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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:Calibri">Hi All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:Calibri">I think the
Excerpt from
the Executive Summary is very important as it is likely to be
what people read
first – and then they will decide whether or not to jump into
our long report. To that
end, I would like to propose some edits for clarity, fairness
and balance.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:Calibri"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<ol style="margin-top:0in" start="1" type="1">
<li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l2 level1
lfo1;tab-stops:list .5in"><span style="font-family:Calibri">Page
numbers – if we are publishing this as a stand alone
documentary, let’s add page numbers to make reading and
editing references easier.<o:p></o:p></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l2 level1
lfo1;tab-stops:list .5in"><span style="font-family:Calibri">Footnote
1 [as edited by Steve] and as already done in the main Report,
this text should be moved into the main body of the text. It’s
the key to the strange code of brackets that we use in the
Interim Report and everyone should see it… <span
style="mso-spacerun:yes"></span><o:p></o:p></span></li>
<li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-list:l2 level1
lfo1;tab-stops:list .5in"><span style="font-family:Calibri">Section
1.3.3, Specific topics on there is currently no consensus
within the WG, needs a lot of work. The issues we wrote about
long ago, in our initial draft of this Executive Summary, have
been updated and expanded – especially with all the work we
have done on Reveal since then!<o:p></o:p></span></li>
</ol>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:Calibri"><o:p>-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br>
</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:Calibri">Specific
Edits to
1.3.3.<span style="mso-spacerun:yes"> </span>Given all of our
work with Reveal
since this first Executive Summary was first published, I submit
the following
changes to the Executive Summary (and as needed to correspond in
the Interim
Report)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:Calibri"><o:p><br>
</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:Calibri">To opening of
1.3.3. after
“Specific Topics on which there is currently no consensus within
the WG:”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:Calibri"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-family:Wingdings;mso-ascii-font-family:
Calibri;mso-hansi-font-family:Calibri;mso-char-type:symbol;mso-symbol-font-family:
Wingdings"><span
style="mso-char-type:symbol;mso-symbol-font-family:Wingdings">[Add]
</span></span><span style="font-family:Calibri">The WG’s has not
yet reached final preliminary
conclusions on key details of its “Reveal” recommendations (See
Annex E of the
Interim Report). There are many details still under discussion
and for which
the WG has not reached consensus. These include: <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p
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style="font-family:Calibri;mso-fareast-font-family:
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style="mso-list:Ignore">-<span style="font:7.0pt "Times
New Roman"">
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">What
remedies should a Customer be allowed in the event that a Reveal
Request was
falsely made or the data was improperly used (current
recommendations provide
mechanism only for Provider action)? </span><span
style="font-family:Calibri"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p
style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-right:0in;margin-bottom:0in;margin-left:.75in;
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New Roman"">
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">Should
Requestors be allowed to escalate each and every rejection of a
Reveal Request
to a 3<sup>rd</sup> party forum, or should the WG seek to adopt
reasonable
standards and thresholds for such appeals to avoid unnecessary
and potentially
harassing and time-consuming appeals?<span
style="mso-spacerun:yes">
</span>(Note: a Request for Reconsideration is already a part of
the
recommended process the WG has agreed to<span
style="mso-spacerun:yes">
</span>by consensus.)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p
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style="mso-list:Ignore">-<span style="font:7.0pt "Times
New Roman"">
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">What
rights and protections should a Customer be allowed and
encouraged to forth in
her/his/its own defense to provide a reasonable defense for
maintaining
her/his/its privacy, even in the face of a copyright or
trademark infringement
allegation?</span><span style="font-family:Calibri"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p
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style="mso-list:Ignore">-<span style="font:7.0pt "Times
New Roman"">
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">How
can Customers be protected from requests from Law Enforcement
from outside
their country, when the use of their domain name is for legal
purposes in their
own country, but perhaps purposes deemed illegal in other
countries [Note: even
Interpol refuses to act across national lines in matters of
political, military,
religious and racial issues because of the enormous differences
of law. Article
3, Interpol Constitution]</span><span
style="font-family:Calibri"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:Calibri"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:Calibri">Input and
comments would
be helpful on these issues. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:Calibri"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:Calibri">In addition,
[existing text] “[a]</span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">lthough the WG
agreed that the
mere fact that a domain name is registered by a commercial
entity or by anyone
conducting commercial activity should not preclude the use of
P/P services<a style="mso-footnote-id:ftn1" href="#_ftn1"
name="_ftnref1" title=""><span class="MsoFootnoteReference"><span
style="mso-special-character:footnote"><!--[if !supportFootnotes]--><span
class="MsoFootnoteReference"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri;
mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New
Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New
Roman";
mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:EN-US;mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">[1]</span></span><!--[endif]--></span></span></a>,
there was disagreement over whether domain names that are
actively used for
commercial transactions (e.g. the sale or exchange of goods or
services) should
be prohibited from using P/P services. While most WG members did
not believe
such a prohibition is necessary or practical, some members
believed that
registrants of such domain names should not be able to use or
continue using
proxy or privacy services. These members noted that businesses
in the “offline
world” are often required to register with relevant authorities
as well as
disclose details about their identities and locations. They
