM<br>
<b>To: </b>"<a href="mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org">gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org">gnso-newgtld-wg@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[Gnso-newgtld-wg] Review Revised Final Report - DUE Thursday 17 December at 18:00 UTC</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Dear WG Members,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Please see for review the attached revised draft Final Report in Word and PDF, along with the Log of Final Report Action Items and Edits. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">The redlines in the attached revised draft Final Report reflect the edits made by leadership and support staff on the following:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3"><b><span style="color:black">Actions agreed to by the WG during the WG meeting</span></b><span style="color:black"> held</span> on 14 December<span style="color:black"> 2020, as noted in the Log with page
references. These actions also were captured during </span>the<span style="color:black"> meeting and circulated to the WG.
</span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3">Proposed edits to Topic 23: Closed Generics and Topic 9: Registry Voluntary Commitments / Public Interest Commitments based on recent Working Group discussions.
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<p class="MsoNormal">The redlines do not include any edits based on Topical Email 10, because the deadline for comments on this email has not yet passed. If any edits are made, they will be included in the next redline.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><i><span style="color:black">Note: In reviewing the revised draft Final Report WG members are requested to limit their review to the redlines in the revised draft Final Report, and to focus only on <u>errors and/or omissions</u>, if
any. If any errors/omissions are noted please send them to the <u>WG email distribution list, referencing the page number and text, respectively</u>.</span></i></b><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:black">Please submit comments to the list, if any, not later than </span><b><i><u>Thursday 17<span style="color:black"> December</span> at 18:00 UTC<span style="color:black">.</span></u></i></b><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Kind regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Emily<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial",sans-serif;color:black">Emily Barabas</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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