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I think Holly is exactly right. The use of "reveal" to define
"reveal" is a bit confusing. How about a set of edits such as
those [1.3.1 #15]?<br>
Best,<br>
Kathy<br>
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·<span style="font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"">
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means the [DEL: reveal][ADD: sharing] of a
person’s (i.e. the licensee or beneficial owner of a registered
domain name)
identity/contact details to a third party requestor without
Publication in the WHOIS
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<pre wrap="">Folks
Just a quick comment on language in section 1.3.1 - Point 15. the use of the term reveal in the context of ‘publication’ is confusing. This WG is using the term reveal in a quite specific way - i.e., to make known to the party making the query. Publication is, as I understand it, to the public at large. So please, let’s not use the same terms in the same sentence.
For publication - maybe making the information publicly available, or something like that
Holly
On 27 Jan 2015, at 2:26 am, Mary Wong <a class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org"><mary.wong@icann.org></a> wrote:
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