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    Hi Mary, <br>
    I don't see the <span id="OLK_SRC_BODY_SECTION">"proposed updated
      text for Section 1.3.2 of WG report based on WG discussions of Sub
      Team 1’s recommendations" attached to the agenda email. Could you
      resend?<br>
      Tx,<br>
      Kathy<br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 9/22/2015 5:35 AM, Mary Wong wrote:<br>
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          <div>Hello again everyone,</div>
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          <div>Attached is a document from Sub Team 4 that shows most of
            the general comments it has reviewed, its categorizations of
            these into one or more of seven possible categories, and
            other notes from the Sub Team. As you’ll recall, Sub Team 4
            was tasked to review those public comments that were placed
            by staff into Part 4 of the WG’s Public Comment Review Tool,
            as being comments that, while substantive, were not
            formulated to specifically answer or address a particular WG
            recommendation (those that were having already been placed
            into either Parts 1, 2 or 3 of the WG’s Public Comment
            Review Tool or referred to one of the other three Sub
            Teams).</div>
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            <div>For completeness of record, please note that the
              comments that were reviewed and reflected in this document
              do not specifically include the statements sent in through
              Respect Our Privacy, the petition from Save Domain
              Privacy, or the additional 500+ pages of comments made by
              signatories of the Save Domain Privacy petition. These
              have either been referred to (and reviewed by) Sub Teams 2
              or 3 (as applicable), or generally summarized them into a
              set of categories for Sub Teams 2, 3 and 4 in mid-August
              (as noted in Section II of Part 4 of the WG’s Public
              Comment Review Tool).</div>
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      <div>Thanks and cheers</div>
      <div>Mary</div>
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          <div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
                class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Mary Wong</font></font></div>
          <div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
                class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Senior Policy
                Director</font></font></div>
          <div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
                class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Internet
                Corporation for Assigned Names &amp; Numbers (ICANN)</font></font></div>
          <div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
                class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Telephone: +1
                603 574 4889</font></font></div>
          <div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
                class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Email:
                <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org">mary.wong@icann.org</a></font></font></div>
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            style="font-weight:bold">From: </span> Mary Wong &lt;<a
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          <span style="font-weight:bold">Date: </span> Tuesday,
          September 22, 2015 at 02:59<br>
          <span style="font-weight:bold">To: </span> "<a
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          <span style="font-weight:bold">Subject: </span> Agenda and
          documents for WG call on Tuesday 22 September<br>
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              <div>Dear WG members,</div>
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              <div>The proposed agenda for the next WG call, scheduled
                for Tuesday 22 September at 1400 UTC, is as follows:</div>
              <ol>
                <li>Roll call/updates to SOI</li>
                <li>Discuss proposed updated text for Section 1.3.2 of
                  WG report based on WG discussions of Sub Team 1’s
                  recommendations (see attached document and note below)</li>
                <li>Discuss proposed updated text for Section 1.3.3 of
                  WG report based on WG co-chairs’ suggested text (see
                  attached document – as circulated to the WG on 18
                  September)</li>
                <li>Status update/report from Sub Team 4 (co-conveners:
                  Kathy Kleiman &amp; Paul McGrady; document
                  forthcoming)</li>
                <li>[if time permits] Review list of issues spotted from
                  Parts 1-3 of the WG Public Comment Review Tool (see
                  attached document)</li>
                <li>Next steps</li>
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                <div>Important note on Agenda Item #2: The attached text
                  has not yet been fully reviewed by Sub Team 1. It was
                  prepared by staff based on the recommendations and
                  reports from Sub Team 1 and the consequent WG
                  discussions and conclusions.</div>
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                <div>Thanks and cheers</div>
                <div>Mary</div>
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                    <div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
                          class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Mary
                          Wong</font></font></div>
                    <div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
                          class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Senior
                          Policy Director</font></font></div>
                    <div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
                          class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Internet
                          Corporation for Assigned Names &amp; Numbers
                          (ICANN)</font></font></div>
                    <div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
                          class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Telephone:
                          +1 603 574 4889</font></font></div>
                    <div><font class="Apple-style-span" color="#000000"><font
                          class="Apple-style-span" face="Calibri">Email:
                          <a moz-do-not-send="true"
                            href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org">mary.wong@icann.org</a></font></font></div>
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