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    I can't support the amended language for obvious reasons. The draft
    proposed here is clearly drafted to favor one position. If we want
    to get anywere, we need a more balanced approach. <br>
    <br>
    How about this:<br>
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      1)<br>
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    <p class="western" style="margin-bottom: 0cm"><i><font
          face="Calibri, serif">As
          noted above, the WG appears to unanimously agree that the mere
          fact
          of a domain being registered as a commercial entity, or
          conducting
          commercial activity in other spheres, should not prevent the
          use of
          p/p domain name registration services.&nbsp;</font></i>
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    <i>
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    <p class="western" style="margin-bottom: 0cm"> </p>
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    <p class="western" style="margin-bottom: 0cm"><i><font
          face="Calibri, serif">A number of WG members, representing
          their SO/AC/C, noted
          that in the &#8220;offline world&#8221; businesses often are required to
          register with the relevant authority as well as disclose
          details
          about their identity and location. </font></i><i><font
          face="Calibri, serif">These members
          suggested that domains used for commercial purposes should be
          ineligible for privacy and proxy
          registrations</font></i><i><font face="Calibri, serif">.
          However, a number of other </font></i><i><font face="Calibri,
          serif"><font face="Calibri, serif">WG members, also
            representing their SO/AC/C, </font>noted that where similar
          legal requirements already exist for the "online world", such
          disclosure </font></i><i><font face="Calibri, serif">is </font></i><i><font
          face="Calibri, serif">usually required to be contained under a
          prominent link on the web site as in the </font></i><i><font
          face="Calibri, serif">translation from the "offline world" to
          the "online world" legislators usually focussed on the content
          available under the domain name, not the domain name
          registration itself. Further, these members argue that there
          may be valid reasons why domain name registrants using their
          domain names for commercial purposes may legitimately need the
          availability of such services.<br>
        </font></i></p>
    <p class="western" style="margin-bottom: 0cm"><i><font
          face="Calibri, serif">There is further divergence within the
          WG between those members expressing the view
          that it is both necessary and practical to distinguish </font></i><i><font
          face="Calibri, serif"> in the whois </font></i><i><font
          face="Calibri, serif">between
          domains used for a commercial purpose and those domains that
          are not used for a noncommercial purpose, and those members that
          expressed the view that it is neither practical nor necessary
          to require p/p service providers to make that distinction. <br>
        </font></i></p>
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    Volker<br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Am 22.05.2014 16:55, schrieb Libby
      Baney:<br>
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      <div dir="ltr">All -- as evidenced on last week's call, there is
        concern about the language in the draft conclusion for Cat C
        threshold question. Per the request for specific edits, attached
        are redlined edits to the template submitted for the group's
        consideration by FWD Strategies Int'l, LegitScript, MarkMonitor
        and DomainTools. We look forward to your comments and further
        discussion if needed.&nbsp;
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        <div>Thanks,</div>
        <div>Libby<br>
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          <div><a moz-do-not-send="true"
              href="http://www.FWDstrategies.com">www.FWDstrategies.com</a></div>
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                <div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, May 21, 2014 at 5:42
                  AM, Marika Konings <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a
                      moz-do-not-send="true"
                      href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
                      target="_blank">marika.konings@icann.org</a>&gt;</span>
                  wrote:<br>
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                      <div style="color:rgb(0,0,0)">Following on from
                        Steve's emails, please find attached the updated
                        templates for C3 and D1, incorporating the notes
                        from the meeting (if I've missed anything,
                        please share your comments / edits with the
                        mailing list). To re-emphasise the action items
                        from the meeting:</div>
                      <ol>
                        <li><font color="#ff0000">Please provide your
                            input on the draft preliminary conclusion
                            for C threshold, C1 and C2 as circulated by
                            Don. Several of you suggested removing the
                            word 'overwhelming' from the draft. Are
                            there any other proposed edits?</font></li>
                        <li style="color:rgb(0,0,0)">Please provide your
                          input on question C3, especially if you are of
                          the view that there should be differences in
                          the data fields displayed for commercial
                          entity and natural person P/P registrations.</li>
                        <li style="color:rgb(0,0,0)">Please provide your
                          input on question D1, especially whether it
                          would be desirable to have a public registry
                          of P/P services contact information and a
                          requirement to respond to enquiries both from
                          P/P customers as well as those looking to
                          contact P/P customers. Input on what would
                          qualify as a 'response' and a possible
                          timeframe for responses are also encouraged.&nbsp;</li>
                        <li style="color:rgb(0,0,0)">Kathy and James
                          will provide an update at the next meeting on
                          issues surrounding transfers between
                          registrars of P/P registrations and possible
                          questions the WG may want to address in this
                          context.</li>
                      </ol>
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                      </div>
                      <div style="color:rgb(0,0,0)">Best regards,</div>
                      <div style="color:rgb(0,0,0)"><br>
                      </div>
                      <div style="color:rgb(0,0,0)">Marika</div>
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                          <span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span>
                          &lt;Metalitz&gt;, Steven &lt;<a
                            moz-do-not-send="true"
                            href="mailto:met@msk.com" target="_blank">met@msk.com</a>&gt;<br>
                          <span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span>
                          Tuesday 20 May 2014 18:06<br>
                          <span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span>
                          Marika Konings &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                            href="mailto:marika.konings@icann.org"
                            target="_blank">marika.konings@icann.org</a>&gt;,
                          "<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                            href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org"
                            target="_blank">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>"
                          &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                            href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org"
                            target="_blank">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>&gt;<br>
                          <span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span>
                          PPSAI WG -- questions for list <br>
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                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(31,73,125)">Thanks
                                      to all participants on today&#8217;s
                                      call.&nbsp; Following up on requests
                                      made on the call ----</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(31,73,125)">&nbsp;</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(31,73,125)">Regarding
                                      Don&#8217;s draft preliminary text
                                      regarding questions C(threshold),
                                      C 1 and C2, please circulate your
