<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><div><div>Dear WG members,</div><div><br></div><div>Please find attached updated documents from Sub Team 2 for the WG call today. For your convenience, here is a summary of the changes that were made to the original documents that were first presented to the WG on 4 August:</div><div><br></div><div><b><i>(1) On Question 1 (Should registrants of domain names associated with commercial activities and which are used for online financial transactions be prohibited from using, or continuing to use, P/P Services? If so, why, and if not, why not?) -</i></b></div><ul><li>All previous summaries have now been combined into a single document, but the only change to the substance of the previously-reported analysis of the specific comments numbered #1-87 in the Public Comment Review Tool was to add references to specific commenters where previously only a general summary of comments was reported (these references are marked in red in the consolidated document).</li><li>A new section has been added that summarizes the Sub Team’s analysis and conclusions of the comments received via the Respect our Privacy website and the Save Domain Privacy petition.</li></ul><div><b><i>(2) On Question 2 (If you agree with this position, do you think it would be useful to adopt a definition of “commercial” or “transactional” to define those domains for which P/P service registrations should be disallowed? If so, what would the definition(s) be?) -</i></b></div><ul><li>The format and contents of the previously-reported analysis from 4 August remain unchanged; however, specific references to commenters rather than a general summary have been added and are shown in red</li><li>The initial reported analysis/conclusion has not yet been updated; instead, the Sub Team’s latest deliberations on this question will be presented orally to the WG on the Tuesday call for further WG discussion.</li></ul><div>Sub Team 2 members, I hope that in consolidating these documents I’ve not made things more confusing - thanks to everyone for working on the various documents, especially to Terri Stumme who did the latest additions between the Sub Team’s call yesterday and this email! Kiran and Terri will be presenting the Sub Team’s updated analysis to the WG on the call, for Questions 1 & 2 respectively. As always, the latest documents and all meeting recordings and transcripts can be found on the WG/Sub Team wiki pages: <a href="https://community.icann.org/x/0YZCAw">https://community.icann.org/x/0YZCAw</a></div><div><br></div><div>Cheers</div></div><div>Mary</div><div><br></div><div><div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Mary Wong</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Senior Policy Director</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Telephone: +1 603 574 4889</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Email: mary.wong@icann.org</font></font></div><div><br></div></div></div><div><br></div><span id="OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION"><div style="font-family:Calibri; font-size:11pt; text-align:left; color:black; BORDER-BOTTOM: medium none; BORDER-LEFT: medium none; PADDING-BOTTOM: 0in; PADDING-LEFT: 0in; PADDING-RIGHT: 0in; BORDER-TOP: #b5c4df 1pt solid; BORDER-RIGHT: medium none; PADDING-TOP: 3pt"><span style="font-weight:bold">From: </span> Mary Wong <<a href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org">mary.wong@icann.org</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span> Tuesday, September 1, 2015 at 02:15<br><span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span> "<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span> Agenda for WG call on Tuesday 1 September 2015<br></div><div><br></div><blockquote id="MAC_OUTLOOK_ATTRIBUTION_BLOCKQUOTE" style="BORDER-LEFT: #b5c4df 5 solid; PADDING:0 0 0 5; MARGIN:0 0 0 5;"><div><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 14px; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;"><div>Dear all,</div><div><br></div><div>The proposed agenda for the WG call on Tuesday 1 September is as follows:</div><div><ol><li><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Roll call/updates to SOI<o:p></o:p></span></li><li><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Report from Sub Team 2 (on Section 1.3.3) and discussion<o:p></o:p></span></li><li><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Review of Public Comment Review Tool Part 3 (circulated on 21 August) – for issue spotting<o:p></o:p></span></li><li><span style="font-size: 10.5pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">Next steps</span></li></ol><div>Sub Team 2’s wiki page containing its draft documents as well as recordings and transcripts of its meetings can be found here: <a href="https://community.icann.org/x/0YZCAw">https://community.icann.org/x/0YZCAw</a></div></div><div><br></div><div>Thanks and cheers</div><div>Mary</div><div><br></div><div><div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Mary Wong</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Senior Policy Director</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Telephone: +1 603 574 4889</font></font></div><div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Email: <a href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org">mary.wong@icann.org</a></font></font></div><div><br></div></div></div></div></div></blockquote></span></body></html>