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    Actually, and I do hate to belabor this but:<br>
    1.  I thought you were proposing to drop the entire proposed new
    section and merely footnote the disagreement.  I like that option a
    lot.<br>
    2.  If we are proposing to keep the text, then there should be a
    balanced construction.  I include once again the preamble, which
    affects that balance:<br>
    <br>
    <i>Although the WG agreed that the mere fact that a domain name is
      registered by a commercial entity or by anyone conducting
      commercial activity should not preclude the use of P/P services ,
      there was disagreement over whether domain names that are actively
      used for commercial transactions (e.g. the sale or exchange of
      goods or services) should be prohibited from using P/P services.
      While most WG members did not believe such a prohibition is
      necessary or practical, some members believed that registrants of
      such domain names should not be able to use or continue using
      proxy or privacy services.
    </i><i><br>
    </i><i>
    </i><i><br>
    </i><i>For those that argued that it is necessary and practical to
      limit access to P/P services to exclude commercial entities, the
      following text was proposed to clarify and define their position:
      "domains used for online financial transactions for commercial
      purpose should be ineligible for privacy and proxy registrations."
    </i><i><br>
    </i><i><b>For those that argued that limiting access to P/P services
        to exclude entities who were engaged in online financial
        transactions was impracticable and created an unacceptable risk
        to NGOs and vulnerable organizations who had legitimate needs
        for the services</b></i><i>, the following text was proposed to
      clarify and define their position:  "Attempting to distinguish the
      end purposes of a domain registration is not practicable for the
      purposes of determining eligibility for privacy/proxy services,
      and may unfairly discriminate against vulnerable groups and
      organizations who wish to exercise their rights of free speech on
      the Internet".</i><i><br>
    </i><i>
    </i><i><br>
    </i><i>Public comment is therefore specifically invited on the
      following questions:
    </i><i><br>
    </i><i>
    </i><i><br>
    </i>
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      <li><big><big><big><big><big><span style="font-size: 11pt;
                    line-height: 150%; font-family: Calibri,
                    sans-serif;" lang="EN-GB">Should registrants of
                    domain names associated with commercial activities
                    and which are used for online financial transactions
                    be prohibited from using, or continuing to use,
                    privacy and proxy services?  If so, why, and if not,
                    why not?</span><o:p></o:p></big></big></big></big></big></li>
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                    11pt; line-height: 150%; font-family: Calibri,
                    sans-serif;" lang="EN-GB">If [so, will] <b>you
                      agree with this position, do you think it would</b> 
                    be useful to adopt a definition of “commercial” or
                    “transactional” to define those domains for which
                    P/P service registrations should be disallowed? And
                    if so, what should the definition(s) be?”</span><o:p></o:p>
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                    sans-serif;" lang="EN-GB">{Will} <b>Would </b>it
                    be necessary to make a distinction in the WHOIS data
                    fields to be displayed as a result?  (this question
                    is not clear, in my view, it needs more detail on
                    the nature of the distinction, the data fields we
                    are talking about, and to what does "as a result"
                    refer?  As a result of the decision to deny privacy
                    proxy services???)</span></big></big></big></big></big></li>
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    <i><br>
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    <blockquote><i><b>*  What risks do you foresee with either option?</b></i><br>
    </blockquote>
    <br>
    I would note that the clarifying questions here go to proposing
    draft text for the report, right down to the definition and data
    fields.  I have added a question on risk....because before coming up
    with draft text to implement the banning of P/P use by those engaged
    in commercial activity (via the comments in response to this
    invitation), we have to look at the many risks here....key among
    them being that privacy proxy services will be priced out of the
    market by the complexity of the exercise, a point that registrars
    made on a number of occasions.  This is an excellent outcome for
    those who do not favor them, but the NCSG certainly considers the
    services to be essential (I can only speak for them, but I know
    there is support in other quarters).<br>
    Further, the final question is neutral, as there are clearly risks
    on both sides, and we seek the answers for both.<br>
    <br>
    Cheers SP<br>
    <br>
    ---
    <br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2015-05-01 1:06, Graeme Bunton
      wrote:<br>
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      Good suggestions, Steve. <br>
      Thank you,<br>
      Graeme<br>
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      <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2015-04-30 11:58 AM, Metalitz,
        Steven wrote:<br>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Perhaps

