[Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Additional Documents for Dublin F2F meeting

[Mary Wong]

Dear WG members,

Please find attached the following documents: (1) The list of issues
identified in Parts 1 through 3 of the WG¹s Public Comment Review Tool for
further WG discussion, with the co-chairs¹ proposed response to each issue;
(2) A summary of the recommendations from Sub Team 4; and (3) An updated Sub
Team 4 report including the recommendations summarized in (2), in ³redlined²
format to show the changes from the version last circulated to the WG.

Please note that the Sub Team 4 documents have not yet been discussed or
reviewed by all the Sub Team members, and as such are subject to further
discussion and change. In relation to the various categories of comments it
reviewed, the Sub Team has not yet finalized its full recommendations for
Categories F and G, although certain recommendations from those two
categories that seem to have Sub Team support have been included in the
summary document.

With the addition of these three documents to the latest version of the
Illustrative Disclosure Framework (last circulated for the WG meeting on 6
October) and the draft Final Report (circulated on 8 October), the full set
of documents for discussion at the WG face to face meeting this Friday has
now been distributed.

For your convenience, we have created a wiki page for the upcoming
face-to-face meeting that sets out the draft schedule and attaches all these
documents keyed to their respective sessions:
https://community.icann.org/x/uaxYAw.

Thanks, everyone; see you in Dublin, either in person or virtually!

Mary

Mary Wong
Senior Policy Director
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
Telephone: +1 603 574 4889
Email: mary.wong at icann.org


From:  Mary Wong <mary.wong at icann.org>
Date:  Thursday, October 8, 2015 at 23:12
To:  "gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg at icann.org" <gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg at icann.org>
Subject:  For your review and further WG discussion - Draft Final Report

> Dear WG members,
> 
> Please find attached a marked-up (or ³redlined²) version of the first draft of
> our proposed Final Report as well as a clean version of the same (for easier
> reading). The mark-up shows the proposed changes from the published version of
> our Initial Report. Please note that this draft has not yet been seen or
> reviewed by the WG chairs; however, as discussed on the WG call this past
> Tuesday, the plan is to set aside some time during the face-to-face meeting
> next Friday in Dublin to start discussing the report. To that end staff has
> been authorized to update the Initial Report and circulate this draft Final
> Report.
> 
> Here are some additional notes for your convenient reference:
> 
> (1) The majority of the textual changes, not surprisingly, are in the
> Executive Summary and to some extent Section 6 (to which a brief description
> of how the WG has handled the public comments has been added) and Section 7
> (in relation to Category C, as regards commercial activity and online
> financial transactions). Other changes have generally been more minor, and
> focus largely on updating the Initial Report in terms e.g. of removing
> references to preliminary recommendations and open issues.
> 
> (2) We have NOT added in a revised Illustrative Disclosure Framework or any
> new general recommendations, pending the outcome of the WG¹s discussions of
> the work from Sub Teams 3 and 4.
> 
> (3) Throughout the document ­ but most especially in the Executive Summary ­
> we have inserted comments and questions that remain to be addressed by the WG,
> whether at the upcoming face-to-face meeting in Dublin, to take into account
> staff operational feedback, or on a post-Dublin call. As you review the
> revisions, please be sure to pay attention to these comments and questions.
> 
> (4) The outcome of the required formal Consensus Call may well change some of
> the assumed conclusions, and therefore this is only a draft of a Final Report
> that we anticipate will likely see some revisions as the WG proceeds with its
> deliberations. As such, please forgive any gaps and other typographical or
> formatting errors. These will of course all be corrected in the final version.
> 
> We hope that providing you with even a fairly rough draft of the proposed
> Final Report at this time will enable you to review the document as well as
> the remaining issues and questions for WG discussion before we meet again next
> Friday in Dublin. Remote participation details for the Dublin face-to-face
> meeting will be sent around to everyone shortly.
> 
> Thanks and cheers
> Mary
> 
> Mary Wong
> Senior Policy Director
> Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
> Telephone: +1 603 574 4889
> Email: mary.wong at icann.org
> 
> 


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