expressed the view
that it is both necessary and practical to distinguish between
domains used for
a commercial purpose (irrespective of whether the registrant is
actually
registered as a commercial entity anywhere) and those domains
(which may be
operated by commercial entity) that are used for a
non-commercial purpose.”</span><span style="font-family:Calibri"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-pagination:widow-orphan
no-line-numbers"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-pagination:widow-orphan
no-line-numbers"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><i
style="mso-bidi-font-style:normal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Wingdings;mso-ascii-font-family:Calibri;mso-hansi-font-family:Calibri;mso-char-type:symbol;mso-symbol-font-family:Wingdings"><span
style="mso-char-type:symbol;mso-symbol-font-family:Wingdings">[add] </span></span></i></b><span
style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><i
style="mso-bidi-font-style:normal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Wingdings;mso-ascii-font-family:Calibri;mso-hansi-font-family:Calibri;mso-char-type:symbol;mso-symbol-font-family:Wingdings"><span
style="mso-char-type:symbol;mso-symbol-font-family:Wingdings"></span></span></i><span
style="mso-bidi-font-style:normal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Wingdings;mso-ascii-font-family:Calibri;mso-hansi-font-family:Calibri;mso-char-type:symbol;mso-symbol-font-family:Wingdings"><span
style="mso-char-type:symbol;mso-symbol-font-family:Wingdings"></span></span></span></span><span
style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span
style="mso-bidi-font-style:normal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">Other members
of the WG noted
that fundraising and membership drives are often performed
by the very groups
and organizations seeking privacy/proxy registration for
protection, including
minority political groups, minority religious organizations,
ethnic groups, organizations
committed to change of racial policies, gender orientation
groups, and
publications engaged in freedom of expression. These groups
and their
representatives note that, in the laws of their countries,
the mere collection
of a donation or membership fee does not change their status
from
“non-commercial” to commercial. Further, many of these
organizations conduct
their financial transactions through 3<sup>rd</sup> party
e-commerce companies,
such as PayPal, and thus are not processing the financial
transactions
directly. Accordingly, many in the WG submit there is no
reason to breach the proxy/privacy
of organizations and groups for this reason. They further
note many in the WG
submit that content regulation is beyond the scope of ICANN
and properly the
scope of national laws. <o:p></o:p></span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-pagination:widow-orphan
no-line-numbers"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-pagination:widow-orphan
no-line-numbers"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">[existing] The WG
chairs suggested that such
domains might be more usefully termed “transactional” rather
than more
generally “commercial” domains. They developed the following
suggested
definition and potential recommendation to describe the view of
some WG members
regarding these transactional domains: <i
style="mso-bidi-font-style:normal">“domains
used for online financial transactions for commercial purpose
should be
ineligible for privacy and proxy registrations.”<o:p></o:p></i></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-pagination:widow-orphan
no-line-numbers"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><i
style="mso-bidi-font-style:
normal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Wingdings;mso-ascii-font-family:
Calibri;mso-hansi-font-family:Calibri;mso-char-type:symbol;mso-symbol-font-family:
Wingdings"><span
style="mso-char-type:symbol;mso-symbol-font-family:Wingdings">[add]
</span></span></i><span style="mso-bidi-font-style:
normal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Wingdings;mso-ascii-font-family:
Calibri;mso-hansi-font-family:Calibri;mso-char-type:symbol;mso-symbol-font-family:
Wingdings"><span
style="mso-char-type:symbol;mso-symbol-font-family:Wingdings"></span></span></span></b><span
style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span
style="mso-bidi-font-style:
normal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Wingdings;mso-ascii-font-family:
Calibri;mso-hansi-font-family:Calibri;mso-char-type:symbol;mso-symbol-font-family:
Wingdings"><span
style="mso-char-type:symbol;mso-symbol-font-family:Wingdings"></span></span></span></span><span
style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span
style="mso-bidi-font-style:normal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">This suggestion
has been debated
strongly by the members of the WG and has not reached
consensus. Input requested! <o:p></o:p></span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><span
style="mso-bidi-font-style:
normal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri"><o:p>
<br>
</o:p></span></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><i
style="mso-bidi-font-style:
normal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri">[I
request the
deletion of the rest of this section as too much detail for
an Executive
Summary and detracting from the many open other issues of
the Executive Summary
and Interim report.]<o:p></o:p></span></i></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight:normal"><i
style="mso-bidi-font-style:
normal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Calibri"><o:p> </o:p></span></i></b></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="margin-left:.5in;text-indent:-.25in;line-height:150%;
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New Roman"">
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;
font-family:Calibri">Should registrants of domain names
associated with
commercial activities and which are used for online financial
transactions be
prohibited from using, or continuing to use, privacy and proxy
services? <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"
style="margin-left:.5in;text-indent:-.25in;line-height:150%;
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New Roman"">
</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;
font-family:Calibri">Will it be useful to adopt a definition of
“commercial” or
“transactional” (and if so, should this be that suggested by the
WG Chairs or
some other)? <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span></span></span><!--[endif]--><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;
font-family:Calibri">Will it be necessary to make a distinction
in the WHOIS
data fields to be displayed as a result?]<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:Calibri"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:Calibri"><o:p>Best, <br>
Kathy<br>
p.s. also attached as a word doc<br>
</o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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style="font-family:Calibri"> The WG notes that the WHOIS RT
had specifically
acknowledged that P/P services can be and are used to
address legitimate
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