              a simpler way to accomplish this would be to insert the
              following at the end of the first bullet:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">“If

              so, why, and if not, why not?”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">We

              could then introduce the next two questions with “If so,”
              and change “will” to “would” as Stephanie suggests.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">   <o:p></o:p></span></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
          <div>
            <div style="border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF
              1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in">
              <p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal"><b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:windowtext;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:windowtext;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">
                  <a moz-do-not-send="true"
                    class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated"
                    href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>
                  [<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                    class="moz-txt-link-freetext"
                    href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
                  <b>On Behalf Of </b>Stephanie Perrin<br>
                  <b>Sent:</b> Thursday, April 30, 2015 11:23 AM<br>
                  <b>To:</b> <a moz-do-not-send="true"
                    class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated"
                    href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>;
                  Mary Wong<br>
                  <b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] PPSAI Comment
                  Period and Section 1.3.3<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">Thanks Mary,
            very helpful.  Returning to the original text, I offer the
            following suggestions:<o:p></o:p></p>
          <p class="MsoNormal"
            style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
              style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"
              lang="EN-GB">For those that argued that it is necessary
              and practical to limit access to P/P services to exclude
              commercial entities, the following text was proposed to
              clarify and define their position: “domains used for
              online financial transactions for commercial purpose
              should be ineligible for privacy and proxy registrations.”<br>
              <br>
              Public comment is therefore specifically invited on the
              following questions:  </span> <o:p></o:p></p>
          <ul type="disc">
            <li class="MsoNormal"
              style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1
              level1 lfo1"> <span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"
                lang="EN-GB">Should registrants of domain names
                associated with commercial activities and which are used
                for online financial transactions be prohibited from
                using, or continuing to use, privacy and proxy services?
              </span><o:p></o:p></li>
            <li class="MsoNormal"
              style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1
              level1 lfo1"> <span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"
                lang="EN-GB">If [so, will] <b>you agree with this
                  position, do you think it would</b>  be useful to
                adopt a definition of “commercial” or “transactional” to
                define those domains for which P/P service registrations
                should be disallowed? And if so, what should the
                definition(s) be?”</span><span lang="EN-GB"> </span><o:p></o:p></li>
            <li class="MsoNormal"
              style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l1
              level1 lfo1"> <span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"
                lang="EN-GB">{Will} <b>Would </b>it be necessary to
                make a distinction in the WHOIS data fields to be
                displayed as a result?  (this question is not clear, in
                my view, it needs more detail on the nature of the
                distinction, the data fields we are talking about, and
                to what does "as a result" refer?  As a result of the
                decision to deny privacy proxy services???)</span><o:p></o:p></li>
          </ul>
          <p class="MsoNormal">The use of the word "will" here appears
            to imply agreement with the text, you need the conditional. 
            Then you need to seek clarification on the other side:<o:p></o:p></p>
          <ul type="disc">
            <li class="MsoNormal"
              style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0
              level1 lfo2"> If you disagree with the proposal to deny
              the use of privacy and proxy services to domain names
              associated with commercial activities and which are used
              for online financial transactions, what are the reasons
              for your rejection of this proposal?<o:p></o:p></li>
          </ul>
          <p class="MsoNormal"><br>
            Kind regards as always, <br>
            Stephanie Perrin<o:p></o:p></p>
          <div>
            <p class="MsoNormal">On 2015-04-30 22:54, Mary Wong wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
          </div>
          <blockquote style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
            <div>
              <div>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal">To add to Stephanie’s note that
                    this specific issue - whether registrants of domain
                    names actively used for commercial transactions
                    ought to be disallowed from using P/P services - had
                    been discussed at some length by the WG:<o:p></o:p></p>
                </div>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
                </div>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal">Please note that this part of the
                    Initial Report draws heavily on the detailed WG
                    template for Charter Category C that was the basis
                    for the WG’s deliberations on this topic. That
                    template contains lengthy descriptions of what had
                    previously been termed the majority and minority
                    positions on the WG’s answer to this specific issue.
                    As part of the WG’s deliberations – which took place
                    primarily between April and June 2014 - the more
                    specific formulation of “transactional” to describe
                    the sort of commercial (i.e. Involving financial
                    transactions) activities that were being discussed
                    was included in the language. All the templates and
                    suggested formulations discussed by the WG are
                    recorded and published on the WG wiki.<o:p></o:p></p>
                </div>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
                </div>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal">The WG ultimately agreed to
                    retain the two positions in the Initial Report and
                    to revisit the question during its review of the
                    public comments received. As noted previously, the
                    WG's views were presented to the community in London
                    in June 2014 and again in Los Angeles in October
                    2014.<o:p></o:p></p>
                </div>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
                </div>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal">Therefore, the three questions in
                    Section 1.3.3 of the Executive Summary <u>only</u>
                    go toward soliciting community input on this single
                    issue. They were not intended to represent a view of
                    any “side” in the WG with regard to this matter. If
                    the WG prefers, we can add a sentence to clarify and
                    specify the reason for the questions in Section
                    1.3.3. Fundamentally, the idea is that public
                    comments will facilitate the WG’s eventual
                    resolution of this issue as part of its preparation
                    of the Final Report. <o:p></o:p></p>
                </div>
                <div>
                  <div>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
                  </div>
                  <div>
                    <p class="MsoNormal">We hope this reminder of the
                      background is of assistance.<o:p></o:p></p>
                  </div>
                  <div>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
                  </div>
                  <div>
                    <p class="MsoNormal">Cheers<o:p></o:p></p>
                  </div>
                  <div>
                    <p class="MsoNormal">Mary<o:p></o:p></p>
                  </div>
                  <div>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
                  </div>
                  <div>
                    <div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                            style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Mary

