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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Hi Mary and All,<br>
I would add to Volker's comments that I would like to ensure that
the "sorting" process is not a way of eliminating or minimizing
any of the contributions/comments that we have received. We have
received a huge number of comments -- a real outpouring of input
-- and it is critical that we find a good way to understand the
scope and breadth of the contribution, and give it true and
meaningful impact in our work ahead.<br>
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Best,<br>
Kathy<br>
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Hi Mary,<br>
<br>
thank you for this preliminary sorting. Having looked at the
comments, I still expect that we have a herculean task ahead of
us, as even within the "Respect our Privacy" submissions, there
are a lot of substantial, well-considered and helpful comments
hidden away. <br>
<br>
I expect we will have to sort that category at least once more,
into a section where just the form letter was submitted and a
section where additional comments have been added.<br>
<br>
I also feels strongly that even if those comments do not directly
respond to the questions asked in the initial report, they clearly
show that the topic of whois privacy is important to many internet
users and we should ensure that our work takes these comments into
account and convey to the commenters that their voices have been
heard.<br>
<br>
Best,<br>
<br>
Volker<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">Am 12.07.2015 um 08:04 schrieb Mary
Wong:<br>
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<div>Dear all,</div>
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<div>Further to my note below, we have sorted the public
comment into two rough categories that we hope will assist
with your review of them: <a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="http://forum.icann.org/lists/ordered-comments-ppsai-initial-05may15.html">http://forum.icann.org/lists/ordered-comments-ppsai-initial-05may15.html</a>.</div>
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<div>You’ll note that there are basically two “categories”,
the difference being that for one we included all messages
that were received with particular words/phrases in the
subject title and as such tagged as messages that
originated with a template or form email. The other
category is basically everything else. As this sorting was
based on subject title rather than a content search, some
template/form messages will not have been identified and
placed in the first category.</div>
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<div>Cheers</div>
<div>Mary</div>
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<div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Mary Wong</font></font></div>
<div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Senior
Policy Director</font></font></div>
<div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Internet
Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers
(ICANN)</font></font></div>
<div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Telephone:
+1 603 574 4889</font></font></div>
<div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Email: <a
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style="font-weight:bold">From: </span> Mary Wong <<a
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<span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span> Friday, July
10, 2015 at 21:04<br>
<span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span> "<a
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<span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span> For your
review - Public Comment Review Tool (v1) and other documents<br>
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<div>Dear WG members,</div>
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<div>Please find attached for your review in
preparation for the WG meeting next week on 14
July: (1) the first version of the Public Comment
Review Tool; (2) an overview summary chart of the
responses received to the Template for Responses
that we provided as an alternative feedback
mechanism to the Public Comment Forum; and (3) a
selected compilation from all the comments
received in the Public Comment Forum.</div>
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<div>Please note the following:</div>
<div>For (1) - this incorporates all Template
responses received covering the first 9 of the
WG’s 20 Preliminary Recommendations. It therefore
is not a complete collection of all the responses
received to all the preliminary recommendations,
and does not include comments on the WG’s open
questions. This version of the Tool also
incorporates those comments received in the Public
Comment Forum that specifically addressed one or
more of the 9 preliminary recommendations covered.
As staff continues to collate and catalog the
remaining Template responses and public comments,
we will prepare a second version of the Tool. We
hope to be able to complete this exercise by the
end of next week, if at all possible – however,
for now we wanted to get what we were able to do
since the Forum closed on Tuesday to you as early
as we could.</div>
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<div>For (2) - this was derived from the 352
Template responses we received, of which 208 were
started but not filled out (although at least one
person then sent their responses to the Forum as a
public comment, and it would appear that a few
others returned and filled out at least part of
the Template as a separate response
subsequently). </div>
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</div>
<div>For (3) - please note the disclaimer and
explanation included in the document. This
document was prepared in the hope that it would
help WG members as you go through the over 11,400
public comments received but it is a collection of
excerpts only and as such <u>not</u> at all a
comprehensive representation of either the scope,
variety or number of responses in the Forum. </div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Finally, again in the hope that it will aid
your review of the public comments, our IT
department will be categorizing all the comments
into at least two groups, one being those that
originated with form or template letters. We will
send that to you as soon as we receive it; please
note, however, that the “separation” can only be
done by subject title and as such there will be
some form letters that are not captured this way.</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Please let us know if we have made any errors
or omissions in our compilation and collation!</div>
<div><br>
</div>
<div>Thanks and cheers</div>
<div>Mary</div>
<div><br>
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<div><font class="Apple-style-span"
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Wong</font></font></div>
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Policy Director</font></font></div>
<div><font class="Apple-style-span"
color="#000000"><font
class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Internet
Corporation for Assigned Names &
Numbers (ICANN)</font></font></div>
<div><font class="Apple-style-span"
color="#000000"><font
class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Telephone:
+1 603 574 4889</font></font></div>
<div><font class="Apple-style-span"
color="#000000"><font
class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Email:
<a moz-do-not-send="true"
href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org">mary.wong@icann.org</a></font></font></div>
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