<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I found a few typos in the draft circulated. (For future review exercises, I'd recommend a Word document or a Google Doc so that a mark-up can be created, rather than a PDF that is apparently locked). No issues with the substance.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">First two bullet points on page 1: Delete space in "next- generation"</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Question 3 on page 3: "address" should be "addressed"</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Last paragraph of document: There are some tracked changes that need to be "accepted."</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sun, May 8, 2016 at 9:24 PM, Gomes, Chuck <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com" target="_blank">cgomes@verisign.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">All,<br>
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Let's extend the deadline for comments on the outreach message to tomorrow COB, i.e., Monday COB wherever you are.<br>
<span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><br>
Chuck<br>
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Subject: Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] Draft early outreach message for WG review<br>
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Hi Chuck, Lisa and All,<br>
Tx you for the reminders. I am assuming you will be receiving some input today and tomorrow. For those of us with children and families, these are busy weekends of spring activities and end of year events. Happy Mother's Day to all celebrating!!<br>
<br>
Best,<br>
Kathy<br>
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On 5/8/2016 10:17 AM, Gomes, Chuck wrote:<br>
> If no feedback is received by our deadline today, we will assume that it is okay to send the message out as drafted.<br>
><br>
> Chuck<br>
><br>
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> [mailto:<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>] On Behalf Of Lisa Phifer<br>
> Sent: Saturday, May 07, 2016 12:57 PM<br>
> To: RDS PDP WG<br>
> Subject: Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] Draft early outreach message for WG<br>
> review<br>
><br>
> Dear all,<br>
><br>
> A reminder that PDP WG feedback if any on the attached early outreach message is due no later than tomorrow - Sunday 8 May 23.59 UTC.<br>
><br>
> Best, Lisa<br>
><br>
> At 12:07 PM 5/3/2016, Lisa Phifer wrote:<br>
>> Dear all,<br>
>><br>
>> As agreed during today's WG call, attached please find a slightly<br>
>> revised draft input template to solicit early input from ICANN<br>
>> SOs/ACs and GNSO SG/Cs. This is the template discussed in today's WG call.<br>
>><br>
>> Remember, there will be many opportunities for community input<br>
>> throughout this PDP. The attached input template is to be used to<br>
>> initiate the early outreach required of every PDP to inform the WG at<br>
>> the start of its work. The template is a tool used successfully by<br>
>> other PDP WG's to solicit structured input, along with any additional<br>
>> input each group wishes to provide.<br>
>><br>
>> WG member feedback on this draft input template is welcome: please<br>
>> send any feedback to the entire WG list <<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>><br>
>> no later than Sunday 8 May 23.59 UTC.<br>
>><br>
>> Our goal is to send the final version of this template to initiate<br>
>> early outreach next week.<br>
>><br>
>> Best, Lisa<br>
>><br>
>><br>
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