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    Good suggestions, Steve. <br>
    Thank you,<br>
    Graeme<br>
    <br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2015-04-30 11:58 AM, Metalitz,
      Steven wrote:<br>
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        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Perhaps
            a simpler way to accomplish this would be to insert the
            following at the end of the first bullet:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">“If
            so, why, and if not, why not?”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">We
            could then introduce the next two questions with “If so,”
            and change “will” to “would” as Stephanie suggests.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">   <o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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            <p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal"><b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:windowtext;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:windowtext;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">
                <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>
                [<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
                <b>On Behalf Of </b>Stephanie Perrin<br>
                <b>Sent:</b> Thursday, April 30, 2015 11:23 AM<br>
                <b>To:</b> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>; Mary Wong<br>
                <b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] PPSAI Comment
                Period and Section 1.3.3<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Thanks Mary,
          very helpful.  Returning to the original text, I offer the
          following suggestions:<o:p></o:p></p>
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            style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"
            lang="EN-GB">For those that argued that it is necessary and
            practical to limit access to P/P services to exclude
            commercial entities, the following text was proposed to
            clarify and define their position: “domains used for online
            financial transactions for commercial purpose should be
            ineligible for privacy and proxy registrations.”<br>
            <br>
            Public comment is therefore specifically invited on the
            following questions:  </span>
          <o:p></o:p></p>
        <ul type="disc">
          <li class="MsoNormal"
            style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1
            level1 lfo1">
            <span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"
              lang="EN-GB">Should registrants of domain names associated
              with commercial activities and which are used for online
              financial transactions be prohibited from using, or
              continuing to use, privacy and proxy services? </span><o:p></o:p></li>
          <li class="MsoNormal"
            style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1
            level1 lfo1">
            <span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"
              lang="EN-GB">If [so, will]
              <b>you agree with this position, do you think it would</b> 
              be useful to adopt a definition of “commercial” or
              “transactional” to define those domains for which P/P
              service registrations should be disallowed? And if so,
              what should the definition(s) be?”</span><span
              lang="EN-GB">
            </span><o:p></o:p></li>
          <li class="MsoNormal"
            style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1
            level1 lfo1">
            <span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"
              lang="EN-GB">{Will}
              <b>Would </b>it be necessary to make a distinction in the
              WHOIS data fields to be displayed as a result?  (this
              question is not clear, in my view, it needs more detail on
              the nature of the distinction, the data fields we are
              talking about, and to what does "as a result" refer?  As a
              result of the decision to deny privacy proxy services???)</span><o:p></o:p></li>
        </ul>
        <p class="MsoNormal">The use of the word "will" here appears to
          imply agreement with the text, you need the conditional.  Then
          you need to seek clarification on the other side:<o:p></o:p></p>
        <ul type="disc">
          <li class="MsoNormal"
            style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0
            level1 lfo2">
            If you disagree with the proposal to deny the use of privacy
            and proxy services to domain names associated with
            commercial activities and which are used for online
            financial transactions, what are the reasons for your
            rejection of this proposal?<o:p></o:p></li>
        </ul>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><br>
          Kind regards as always, <br>
          Stephanie Perrin<o:p></o:p></p>
        <div>
          <p class="MsoNormal">On 2015-04-30 22:54, Mary Wong wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
        </div>
        <blockquote style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
          <div>
            <div>
              <div>
                <p class="MsoNormal">To add to Stephanie’s note that
                  this specific issue - whether registrants of domain
                  names actively used for commercial transactions ought
                  to be disallowed from using P/P services - had been
                  discussed at some length by the WG:<o:p></o:p></p>
              </div>
              <div>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
              </div>
              <div>
                <p class="MsoNormal">Please note that this part of the
                  Initial Report draws heavily on the detailed WG
                  template for Charter Category C that was the basis for
                  the WG’s deliberations on this topic. That template
                  contains lengthy descriptions of what had previously
                  been termed the majority and minority positions on the
                  WG’s answer to this specific issue. As part of the
                  WG’s deliberations – which took place primarily
                  between April and June 2014 - the more specific
                  formulation of “transactional” to describe the sort of
                  commercial (i.e. Involving financial transactions)
                  activities that were being discussed was included in
                  the language. All the templates and suggested
                  formulations discussed by the WG are recorded and
                  published on the WG wiki.<o:p></o:p></p>
              </div>
              <div>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
              </div>
              <div>
                <p class="MsoNormal">The WG ultimately agreed to retain
                  the two positions in the Initial Report and to revisit
                  the question during its review of the public comments
                  received. As noted previously, the WG's views were
                  presented to the community in London in June 2014 and
                  again in Los Angeles in October 2014.<o:p></o:p></p>
              </div>
              <div>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
              </div>
              <div>
                <p class="MsoNormal">Therefore, the three questions in
                  Section 1.3.3 of the Executive Summary
                  <u>only</u> go toward soliciting community input on
                  this single issue. They were not intended to represent