                            Wong</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                            style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Senior

                            Policy Director</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                            style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Internet

                            Corporation for Assigned Names &amp; Numbers
                            (ICANN)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                            style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Telephone:

                            +1 603 574 4892</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
                            style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Email:

                            <a moz-do-not-send="true"
                              href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org">
                              mary.wong@icann.org</a></span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
                      </div>
                    </div>
                  </div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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            <div>
              <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
            </div>
            <div style="border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF
              1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in">
              <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:

                  </span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Stephanie

                  Perrin &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                    href="mailto:stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca">stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca</a>&gt;<br>
                  <b>Date: </b>Thursday, April 30, 2015 at 09:20<br>
                  <b>To: </b>"<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                    href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>"
                  &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                    href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>&gt;,

                  James Gannon &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                    href="mailto:james@cyberinvasion.net">james@cyberinvasion.net</a>&gt;,

                  Michele Blacknight &lt;<a moz-do-not-send="true"
                    href="mailto:michele@blacknight.com">michele@blacknight.com</a>&gt;<br>
                  <b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] PPSAI Comment
                  Period and Section 1.3.3<o:p></o:p></span></p>
            </div>
            <div>
              <p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Times
                  New Roman&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
            </div>
            <blockquote style="border:none;border-left:solid #B5C4DF
              4.5pt;padding:0in 0in 0in
              4.0pt;margin-left:3.75pt;margin-right:0in"
              id="MAC_OUTLOOK_ATTRIBUTION_BLOCKQUOTE">
              <div>
                <div>
                  <p class="MsoNormal">James, prior to you joining the
                    group, we had discussed this at some length.  IN
                    fact, I really thought that the many reasons why
                    sorting out the purpose of a registration is
                    problematic had buried this debate, but apparently
                    not.  Some of the issues raised, according to my
                    recollection were the following:<o:p></o:p></p>
                  <ul type="disc">
                    <li class="MsoNormal"
                      style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                      level1 lfo3"> names are registered prior to
                      decisions about content <o:p></o:p></li>
                    <li class="MsoNormal"
                      style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                      level1 lfo3"> content changes over time <o:p></o:p></li>
                    <li class="MsoNormal"
                      style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                      level1 lfo3"> most countries regulate e-commerce
                      in some fashion, so that website commercial
                      activity does not have to be regulated by ICANN <o:p></o:p></li>
                    <li class="MsoNormal"
                      style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                      level1 lfo3"> ICANN should not be in the business
                      of regulating content in the first place (and
                      sorting out who is extracting a material
                      consideration from a website in order to deny them
                      the ability to use a proxy registration is
                      certainly a form of regulation) <o:p></o:p></li>
                    <li class="MsoNormal"
                      style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                      level1 lfo3"> definitions of commercial activity
                      vary widely around the world<o:p></o:p></li>
                    <li class="MsoNormal"
                      style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                      level1 lfo3"> bad actors will not declare,
                      registrars cannot police this matter <o:p></o:p></li>
                    <li class="MsoNormal"
