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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I agree with Darcy and Kathy. We don’t want to inadvertently cause a customer stampede if a P/P provider gets an easily curable
breach notice, especially if it is for a clerical issue (failure to file a report, pay ICANN taxes, etc.)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Best,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Paul<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:windowtext;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:windowtext;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">
gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Kathy Kleiman<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, November 30, 2015 3:27 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Final Report with updated recommendations, and next steps<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span lang="EN-GB">This wording makes sense to me. Customers learn of the de-accreditation when it is made final. They then have 30 days to find another Provider, relocate their proxy/privacy registration and
protect their privacy. That sounds right and I support Darcy's edit.<br>
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Best, Kathy<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">On 11/30/2015 4:10 PM, Darcy Southwell wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Candara","sans-serif";mso-fareast-language:EN-US">My suggestion is more along the lines of this (changes in red):<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";mso-fareast-language:EN-US">"<u>Principle 1</u>: *** </span><span style="font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";mso-fareast-language:EN-US">the WG recommends
that ICANN explore practicable ways in which customers may be notified </span><s><span style="font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:red;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">during the breach notice process (or its equivalent)</span></s><span style="font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:red;mso-fareast-language:EN-US">
once ICANN issues a termination of accreditation notice but before the de-accreditation becomes effective. The WG recommends that de-accreditation become effective 30 days after notice of termination</span><span style="font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";mso-fareast-language:EN-US">.</span><span style="font-size:11.5pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";mso-fareast-language:EN-US">”</span><span style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US">
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";mso-fareast-language:EN-US">From:
</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";mso-fareast-language:EN-US"><<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of "Metalitz, Steven" <<a href="mailto:met@msk.com">met@msk.com</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, November 30, 2015 at 12:57 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Volker Greimann <<a href="mailto:vgreimann@key-systems.net">vgreimann@key-systems.net</a>>, "<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Final Report with updated recommendations, and next steps<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="line-height:normal"><span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Candara","sans-serif";mso-fareast-language:EN-US"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Perhaps one way to reformulate this to capture Darcy’s suggestion is to say “practicable ways in which customers may be notified as soon as
possible after a breach notice is issued and well before it becomes effective.” </span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""> </span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:windowtext">
<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Volker Greimann<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Monday, November 30, 2015 12:31 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Final Report with updated recommendations, and next steps</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span lang="EN-GB">That sounds reasonable. The notice period could be seen as similar to the suspension period for registrars currently in place where a registrar is no langer able to accept new registrations
or transfers, but can still serve its existing customers. <br>
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I support the suggested change of moving the notice out of the breach notice period.<br>
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Volker<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Am 30.11.2015 um 17:38 schrieb Darcy Southwell:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">I have some concerns about the language contained in Principle 1 on page 17. It’s certainly important the WG’s recommendations focus on minimizing any risks of exposing private customer data during the de-accreditation
process. However, notifying customers “during the breach notice process (or its equivalent)” seems problematic. This assumes every P/P provider that receives a breach notice will end up de-accredited. That’s clearly not the case in the current registrar
breach process, and it’s unlikely to be case with the P/P providers. Second, there could be significant negative impact to businesses that receive just one breach notice even though the breach ends up cured. The focus of the breach process should not be
to penalize every provider that’s ever done something in violation of the accreditation contract – and that’s what this approach implies. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">It seems the better approach would be to notify customers somewhere between the date of the termination notice and the effective date of the accreditation termination. If we consider a 30–day period between the termination
notice and termination effective date, there is ample time to notify customers. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Look forward to tomorrow’s meeting.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB">Darcy<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">From:
</span></b><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif""><<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of "Metalitz, Steven" <<a href="mailto:met@msk.com">met@msk.com</a>><br>
<b>Date: </b>Monday, November 23, 2015 at 1:33 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>'Mary Wong' <<a href="mailto:mary.wong@icann.org">mary.wong@icann.org</a>>, "<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Final Report with updated recommendations, and next steps</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt;text-indent:.5in"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US">Thanks to Mary and her colleagues for generating this final report text.
</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt;text-indent:.5in"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US">As noted on last week’s call, unless it seemed necessary to hold our usual weekly meeting this week (tomorrow), we would cancel it, in order
to give WG members time to review this text carefully. The call tomorrow has now been cancelled, and we urge you to use this week for this review, and for consultation with the relevant GNSO stakeholder group/constituency, or with ALAC groups, as appropriate.