                  a view of any “side” in the WG with regard to this
                  matter. If the WG prefers, we can add a sentence to
                  clarify and specify the reason for the questions in
                  Section 1.3.3. Fundamentally, the idea is that public
                  comments will facilitate the WG’s eventual resolution
                  of this issue as part of its preparation of the Final
                  Report. <o:p></o:p></p>
              </div>
              <div>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
                </div>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal">We hope this reminder of the
                    background is of assistance.<o:p></o:p></p>
                </div>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
                </div>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal">Cheers<o:p></o:p></p>
                </div>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal">Mary<o:p></o:p></p>
                </div>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
                </div>
                <div>
                  <div>
                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                          style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Mary
                          Wong</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    </div>
                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                          style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Senior
                          Policy Director</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    </div>
                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                          style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Internet
                          Corporation for Assigned Names &amp; Numbers
                          (ICANN)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    </div>
                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                          style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Telephone:
                          +1 603 574 4892</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    </div>
                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                          style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Email:
                          <a moz-do-not-send="true"
                            href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org">
                            mary.wong@icann.org</a></span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    </div>
                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
                    </div>
                  </div>
                </div>
                <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
              </div>
            </div>
          </div>
          <div>
            <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
          </div>
          <div style="border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF
            1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in">
            <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:
                </span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Stephanie
                Perrin &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                  href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca</a>&gt;<br>
                <b>Date: </b>Thursday, April 30, 2015 at 09:20<br>
                <b>To: </b>"<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                  href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>"
                &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                  href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>&gt;,
                James Gannon &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                  href="mailto:james@cyberinvasion.net">james@cyberinvasion.net</a>&gt;,
                Michele Blacknight &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                  href="mailto:michele@blacknight.com">michele@blacknight.com</a>&gt;<br>
                <b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] PPSAI Comment
                Period and Section 1.3.3<o:p></o:p></span></p>
          </div>
          <div>
            <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Times
                New Roman&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
          </div>
          <blockquote style="border:none;border-left:solid #B5C4DF
            4.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in
            4.0pt;margin-left:3.75pt;margin-right:0in"
            id="MAC_OUTLOOK_ATTRIBUTION_BLOCKQUOTE">
            <div>
              <div>
                <p class="MsoNormal">James, prior to you joining the
                  group, we had discussed this at some length.  IN fact,
                  I really thought that the many reasons why sorting out
                  the purpose of a registration is problematic had
                  buried this debate, but apparently not.  Some of the
                  issues raised, according to my recollection were the
                  following:<o:p></o:p></p>
                <ul type="disc">
                  <li class="MsoNormal"
                    style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                    level1 lfo3">
                    names are registered prior to decisions about
                    content <o:p></o:p></li>
                  <li class="MsoNormal"
                    style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                    level1 lfo3">
                    content changes over time <o:p></o:p></li>
                  <li class="MsoNormal"
                    style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                    level1 lfo3">
                    most countries regulate e-commerce in some fashion,
                    so that website commercial activity does not have to
                    be regulated by ICANN
                    <o:p></o:p></li>
                  <li class="MsoNormal"
                    style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                    level1 lfo3">
                    ICANN should not be in the business of regulating
                    content in the first place (and sorting out who is
                    extracting a material consideration from a website
                    in order to deny them the ability to use a proxy
                    registration is certainly a form of regulation)
                    <o:p></o:p></li>
                  <li class="MsoNormal"
                    style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                    level1 lfo3">
                    definitions of commercial activity vary widely
                    around the world<o:p></o:p></li>
                  <li class="MsoNormal"
                    style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                    level1 lfo3">
                    bad actors will not declare, registrars cannot
                    police this matter <o:p></o:p></li>
                  <li class="MsoNormal"
                    style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                    level1 lfo3">
                    criminal prosecution is not dependent on WHOIS
                    information <o:p></o:p></li>
                  <li class="MsoNormal"
                    style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                    level1 lfo3">
                    if this is really about the ability to detect market
                    information, ICANN should not be in the business of
                    making registrant information available for market
                    purposes, it does it for security and stability.
