[Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Last call for Issue-Spotting on Part 2 plus New Comments to Review (Parts 3 & 4)

[Mary Wong]

Dear WG members,

This is a last call for any issues that you would like to bring to the WG¹s
attention concerning Part 2 of the WG Public Comment Review Tool (first
circulated on 10 August), similar to the approach we adopted for
issue-spotting in Part 1. Please send these to the email list for
consideration at the next WG call as soon as you can, but no later than
Monday (a day before the call) if at all possible.

Please also find attached two documents -

(1) Part 3 of the WG Public Comment Review Tool, containing excerpts from
public comments sent directly to the public comment forum and responses to
the online questions template that cover all the WG's remaining preliminary
recommendations aside from those being analyzed by the Sub Teams (i.e.
Preliminary Recommendations #16-20); and

(2) Part 4 of the WG Public Comment Review Tool, containing those comments
and suggestions made by commenters and template responders that were not
specifically framed as responses to particular WG recommendations. Part 4
also contains two additional elements, viz. a list of the types of concerns
raised by signatories to the Save Domain Privacy petition (much of which is
also reflected in many of the general comments received in the public
comment forum), and a list of commenters who supported or endorsed other
commenters¹ submissions. While this Part 4 may be of particular usefulness
to Sub Team 4, we attach it here to facilitate the WG's review of all the
remaining comments not otherwise summarized in other parts of the Tool.

These two documents are the last in the series of documents that comprise
the WG¹s Public Comment Review Tool for our Initial Report, not including
the additional documents that were prepared for the various Sub Teams that
will also form part of the record for the Final Report. I should point out
that some of the comments in these two documents include some strong
language, but we have chosen to leave them in as they were sent in the same
way as comments that used less robust language; I hope that is all right.

Cheers
Mary

Mary Wong
Senior Policy Director
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
Telephone: +1 603 574 4889
Email: mary.wong at icann.org







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