<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><div><div><div>Dear all,</div><div><br></div><div>Further to my note below, we have sorted the public comment into two rough categories that we hope will assist with your review of them: <a href="http://forum.icann.org/lists/ordered-comments-ppsai-initial-05may15.html">http://forum.icann.org/lists/ordered-comments-ppsai-initial-05may15.html</a>.</div><div><br></div><div>You’ll note that there are basically two “categories”, the difference being that for one we included all messages that were received with particular words/phrases in the subject title and as such tagged as messages that originated with a template or form email. The other category is basically everything else. As this sorting was based on subject title rather than a content search, some template/form messages will not have been identified and placed in the first category.</div><div><br></div><div>Cheers</div><div>Mary</div><div><br></div><div><div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Mary Wong</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Senior Policy Director</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Telephone: +1 603 574 4889</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Email: mary.wong@icann.org</font></font></div></div></div><div><br></div></div></div><div><br></div><span id="OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION"><div style="font-family:Calibri; font-size:11pt; text-align:left; color:black; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0in; PADDING-LEFT: 0in; PADDING-RIGHT: 0in; BORDER-TOP: #b5c4df 1pt solid; BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 3pt"><span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span> Mary Wong <<a href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org">mary.wong@icann.org</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span> Friday, July 10, 2015 at 21:04<br><span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span> "<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span> For your review - Public Comment Review Tool (v1) and other documents<br></div><div><br></div><blockquote id="MAC_OUTLOOK_ATTRIBUTION_BLOCKQUOTE" style="BORDER-LEFT: #b5c4df 5 solid; PADDING:0 0 0 5; MARGIN:0 0 0 5;"><div><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><div><div><div>Dear WG members,</div><div><br></div><div>Please find attached for your review in preparation for the WG meeting next week on 14 July: (1) the first version of the Public Comment Review Tool; (2) an overview summary chart of the responses received to the Template for Responses that we provided as an alternative feedback mechanism to the Public Comment Forum; and (3) a selected compilation from all the comments received in the Public Comment Forum.</div><div><br></div><div>Please note the following:</div><div>For (1) - this incorporates all Template responses received covering the first 9 of the WG’s 20 Preliminary Recommendations. It therefore is not a complete collection of all the responses received to all the preliminary recommendations, and does not include comments on the WG’s open questions. This version of the Tool also incorporates those comments received in the Public Comment Forum that specifically addressed one or more of the 9 preliminary recommendations covered. As staff continues to collate and catalog the remaining Template responses and public comments, we will prepare a second version of the Tool. We hope to be able to complete this exercise by the end of next week, if at all possible – however, for now we wanted to get what we were able to do since the Forum closed on Tuesday to you as early as we could.</div><div><br></div><div>For (2) - this was derived from the 352 Template responses we received, of which 208 were started but not filled out (although at least one person then sent their responses to the Forum as a public comment, and it would appear that a few others returned and filled out at least part of the Template as a separate response subsequently). </div><div><br></div><div>For (3) - please note the disclaimer and explanation included in the document. This document was prepared in the hope that it would help WG members as you go through the over 11,400 public comments received but it is a collection of excerpts only and as such <u>not</u> at all a comprehensive representation of either the scope, variety or number of responses in the Forum. </div><div><br></div><div>Finally, again in the hope that it will aid your review of the public comments, our IT department will be categorizing all the comments into at least two groups, one being those that originated with form or template letters. We will send that to you as soon as we receive it; please note, however, that the “separation” can only be done by subject title and as such there will be some form letters that are not captured this way.</div><div><br></div><div>Please let us know if we have made any errors or omissions in our compilation and collation!</div><div><br></div><div>Thanks and cheers</div><div>Mary</div><div><br></div><div><div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Mary Wong</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Senior Policy Director</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Telephone: +1 603 574 4889</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Email: <a href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org">mary.wong@icann.org</a></font></font></div><div><br></div></div></div><div><div><br></div><br></div></div></div></div></div></blockquote></span></body></html>