                    <o:p></o:p></li>
                  <li class="MsoNormal"
                    style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                    level1 lfo3">
                    contactability remains, regardless of which
                    registrant info appears in WHOIS <o:p>
                    </o:p></li>
                </ul>
                <p>I am planning to reformulate these into questions to
                  match the questions on the other side, suggestions
                  welcome.
                  <o:p></o:p></p>
                <p class="MsoNormal">Stephanie Perrin<o:p></o:p></p>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal">On 2015-04-30 16:24, James Gannon
                    wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
                </div>
                <blockquote style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I
                      don’t see this as asking providers to enforce
                      anything similar to other questions when
                      registering a domain, it’s a self-reported
                      assessment. All it does is add an additional
                      branch to the decision tree for eligibility, which
                      will already be there to determine eligibility due
                      to the other reasons listed below.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">The
                      registrant is asked will you be processing
                      financial transactions.
                    </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                  <p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;color:#1F497D">·</span><span
                      style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Times
                      New Roman&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">        
                    </span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Yes</span><span
style="font-family:Wingdings;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">à</span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Will

                      you be using a 3<sup>rd</sup> party&gt;No&gt;Not
                      eligible for P/P. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                  <p class="MsoListParagraph" style="text-indent:-.25in"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;color:#1F497D">·</span><span
                      style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Times
                      New Roman&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">        
                    </span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Yes</span><span
style="font-family:Wingdings;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">à</span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Will

                      you be using a 3<sup>rd</sup>
                      party&gt;Yes&gt;Eligible for P/P.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                  <p class="MsoListParagraph"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I’m
                      not asking registrars to enforce law but to see if
                      a more finely grained eligibility process can be
                      enacted. Or at least is there is public support
                      for more granularity.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">-James</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                  <div>
                    <div style="border:none;border-top:solid #E1E1E1
                      1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in">
                      <p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:windowtext">
                          Michele Neylon - Blacknight [<a
                            moz-do-not-send="true"
                            href="mailto:michele@blacknight.com">mailto:michele@blacknight.com</a>]
                          <br>
                          <b>Sent:</b> Thursday, April 30, 2015 8:17 AM<br>
                          <b>To:</b> James Gannon; Graeme Bunton; PPSAI<br>
                          <b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] PPSAI
                          Comment Period and Section 1.3.3</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    </div>
                  </div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
                  <div>
                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">James</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    </div>
                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    </div>
                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">As
                          a registrar or PP service provider how am I
                          meant to assess this?</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    </div>
                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    </div>
                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">It
                          doesn’t scale</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    </div>
                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    </div>
                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Seriously.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">If,
                          for example, there is an Irish operated
                          website that is not complying with Irish law
                          then it would be up to the ODCE (<a
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                          enforce whatever needs enforcing, as it would
                          be up to the DPA to enforce any issues around
                          data privacy etc., etc.,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Attempting
                          to force registrars and PP providers to make
                          these kind of evaluations is not going to
                          work.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    </div>
                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    </div>
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                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Issues
                          like PCI-DSS compliance are matters that
                          should be dealt with by the DPA and the banks.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Forcing
                          registrars and PP providers to start getting
                          involved in that kind of assessment isn’t
                          viable</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                    <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
                          style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:
                        </span>
                      </b><span
                        style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">James
                        Gannon<br>
                        <b>Date: </b>Thursday 30 April 2015 07:45<br>
                        <b>To: </b>Graeme Bunton, "<a
                          moz-do-not-send="true"
                          href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>"<br>
                        <b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] PPSAI
                        Comment Period and Section 1.3.3</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                  </div>
                  <div>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                    <div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I
                          would personally like to see if there is
                          public traction for distinguishing between
                          sites directly processing financial
                          truncations and sites who use 3<sup>rd</sup>
                          parties for processing financial transactions
                          as this is a very important distinction. A
                          simple and I hope non-controversial additional
                          question to the ones below:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">If
                          so, should domains which use a third party to
                          process financial transactions (i.e Paypal,
                          Stripe), and thus do not directly process
                          financial information, be subject to the same
                          restrictions? </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">There
                          are strong existing distinctions both in
                          national laws and in regulations such as
                          PCI-DSS between these two forms.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">-James
                          Gannon</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      <div>
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                          1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in">
                          <p class="MsoNormal"
                            style="line-height:normal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:windowtext"><a
                                moz-do-not-send="true"
                                href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>
                              [<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                                href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
                              <b>On Behalf Of </b>Graeme Bunton<br>
                              <b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, April 28, 2015 10:17
                              PM<br>
                              <b>To:</b> PPSAI<br>
                              <b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] PPSAI
                              Comment Period and Section 1.3.3</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                      </div>
                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                          lang="EN-GB">Thanks to all WG members for a
                          very productive call earlier today(and to
                          Steve for his chairing acumen).  The co-chairs
                          and staff met this afternoon to tie down two
                          loose ends from the call.<br>
                          <br>
                          Regarding the deadline for public comments on
                          the Initial Report, we recognize there is
                          considerable support for extending the public
                          comment period to 60 days instead of the
                          standard 40 days on which we have all been
                          planning.   We are prepared to agree to this,
                          but with the caveat that this will have
                          repercussions on the pace and intensity of our
                          work once public comments have been received.
