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query.” <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Kathy Kleiman<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, January 27, 2015 9:54 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Updated Draft Reporr (Re: Proposed agenda - PPSAI WG meeting0<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Hi All,<br>
I think Holly is exactly right. The use of "reveal" to define "reveal" is a bit confusing. How about a set of edits such as those [1.3.1 #15]?<br>
Best,<br>
Kathy<br>
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</span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">“Publication” means the [DEL: reveal] [ADD: announcement] of a person’s (i.e. the licensee or beneficial owner of a registered domain name) identity/contact details in the
WHOIS system [ADD: to the public].</span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol"><br>
·</span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:7.0pt"> </span><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">“Disclosure” means the [DEL: reveal][ADD: sharing] of a person’s (i.e. the licensee or beneficial owner of a registered
domain name) identity/contact details to a third party requestor without Publication in the WHOIS system.</span><span lang="EN-GB">
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<pre>Folks<o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre>Just a quick comment on language in section 1.3.1 - Point 15. the use of the term reveal in the context of ‘publication’ is confusing. This WG is using the term reveal in a quite specific way - i.e., to make known to the party making the query. Publication is, as I understand it, to the public at large. So please, let’s not use the same terms in the same sentence.<o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre>For publication - maybe making the information publicly available, or something like that<o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre>Holly<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>On 27 Jan 2015, at 2:26 am, Mary Wong <a href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org"><mary.wong@icann.org></a> wrote:<o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre><DRAFT WG Initial Report - updated 21 Jan 2015.doc><o:p></o:p></pre>
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