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Hi All,<br>
Do I understand correctly that we are putting out a 100+ page report
on a complex subject for review by the ICANN Community - and world
community - *before Buenos Aires*?? That seems awfully tight if we
want substantive comments - and the outreach to participate -- that
a WG presentation/discussion in Buenos Aires would encourage (and
the web presence it would create). We (in the WG) have talked about
these issues a lot - but have others outside our WG followed these
them with so many other things in motion? <br>
<br>
In the Whois Review Team we heard a lot of complaints from
individuals, organizations, data protection and law enforcement
offices that ICANN's proceeding are difficult to follow and even
more difficult to participate in -- in large part because the rapid
comment timeframes are not conducive to global outreach or the
timelines needed to encourage substantive and thoughtful comments
(especially by government entities). We issued a recommendation that
on Whois issues, in particular, we have to do more... <br>
<br>
<b>WHOIS Review Team Final Report</b><b><br>
</b><i>Recommendation 3 - Outreach</i><i><br>
</i>ICANN should ensure that WHOIS policy issues are accompanied by
cross-community outreach, including outreach to the communities
outside of ICANN with a specific interest in the issues, and an
ongoing program for consumer awareness.<br>
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I think we should allow two months to respond -- at a minimum. <br>
Best,<br>
Kathy<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 4/23/2015 6:31 PM, Mary Wong wrote:<br>
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<blockquote cite="mid:D15EEAED.13AC7%25mary.wong@icann.org"
type="cite">
<div>Dear WG members,</div>
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<div>Attached please find: </div>
<div>(1) the updated draft Initial Report for our Working Group,
incorporating all changes and updates as of our call this past
Tuesday, 21 April and retaining all options/wording yet to be
agreed on, marked up from the 29 January 2015 version; </div>
<div>(2) a clean copy of that part of the Executive Summary that
contains all the WG’s preliminary conclusions, open questions
and majority/minority positions (note the markup is fairly
messy, given that significant changes have been made to this
part of the document); and </div>
<div>(3) a clean copy of the illustrative Disclosure Framework for
trademark and copyright-related requests (incorporated into the
Initial Report as Annex E).</div>
<div><br>
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<div>All three documents have also been posted to the WG wiki, and
are accessible at: <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="https://community.icann.org/x/TYsQAw">https://community.icann.org/x/TYsQAw</a>.</div>
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<div>We have tried our best to incorporate all the changes and
updates to date, and have as a result made significant changes
to the Executive Summary from the 29 January document. Other –
consequent – changes are largely contained in Section 7, which
as you know is the more detailed and contextual text explaining
our deliberations and recommendations. Two new Annexes – one for
the illustrative Disclosure Framework and the other for
additional statements (if any) - have also been added. Most of
the other changes to the 29 January version are therefore more
of formatting, typo-correcting, and grammar-related ones.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>As always, please let us know if you spot any errors or
omissions. We look forward to finalizing the draft with everyone
on the WG call next week (28 April).</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Thanks and cheers</div>
<div>Mary</div>
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<div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Mary Wong</font></font></div>
<div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Senior Policy
Director</font></font></div>
<div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Internet
Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)</font></font></div>
<div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Telephone: +1
603 574 4892</font></font></div>
<div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Email:
<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org">mary.wong@icann.org</a></font></font></div>
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