                                      comments and (especially
                                      welcomed!) proposed edits.&nbsp; Don&#8217;s
                                      draft is re-attached here for
                                      ready reference. </span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(31,73,125)">&nbsp;</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal">
                                    <span
style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(31,73,125)">Regarding
                                      question C.3:&nbsp; If the following
                                      applies to you, please respond on
                                      the list:
                                    </span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(31,73,125)">&nbsp;</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal">IF you believe
                                    that privacy/proxy services ought to
                                    be open to commercial entities under
                                    some circumstances, THEN should
                                    there be a difference in the data
                                    displayed for such registrations
                                    (vs. what is displayed for p/p
                                    registrations by natural persons)?&nbsp;
                                    If the answer is YES, please specify
                                    the differences.&nbsp;&nbsp; </p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal">For myself I will
                                    say that my answer is NO, but I hope
                                    that any YES people will step
                                    forward on the list.&nbsp;
                                  </p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal">Thanks!</p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal">Steve Metalitz,
                                    vice chair </p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal">
                                    &nbsp;</p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(31,73,125)">&nbsp;</span></p>
                                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:rgb(31,73,125)">&nbsp;</span></p>
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                                      <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
                                            style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:10pt;font-family:Tahoma,sans-serif"> <a
                                            moz-do-not-send="true"
                                            href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org"
                                            target="_blank">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>
                                          [<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                                            href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org"
                                            target="_blank">mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
                                          <b>On Behalf Of </b>Marika
                                          Konings<br>
                                          <b>Sent:</b> Monday, May 19,
                                          2014 3:39 PM<br>
                                          <b>To:</b> <a
                                            moz-do-not-send="true"
                                            href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org"
                                            target="_blank">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a><br>
                                          <b>Subject:</b>
                                          [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Proposed
                                          Agenda - PPSAI WG Meeting</span></p>
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                                  <p class="MsoNormal">&nbsp;</p>
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                                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                        style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:black">Dear
                                        All,</span></p>
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                                        <p class="MsoNormal">
                                          <span
                                            style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:black">&nbsp;</span></p>
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                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                            style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:black">Please
                                            find below the proposed
                                            agenda for tomorrow's PPSAI
                                            WG Meeting.</span></p>
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                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                            style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:black">&nbsp;</span></p>
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                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                            style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:black">Best
                                            regards,</span></p>
                                      </div>
                                      <div>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                            style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:black">&nbsp;</span></p>
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                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                            style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:black">Marika</span></p>
                                      </div>
                                      <div>
                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                                            style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:black">&nbsp;</span></p>
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                                        <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
                                              style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:black">Proposed
                                              Agenda &#8211; PPSAI WG Meeting
                                              &#8211; 20 May 2014</span></b><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif;color:black"></span></p>
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                                              style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Roll
                                              Call / SOI</span></li>
                                          <li class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="color:black">
                                            <span
                                              style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Review
                                              proposed preliminary
                                              conclusion for threshold
                                              question, C1 and C2 (as
                                              circulated by Don)</span></li>
                                          <li class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="color:black">
                                            <span
                                              style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Review
                                              C3 &#8211; is additional
                                              response/discussion needed
                                              in light of item 2? (see
                                              template attached)</span></li>
                                          <li class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="color:black">
                                            <span
                                              style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Continue
                                              deliberations on D1 (see
                                              updated template attached)</span></li>
                                          <li class="MsoNormal"
                                            style="color:black"><span
                                              style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:Calibri,sans-serif">Next
                                              steps / confirm next
                                              meeting</span></li>
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                  <font face="trebuchet ms, sans-serif">Libby Baney, JD</font>
                  <div><font face="trebuchet ms, sans-serif">President</font></div>
                  <div><font face="trebuchet ms, sans-serif">FWD
                      Strategies International</font></div>
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                  <div><font face="trebuchet ms, sans-serif">P:
                      202-499-2296</font></div>
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