                      style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                      level1 lfo3"> criminal prosecution is not
                      dependent on WHOIS information <o:p></o:p></li>
                    <li class="MsoNormal"
                      style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                      level1 lfo3"> if this is really about the ability
                      to detect market information, ICANN should not be
                      in the business of making registrant information
                      available for market purposes, it does it for
                      security and stability. <o:p></o:p></li>
                    <li class="MsoNormal"
                      style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l3
                      level1 lfo3"> contactability remains, regardless
                      of which registrant info appears in WHOIS <o:p> </o:p></li>
                  </ul>
                  <p>I am planning to reformulate these into questions
                    to match the questions on the other side,
                    suggestions welcome. <o:p></o:p></p>
                  <p class="MsoNormal">Stephanie Perrin<o:p></o:p></p>
                  <div>
                    <p class="MsoNormal">On 2015-04-30 16:24, James
                      Gannon wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
                  </div>
                  <blockquote
                    style="margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt">
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I
                        don’t see this as asking providers to enforce
                        anything similar to other questions when
                        registering a domain, it’s a self-reported
                        assessment. All it does is add an additional
                        branch to the decision tree for eligibility,
                        which will already be there to determine
                        eligibility due to the other reasons listed
                        below.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">The

                        registrant is asked will you be processing
                        financial transactions. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    <p class="MsoListParagraph"
                      style="text-indent:-.25in"><span
                        style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;color:#1F497D">·</span><span
                        style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Times

                        New Roman&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">        

                      </span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Yes</span><span
style="font-family:Wingdings;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">à</span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Will


                        you be using a 3<sup>rd</sup> party&gt;No&gt;Not
                        eligible for P/P. </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    <p class="MsoListParagraph"
                      style="text-indent:-.25in"><span
                        style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;color:#1F497D">·</span><span
                        style="font-size:7.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Times

                        New Roman&quot;,&quot;serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">        

                      </span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Yes</span><span
style="font-family:Wingdings;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">à</span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Will


                        you be using a 3<sup>rd</sup>
                        party&gt;Yes&gt;Eligible for P/P.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    <p class="MsoListParagraph"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I’m

                        not asking registrars to enforce law but to see
                        if a more finely grained eligibility process can
                        be enacted. Or at least is there is public
                        support for more granularity.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">-James</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                        1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in">
                        <p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal"><b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:windowtext">
                            Michele Neylon - Blacknight [<a
                              moz-do-not-send="true"
                              href="mailto:michele@blacknight.com">mailto:michele@blacknight.com</a>]
                            <br>
                            <b>Sent:</b> Thursday, April 30, 2015 8:17
                            AM<br>
                            <b>To:</b> James Gannon; Graeme Bunton;
                            PPSAI<br>
                            <b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg]
                            PPSAI Comment Period and Section 1.3.3</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                    </div>
                    <p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
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                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">James</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
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                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">As

