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    Thank you Steve for providing a basis for discussion, however I felt
    the need for certain changes. Please review the enclosed revised
    draft for a more balanced proposal. This draft:<br>
    - removes the requirement of service providers to make legal
    determinations they are not qualified for<br>
    - ensures that only the minimum of data required for the complainant
    to assess further steps is required to be disclosed, but more may be
    at the choice of the provider<br>
    - reduces the risk of unsubstantiated or erroneous claims by
    including an obligation to legally certify (and be sued if wrong)
    all statements<br>
    <br>
    We might also want to think about an indemnification requirement.<br>
    <br>
    Anyway, nothing set in stone, just food for though and further
    debate.<br>
    <br>
    Best,<br>
    <br>
    volker<br>
    <br>
    <br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Am 08.10.2014 16:52, schrieb Metalitz,
      Steven:<br>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thanks
            Mary, this should be quite helpful.
            <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">As
            further material for our discussion, and as mentioned on our
            call yesterday, I attach a discussion draft for p/p
            accreditation policy on Disclose, put forward on behalf of a
            number of the IPC participants in the WG. &nbsp;We hope this
            helps move the discussion forward in LA.&nbsp;
            <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Steve
            Metalitz<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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                <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>
                [<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
                <b>On Behalf Of </b>Mary Wong<br>
                <b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, October 07, 2014 2:06 PM<br>
                <b>To:</b> PPSAI WG<br>
                <b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Wiki page for 10
                October - including reading materials<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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                  all,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">We
                  have created a wiki page for the upcoming 10 October
                  facilitated face to face session in Los Angeles:
                  <a moz-do-not-send="true"
                    href="https://community.icann.org/x/AiHxAg">https://community.icann.org/x/AiHxAg</a>.
                  You&#8217;ll find the latest agenda as well as the
                  preparatory documents/materials, grouped by topic. We
                  hope this single link and compilation will be helpful
                  to you as you prepare for the meeting. Please do not
                  hesitate to let us know if there are additional
                  materials that you think should be included on the
                  page.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Thanks
                  and cheers<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Mary<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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                      Wong<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Senior
                      Policy Director<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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                      Corporation for Assigned Names &amp; Numbers
                      (ICANN)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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                      +1 603 574 4892<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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                        href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org">mary.wong@icann.org</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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