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 so without changing any of the substance of the questioning.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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 gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Stephanie Perrin<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, April 30, 2015 4:23 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org; Mary Wong<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] PPSAI Comment Period and Section 1.3.3<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Thanks Mary, very helpful.&nbsp; Returning to the original text, I offer the following suggestions:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">For those that argued that it is necessary and practical to limit access to P/P services to exclude commercial entities,
 the following text was proposed to clarify and define their position: &#8220;domains used for online financial transactions for commercial purpose should be ineligible for privacy and proxy registrations.&#8221;<br>
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Public comment is therefore specifically invited on the following questions:&nbsp; </span>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Should registrants of domain names associated with commercial activities and which are used for online financial transactions be prohibited from using, or continuing
 to use, privacy and proxy services? </span><o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1">
<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">If [so, will]
<b>you agree with this position, do you think it would</b>&nbsp; be useful to adopt a definition of &#8220;commercial&#8221; or &#8220;transactional&#8221; to define those domains for which P/P service registrations should be disallowed? And if so, what should the definition(s) be?&#8221;</span><span lang="EN-GB">
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">{Will}
<b>Would </b>it be necessary to make a distinction in the WHOIS data fields to be displayed as a result?&nbsp; (this question is not clear, in my view, it needs more detail on the nature of the distinction, the data fields we are talking about, and to what does
 &quot;as a result&quot; refer?&nbsp; As a result of the decision to deny privacy proxy services???)</span><o:p></o:p></li></ul>
<p class="MsoNormal">The use of the word &quot;will&quot; here appears to imply agreement with the text, you need the conditional.&nbsp; Then you need to seek clarification on the other side:<o:p></o:p></p>
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If you disagree with the proposal to deny the use of privacy and proxy services to domain names associated with commercial activities and which are used for online financial transactions, what are the reasons for your rejection of this proposal?<o:p></o:p></li></ul>
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Kind regards as always, <br>
Stephanie Perrin<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 2015-04-30 22:54, Mary Wong wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">To add to Stephanie&#8217;s note that this specific issue - whether registrants of domain names actively used for commercial transactions ought to be disallowed from using P/P services - had been discussed at some length by the WG:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please note that this part of the Initial Report draws heavily on the detailed WG template for Charter Category C that was the basis for the WG&#8217;s deliberations on this topic. That template contains lengthy descriptions of what had previously
 been termed the majority and minority positions on the WG&#8217;s answer to this specific issue. As part of the WG&#8217;s deliberations &#8211; which took place primarily between April and June 2014 - the more specific formulation of &#8220;transactional&#8221; to describe the sort of
 commercial (i.e. Involving financial transactions) activities that were being discussed was included in the language. All the templates and suggested formulations discussed by the WG are recorded and published on the WG wiki.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">The WG ultimately agreed to retain the two positions in the Initial Report and to revisit the question during its review of the public comments received. As noted previously, the WG's views were presented to the community in London in June
 2014 and again in Los Angeles in October 2014.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Therefore, the three questions in Section 1.3.3 of the Executive Summary
<u>only</u> go toward soliciting community input on this single issue. They were not intended to represent a view of any &#8220;side&#8221; in the WG with regard to this matter. If the WG prefers, we can add a sentence to clarify and specify the reason for the questions
 in Section 1.3.3. Fundamentally, the idea is that public comments will facilitate the WG&#8217;s eventual resolution of this issue as part of its preparation of the Final Report.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">We hope this reminder of the background is of assistance.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Mary<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Telephone: &#43;1 603 574 4892</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Email: <a href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:
</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Stephanie Perrin &lt;<a href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday, April 30, 2015 at 09:20<br>
<b>To: </b>&quot;<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>&quot; &lt;<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>&gt;, James Gannon &lt;<a href="mailto:james@cyberinvasion.net">james@cyberinvasion.net</a>&gt;, Michele
 Blacknight &lt;<a href="mailto:michele@blacknight.com">michele@blacknight.com</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] PPSAI Comment Period and Section 1.3.3<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">James, prior to you joining the group, we had discussed this at some length.&nbsp; IN fact, I really thought that the many reasons why sorting out the purpose of a registration is problematic had buried this debate, but apparently not.&nbsp; Some
 of the issues raised, according to my recollection were the following:<o:p></o:p></p>
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names are registered prior to decisions about content <o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo3">
content changes over time <o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo3">
most countries regulate e-commerce in some fashion, so that website commercial activity does not have to be regulated by ICANN
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ICANN should not be in the business of regulating content in the first place (and sorting out who is extracting a material consideration from a website in order to deny them the ability to use a proxy registration is certainly a form of regulation)
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definitions of commercial activity vary widely around the world<o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo3">
bad actors will not declare, registrars cannot police this matter <o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo3">
criminal prosecution is not dependent on WHOIS information <o:p></o:p></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo3">
if this is really about the ability to detect market information, ICANN should not be in the business of making registrant information available for market purposes, it does it for security and stability.
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contactability remains, regardless of which registrant info appears in WHOIS <o:p>
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<p>I am planning to reformulate these into questions to match the questions on the other side, suggestions welcome.
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<p class="MsoNormal">On 2015-04-30 16:24, James Gannon wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I don&#8217;t see this as asking providers to enforce anything similar to other questions when registering a domain, it&#8217;s a self-reported assessment.