                            a registrar or PP service provider how am I
                            meant to assess this?</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
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                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">It

                            doesn’t scale</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Seriously.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">If,

                            for example, there is an Irish operated
                            website that is not complying with Irish law
                            then it would be up to the ODCE (<a
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href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/r/IqfLPS2xhmx-5GDCPCM4mLmlw-jOPQHGmhpzAjWDKActStEmX7ndjfqnEIgUMkdhXCAGe_aALVo69T0irIiCOftGW0RRkFeeJXP_SQ_bxxN5c9ZWrJzjnfSpDUeI4UjuT2dsrtgXox-JsiUyGsBvbDhSHcf2gH3gqSI2YwvUnORJuOhanPP2uCSQp3bey2BqQKbirhovyP6hDiunUi2Ilg">http://www.odce.ie/</a>) to


                            enforce whatever needs enforcing, as it
                            would be up to the DPA to enforce any issues
                            around data privacy etc., etc.,</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Attempting

                            to force registrars and PP providers to make
                            these kind of evaluations is not going to
                            work.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Issues

                            like PCI-DSS compliance are matters that
                            should be dealt with by the DPA and the
                            banks.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
                      <div>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Forcing

                            registrars and PP providers to start getting
                            involved in that kind of assessment isn’t
                            viable</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                      </div>
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                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Regards</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Michele</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                                <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Mr

                                    Michele Neylon</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                      <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
                            style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:

                          </span> </b><span
                          style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">James

                          Gannon<br>
                          <b>Date: </b>Thursday 30 April 2015 07:45<br>
                          <b>To: </b>Graeme Bunton, "<a
                            moz-do-not-send="true"
                            href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>"<br>
                          <b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] PPSAI
                          Comment Period and Section 1.3.3</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                      <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I
                            would personally like to see if there is
                            public traction for distinguishing between
                            sites directly processing financial
                            truncations and sites who use 3<sup>rd</sup>
                            parties for processing financial
                            transactions as this is a very important
                            distinction. A simple and I hope
                            non-controversial additional question to the
                            ones below:</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">If

                            so, should domains which use a third party
                            to process financial transactions (i.e
                            Paypal, Stripe), and thus do not directly
                            process financial information, be subject to
                            the same restrictions? </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">There

                            are strong existing distinctions both in
                            national laws and in regulations such as
                            PCI-DSS between these two forms.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">-James