                          Specifically, if the public comment deadline
                          is extended until July 3 (60 days after our
                          publication date of May 4), we will need to
                          plan on at least weekly calls throughout July
                          and August, some of which may need to be more
                          than an hour in length, to review these
                          comments and move toward a Final Report. 
                          Otherwise, we jeopardize the prospects for
                          getting the Final Report in front of the GNSO
                          council no later than the Dublin ICANN
                          meeting.  As was noted on the call today, many
                          additional steps need to take place even after
                          this WG issues its Final Report before any new
                          accreditation system can be implemented, so
                          the time pressure imposed by the expiration of
                          the Interim Specification at the end of next
                          year is already real.
                          <br>
                          <br>
                          Also, as previously announced over the past
                          few weeks, if any WG members (or group of
                          members) wish to submit a brief separate or
                          additional statement for inclusion in the
                          package posted for public comment next Monday,
                          such statements need to be received by staff
                          no later than Thursday, April 30. <br>
                          <br>
                          Lastly, the other loose end involves proposed
                          revisions to section 1.3.3 of the Initial
                          Report, which were presented on the call
                          earlier today but which we did not have time
                          to discuss fully.  We agree that this section
                          could benefit from some revision, but believe
                          it should take the form of greater concision,
                          not additional presentation of arguments for
                          the divergent positions.  Thus we suggest that
                          section 1.3.3 be revised to read as follows: 
                          <br>
                          <br>
                          ---</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      <blockquote
                        style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                          style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                            style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"
                            lang="EN-GB">Although the WG agreed that the
                            mere fact that a domain name is registered
                            by a commercial entity or by anyone
                            conducting commercial activity should not
                            preclude the use of P/P services , there was
                            disagreement over whether domain names that
                            are actively used for commercial
                            transactions (e.g. the sale or exchange of
                            goods or services) should be prohibited from
                            using P/P services. While most WG members
                            did not believe such a prohibition is
                            necessary or practical, some members
                            believed that registrants of such domain
                            names should not be able to use or continue
                            using proxy or privacy services.<br>
                            <br>
                            For those that argued that it is necessary
                            and practical to limit access to P/P
                            services to exclude commercial entities, the
                            following text was proposed to clarify and
                            define their position: “domains used for
                            online financial transactions for commercial
                            purpose should be ineligible for privacy and
                            proxy registrations.”<br>
                            <br>
                            Public comment is therefore specifically
                            invited on the following questions:  </span>
                          <o:p></o:p></p>
                        <ul type="disc">
                          <li class="MsoNormal"
                            style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2
                            level1 lfo4">
                            <span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"
                              lang="EN-GB">Should registrants of domain
                              names associated with commercial
                              activities and which are used for online
                              financial transactions be prohibited from
                              using, or continuing to use, privacy and
                              proxy services? </span><o:p></o:p></li>
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                              lang="EN-GB">If so, will it be useful to
                              adopt a definition of “commercial” or
                              “transactional” to define those domains
                              for which P/P service registrations should
                              be disallowed? And if so, what should the
                              definition(s) be?”</span><span
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                              lang="EN-GB">Will it be necessary to make
                              a distinction in the WHOIS data fields to
                              be displayed as a result?</span><o:p></o:p></li>
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                          Thanks,<br>
                          <br>
                          Graeme Bunton &amp; Steve Metalitz<br>
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                      <pre>-- <o:p></o:p></pre>
                      <pre>_________________________<o:p></o:p></pre>
                      <pre>Graeme Bunton<o:p></o:p></pre>
                      <pre>Manager, Management Information Systems<o:p></o:p></pre>
                      <pre>Manager, Public Policy<o:p></o:p></pre>
                      <pre>Tucows Inc.<o:p></o:p></pre>
                      <pre>PH: 416 535 0123 ext 1634<o:p></o:p></pre>
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_________________________
Graeme Bunton
Manager, Management Information Systems
Manager, Public Policy
Tucows Inc.
PH: 416 535 0123 ext 1634</pre>
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