 All it does is add an additional branch to the decision tree for eligibility, which will already be there to determine eligibility due to the other reasons listed below.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">The registrant is asked will you be processing financial transactions.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">&nbsp;</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l5 level1 lfo5"><![if !supportLists]><span style="font-family:Symbol"><span style="mso-list:Ignore">?<span style="font:7.0pt &quot;Times New Roman&quot;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Yes</span><span style="font-family:Wingdings;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">&agrave;</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Will
 you be using a 3<sup>rd</sup> party&gt;No&gt;Not eligible for P/P. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Yes</span><span style="font-family:Wingdings;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">&agrave;</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Will
 you be using a 3<sup>rd</sup> party&gt;Yes&gt;Eligible for P/P.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I&#8217;m not asking registrars to enforce law but to see if a more finely grained eligibility process can be enacted. Or at least is there is public
 support for more granularity.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">-James</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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 [<a href="mailto:michele@blacknight.com">mailto:michele@blacknight.com</a>] <br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, April 30, 2015 8:17 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> James Gannon; Graeme Bunton; PPSAI<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] PPSAI Comment Period and Section 1.3.3</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">It doesn&#8217;t scale</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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 enforce whatever needs enforcing, as it would be up to the DPA to enforce any issues around data privacy etc., etc.,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From: </span>
</b><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">James Gannon<br>
<b>Date: </b>Thursday 30 April 2015 07:45<br>
<b>To: </b>Graeme Bunton, &quot;<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>&quot;<br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] PPSAI Comment Period and Section 1.3.3</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I would personally like to see if there is public traction for distinguishing between sites directly processing financial truncations and sites
 who use 3<sup>rd</sup> parties for processing financial transactions as this is a very important distinction. A simple and I hope non-controversial additional question to the ones below:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">If so, should domains which use a third party to process financial transactions (i.e Paypal, Stripe), and thus do not directly process financial
 information, be subject to the same restrictions? </span><o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">There are strong existing distinctions both in national laws and in regulations such as PCI-DSS between these two forms.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">-James Gannon</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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 [<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Graeme Bunton<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, April 28, 2015 10:17 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> PPSAI<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] PPSAI Comment Period and Section 1.3.3</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span lang="EN-GB">Thanks to all WG members for a very productive call earlier today(and to Steve for his chairing acumen).&nbsp; The co-chairs and staff met this afternoon to tie down two loose ends from the call.<br>
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Regarding the deadline for public comments on the Initial Report, we recognize there is considerable support for extending the public comment period to 60 days instead of the standard 40 days on which we have all been planning.&nbsp;&nbsp; We are prepared to agree to
 this, but with the caveat that this will have repercussions on the pace and intensity of our work once public comments have been received. Specifically, if the public comment deadline is extended until July 3 (60 days after our publication date of May 4),
 we will need to plan on at least weekly calls throughout July and August, some of which may need to be more than an hour in length, to review these comments and move toward a Final Report.&nbsp; Otherwise, we jeopardize the prospects for getting the Final Report
 in front of the GNSO council no later than the Dublin ICANN meeting.&nbsp; As was noted on the call today, many additional steps need to take place even after this WG issues its Final Report before any new accreditation system can be implemented, so the time pressure
 imposed by the expiration of the Interim Specification at the end of next year is already real.
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Also, as previously announced over the past few weeks, if any WG members (or group of members) wish to submit a brief separate or additional statement for inclusion in the package posted for public comment next Monday, such statements need to be received by
 staff no later than Thursday, April 30. <br>
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Lastly, the other loose end involves proposed revisions to section 1.3.3 of the Initial Report, which were presented on the call earlier today but which we did not have time to discuss fully.&nbsp; We agree that this section could benefit from some revision, but
 believe it should take the form of greater concision, not additional presentation of arguments for the divergent positions.&nbsp; Thus we suggest that section 1.3.3 be revised to read as follows:&nbsp;
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Although the WG agreed that the mere fact that a domain name is registered by a commercial entity or by anyone conducting commercial activity should
 not preclude the use of P/P services , there was disagreement over whether domain names that are actively used for commercial transactions (e.g. the sale or exchange of goods or services) should be prohibited from using P/P services. While most WG members
 did not believe such a prohibition is necessary or practical, some members believed that registrants of such domain names should not be able to use or continue using proxy or privacy services.<br>
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For those that argued that it is necessary and practical to limit access to P/P services to exclude commercial entities, the following text was proposed to clarify and define their position: &#8220;domains used for online financial transactions for commercial purpose
 should be ineligible for privacy and proxy registrations.&#8221;<br>
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Public comment is therefore specifically invited on the following questions:&nbsp; </span>
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 from using, or continuing to use, privacy and proxy services? </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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</span></span></span><![endif]><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">If so, will it be useful to adopt a definition of &#8220;commercial&#8221; or &#8220;transactional&#8221; to define those domains for which P/P service registrations
 should be disallowed? And if so, what should the definition(s) be?&#8221;</span><span lang="EN-GB">
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Thanks,<br>
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Graeme Bunton &amp; Steve Metalitz<br>
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<pre>Graeme Bunton<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>Manager, Management Information Systems<o:p></o:p></pre>
<pre>Manager, Public Policy<o:p></o:p></pre>
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<pre>PH: 416 535 0123 ext 1634<o:p></o:p></pre>
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