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    Can we rephrase the responses to sound more neutral as to the
    result?<br>
    <br>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">3.
               </span><span
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          Response to Question 3: </span> Does proposed requirement to
        label p/p registrations as such have an impact on the benefit or
        value of such registration and if what should be the result of
        this</span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">? 
        (Comments 18, 25, 31) <o:p></o:p></span></p>
    <span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p></o:p></span><span
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      4.            Response to Question 8:  Should providers be
      required to forward all disclosure requests to customers, unless
      prohibited by law?  (Comments 17, 29)  (I.e., should this feature
      of Annex E be made applicable to all disclosure requests, not just
      those relating to intellectual property?)
      <br>
      <br>
    </span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">5.           

      Response to Question 8:  Should the option of registration
      cancellation in lieu of disclosure be maintained or prohibited? 
      (Comments 24, 31)
      <br>
      (Please also note that the cancellation of the registration may
      not even be a tool in the toolkit of the privacy provider,
      depending on his degree of integration with the registrar.)<br>
      <br>
    </span>The law enforcement authority as discussed for the RAA was
    supposed to only include official state-run law enforcement bodies
    and such agencies designated by law with certain powers comparable
    to official LEAs. We have seen a small number of cases where the
    language was later used beyond what was intended to organizations
    that received no more than a latter from a government agency
    supporting that organizations work.<br>
    Our definition therefore should limit the scope of LEAs to that
    originally intended definition, not the unintended definition the
    language currently allows.<br>
    <br>
    Best,<br>
    <br>
    Volker<br>
    <br>
    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">Am 14.08.2015 um 23:50 schrieb
      Metalitz, Steven:<br>
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        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Pursuant
            to Mary’s request, I suggest the following additional issues
            raised in comments contained in the public comment tool
            document summarized, for possible consideration by the WG: <o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">3.           
            Response to Question 3:   Should the proposed requirement to
            label p/p registrations as such be dispensed with because it
            reduces the benefit or value of such registration? 
            (Comments 18, 25, 31) <o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">4.           
            Response to Question 8:  Should providers be required to
            forward all disclosure requests to customers, unless
            prohibited by law?  (Comments 17, 29)  (I.e., should this
            feature of Annex E be made applicable to all disclosure
            requests, not just those relating to intellectual property?)
            <o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">5.           
            Response to Question 8:  Should the option of registration
            cancellation in lieu of disclosure be prohibited?  (Comments
            24, 31)
            <o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">In
            addition, with regard to issue #2 as summarized  below (“law
            enforcement authority” definition):  since the definition in
            our initial report was copied from the 2013 RAA, can any
            registrars in our group report on whether or not this
            definition has thus far caused difficulties in the RAA
            context (e.g., have there been problems in determining
            whether a complaint from a “quasi-governmental entity”
            should be handled under RAA section 3.18.2, with its 24-hour
            time limit, rather than under 3.18.1)?    <o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Steve
            Metalitz
            <o:p></o:p></span></p>
        <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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            <p class="MsoNormal"><b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span
style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">
                <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>
                [<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
                <b>On Behalf Of </b>Mary Wong<br>
                <b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, August 11, 2015 4:04 PM<br>
                <b>To:</b> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a><br>
                <b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Issue-spotting for
                the WG's preliminary recommendations<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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        <p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Dear
              WG members,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">As
              noted on the WG call earlier today, please send to this
              your suggestions for issues arising out of specific public
              comments received on the WG’s Preliminary Recommendations
              #1 through #9 that you think should be discussed by the
              broader WG. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">From
              the call today, two issues with Recommendation #1 were
              identified for WG consideration:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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            <span
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              the definitions include lawyers and law firms that provide
              proxy registration services for their clients other than
              as a primary business offering;<o:p></o:p></span></li>
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            <span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">The
              possible breadth/vagueness of the proposed definition of
              “law enforcement authority” as including
              quasi-governmental and other entities<o:p></o:p></span></li>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Since
              the WG Public Comment Review Tool for these nine
              recommendations have been in circulation since 20 July,
              please treat this email as a “last call” for
              issue-spotting concerning these nine recommendations – as
              such, <b>please send any issues you spot to this list by
                Friday 14 August. Please also indicate in your email
                which comment(s)/commenter(s) you are referring to as
                raising the issue(s) you identify.
              </b>Note that, as confirmed during the WG call today, this
              exercise is for purposes of issue-spotting only at the
              moment rather than final resolution, which will depend on
              further discussions, as appropriate.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Staff
              will compile the issues so identified for review by the WG
              on our next call.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Thanks
              and cheers<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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          <p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Mary<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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