</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt;text-indent:.5in"><span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-fareast-language:EN-US">The goal of the review and consultation is to identify any mistakes or ambiguities in this text that would interfere with your ability to
respond to the consensus call. We urge WG members to bring any such issues up on the WG list as soon as possible, which will help us in fashioning a productive agenda for the next WG call on Tuesday December 1. We have allocated 90 minutes for this call
(beginning at 1430 UTC) to provide additional time to discuss and resolve any errors or ambiguities identified. We anticipate that this will be the final WG call before the close of the consensus call on Monday, December 7. All expressions of support for
the recommendations of the Final Report, as well as any separate statements regarding recommendations that you cannot support, will be due at that time. Thanks to all for your continued efforts as we bring this report across the finish line!
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<b>Sent:</b> Friday, November 20, 2015 5:39 PM<br>
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<b>Subject:</b> [Gnso-ppsai-pdp-wg] Final Report with updated recommendations, and next steps</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Please find attached both a clean and marked-up (red-lined) version of the updated draft Final Report. As the marked-up version may be somewhat
difficult to read given the number of paragraphs moved around, added to or deleted, we hope the clean version will be helpful in providing a straightforward read of the proposed final form of the WG recommendations while the mark-up will show where the changes
were made from the draft report that was circulated on 8 October.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">As noted in the WG Work Plan, circulation of this updated document opens the period for the WG’s consensus call. Following this, in accordance
with the GNSO's WG Guidelines, the WG co-chairs will make a final evaluation of the consensus support levels and, if necessary, assign specific designations of such to each individual WG recommendation. Any minority statements must therefore also be submitted
by that time. As noted in the WG Work Plan, the co-chairs plan to close the consensus call period by
<b>Monday 7 December 2015</b>. Unless determined otherwise as a result of this consensus period, the recommendations are currently marked as Full Consensus of the WG.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">All the substantive changes can be seen in the Executive Summary, which retain the format and numbering of the recommendations from the earlier draft. Most of the
additional WG conclusions based on discussions subsequent to 8 October were added to existing numbered recommendations. The relevant portions of Section V (WG Deliberations) and VII (WG Final Recommendations) have also been updated to reflect the substantive
changes to the numbered WG recommendations in the Executive Summary. Most of the rest of the report, and much of even Sections and VII, remain unchanged from both the Initial Report (May 2015) and the draft Final Report.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3">
<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">The final version of the Illustrative Disclosure Framework reflecting the consensus of Sub Team 3 has been incorporated into the report as Annex B. P<u>lease note
that the final recommendation includes only one option for dispute resolution, which is jurisdiction over arbitration, in language discussed by the WG and finalized by the Sub Team.</u> There is also a recommendation for a post-implementation review of the
overall framework, followed by periodic reviews thereafter.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3">
<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">On transfers, you will see from the recommendations that language has been added, in particular to #8 and #21.
<u>The former makes reference to the effect of IRTP-C, and the latter – in relation to de-accreditation – adds a specific recommendation to the effect that a registrar must lift the otherwise-required lock under IRTP-C if so requested by the beneficial user
of a proxy registration</u>. This recommendation is based on the narrower option presented by the Registrar Services team to the WG following the WG call earlier this week. We have also retained the original WG recommendation that the next review of the IRTP
expressly include consideration of the effect on P/P registrations.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3">
<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">On de-accreditation, we have replaced the original specific individual recommendations with the new set of three general principles recently reviewed by the WG.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3">
<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">On definitions, we have included those for a Privacy Service and a Proxy Service in the list of definitions, and added the most recent version of the new, supplemental
language about registrars not knowingly accepting registrations from accredited (versus unaccredited) P/P service providers, and the consequence that an unaccredited provider effectively therefore has all the responsibility of a Registered Name Holder.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3">
<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">On LEA, we have added language to reflect the WG’s further agreement in Dublin about “importing” a few critical elements from the Illustrative Disclosure Framework
into a suggestion that these be included in any future LEA request framework that may be developed.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3">
<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">In the general recommendation section, we have added recommendations based on the work of Sub Team 3, as discussed by the WG in Dublin, for an educational/outreach
program and for the periodic provision of aggregated statistics to ICANN by providers.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3">
<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size:10.5pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"">Elsewhere, we have added or edited language, again based on the WG’s discussions in Dublin and subsequently, to flesh out or clarify existing recommendations. Most
of these are indicated with a comment box explaining where the change came from.</span><span lang="EN-GB"><o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
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