                            Gannon</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span
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                                <b>On Behalf Of </b>Graeme Bunton<br>
                                <b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, April 28, 2015
                                10:17 PM<br>
                                <b>To:</b> PPSAI<br>
                                <b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg]
                                PPSAI Comment Period and Section 1.3.3</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                        <p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"> </span><o:p></o:p></p>
                        <p class="MsoNormal"
                          style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                            lang="EN-GB">Thanks to all WG members for a
                            very productive call earlier today(and to
                            Steve for his chairing acumen).  The
                            co-chairs and staff met this afternoon to
                            tie down two loose ends from the call.<br>
                            <br>
                            Regarding the deadline for public comments
                            on the Initial Report, we recognize there is
                            considerable support for extending the
                            public comment period to 60 days instead of
                            the standard 40 days on which we have all
                            been planning.   We are prepared to agree to
                            this, but with the caveat that this will
                            have repercussions on the pace and intensity
                            of our work once public comments have been
                            received. Specifically, if the public
                            comment deadline is extended until July 3
                            (60 days after our publication date of May
                            4), we will need to plan on at least weekly
                            calls throughout July and August, some of
                            which may need to be more than an hour in
                            length, to review these comments and move
                            toward a Final Report.  Otherwise, we
                            jeopardize the prospects for getting the
                            Final Report in front of the GNSO council no
                            later than the Dublin ICANN meeting.  As was
                            noted on the call today, many additional
                            steps need to take place even after this WG
                            issues its Final Report before any new
                            accreditation system can be implemented, so
                            the time pressure imposed by the expiration
                            of the Interim Specification at the end of
                            next year is already real. <br>
                            <br>
                            Also, as previously announced over the past
                            few weeks, if any WG members (or group of
                            members) wish to submit a brief separate or
                            additional statement for inclusion in the
                            package posted for public comment next
                            Monday, such statements need to be received
                            by staff no later than Thursday, April 30. <br>
                            <br>
                            Lastly, the other loose end involves
                            proposed revisions to section 1.3.3 of the
                            Initial Report, which were presented on the
                            call earlier today but which we did not have
                            time to discuss fully.  We agree that this
                            section could benefit from some revision,
                            but believe it should take the form of
                            greater concision, not additional
                            presentation of arguments for the divergent
                            positions.  Thus we suggest that section
                            1.3.3 be revised to read as follows:  <br>
                            <br>
                            ---</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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                            style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span
                              style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"
                              lang="EN-GB">Although the WG agreed that
                              the mere fact that a domain name is
                              registered by a commercial entity or by
                              anyone conducting commercial activity
                              should not preclude the use of P/P
                              services , there was disagreement over
                              whether domain names that are actively
                              used for commercial transactions (e.g. the
                              sale or exchange of goods or services)
                              should be prohibited from using P/P
                              services. While most WG members did not
                              believe such a prohibition is necessary or
                              practical, some members believed that
                              registrants of such domain names should
                              not be able to use or continue using proxy
                              or privacy services.<br>
                              <br>
                              For those that argued that it is necessary
                              and practical to limit access to P/P
                              services to exclude commercial entities,
                              the following text was proposed to clarify
                              and define their position: “domains used
                              for online financial transactions for
                              commercial purpose should be ineligible
                              for privacy and proxy registrations.”<br>
                              <br>
                              Public comment is therefore specifically
                              invited on the following questions:  </span>
                            <o:p></o:p></p>
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                              style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2
                              level1 lfo4"> <span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"
                                lang="EN-GB">Should registrants of
                                domain names associated with commercial
                                activities and which are used for online
                                financial transactions be prohibited
                                from using, or continuing to use,
                                privacy and proxy services? </span><o:p></o:p></li>
                            <li class="MsoNormal"
                              style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2
                              level1 lfo4"> <span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"
                                lang="EN-GB">If so, will it be useful to
                                adopt a definition of “commercial” or
                                “transactional” to define those domains
                                for which P/P service registrations
                                should be disallowed? And if so, what
                                should the definition(s) be?”</span><span
                                lang="EN-GB"> </span><o:p></o:p></li>
                            <li class="MsoNormal"
                              style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2
                              level1 lfo4"> <span
style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"
                                lang="EN-GB">Will it be necessary to
                                make a distinction in the WHOIS data
                                fields to be displayed as a result?</span><o:p></o:p></li>
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                            Thanks,<br>
                            <br>
                            Graeme Bunton &amp; Steve Metalitz<br>
                            <br>
                            <br>
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                        <pre>-- <o:p></o:p></pre>
                        <pre>_________________________<o:p></o:p></pre>
                        <pre>Graeme Bunton<o:p></o:p></pre>
                        <pre>Manager, Management Information Systems<o:p></o:p></pre>
                        <pre>Manager, Public Policy<o:p></o:p></pre>
                        <pre>Tucows Inc.<o:p></o:p></pre>
                        <pre>PH: 416 535 0123 ext 1634<o:p></o:p></pre>
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_________________________
Graeme Bunton
Manager, Management Information Systems
Manager, Public Policy
Tucows Inc.
PH: 416 535 0123 ext 1634</pre>
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