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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Ayden is correct.&nbsp; This is not the time for examination and revision of ‘possible requirements’; we will do that in our deliberation step.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> Ayden Férdeline [mailto:icann@ferdeline.com]
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<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, May 26, 2016 11:12 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Greg Aaron<br>
<b>Cc:</b> Gomes, Chuck; gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org; lisa@corecom.com<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] Sign-Up Sheet - Task 8<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Dear Greg,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Thank you for your comments. I was under the impression that at this time we were simply gathering possible requirements, and not debating their content or merits. Even if there is a feeling that I have not faithfully carried through the views of the Special
 Rapporteur - and that may well be a fair comment - I would still like these to be included in our list of possible requirements please.&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">If we do not want or it does not feel appropriate attributing these possible requirements to the Special Rapporteur's report, that is fine.&nbsp;When the timing is appropriate, I will flesh them
 out with supporting evidence to help the WG digest what is being asked. I think this is the fairest path forward, but of course I am open to feedback from others if there is a feeling that I/we should be approaching this task differently. Thanks&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Best wishes,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Ayden<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">On Thu, May 26, 2016 3:48 PM, Greg Aaron
<a href="mailto:gca@icginc.com" target="_blank">gca@icginc.com</a> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><a name="_MailEndCompose"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Dear Ayden:<o:p></o:p></span></a></p>
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<p><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">I have several questions about your summaries; I suggest that they need further examination, and revision, before they are added to the list.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p>&nbsp;</o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">I am not sure how you derived some of your requirements from the source UN document.&nbsp; These are non-exhaustive examples:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p style="text-indent:-.25in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Symbol">·</span><span style="font-size:7.0pt">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;
</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">The UN doc said:&nbsp; “Contemporary research over the past five years has highlighted ever-increasing concern of citizens with the ease with which their good name and reputation may be attacked
 and destroyed on the Internet as well as the sense of helplessness that is felt by many netizens when seeking safeguards and remedies in cases of defamation and/or breach of privacy.”&nbsp; That is not a policy statement or requirement from the UN, and the document
 does not say that online systems must be designed to protect people’s reputations.&nbsp; So I am not sure how you got from there to here: “The RDS must not be used to allow the good name and/or reputation of a citizen to be attacked and/or destroyed. There must
 be concrete safeguards protecting privacy, and real remedies for violations to privacy, dignity and reputation online which are or were enabled by the RDS.”<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Another of your summaries is: “If there is gated access, the RDS must feature strong encryption.”&nbsp; I do not see where this UN document makes any recommendations about the use of encryption.&nbsp;
 It notes that there is concern about back-doors to circumvent encryption, and does not go so far as to say that back-doors are against UN policy.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">The UN document does not say that RDS systems “must foster cyberpeace.”&nbsp; It says “The SRP is firmly of the opinion that Cyberspace risks being ruined by Cyberwar and Cyber-surveillance
 and that Governments and other stakeholders should work towards Cyberpeace. In this sense at least, privacy protection is also part of the Cyberpeace movement.”&nbsp; In context of the document, that's a statement about cyberwar and mass state-sponsored cybersurveillance
 (cf Snowden).&nbsp; Those things are not about anything like access to domain registration records.
<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p style="margin-left:.25in;text-indent:.25in"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Also, heaven help us if ICANN is responsible for fostering world peace.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">I also have an observation about attribution and precision.&nbsp; The document you summarized makes general statements about privacy and related subjects.&nbsp; It never refers specifically to WHOIS
 or domain registration systems, or to any specific data collection systems.&nbsp; So when you summaries say “The RDS must” do one thing or another, it makes it sound like the UN Special Rapporteur was writing specifically about RDS systems.&nbsp; I am sure this was
 unintentional.&nbsp; There are other documents that specifically talk about RDS systems and domain data, and I just suggest that the WG must be clear about what authority said what about what.&nbsp; Direct quotes from sources are preferable.&nbsp; That may not always be
 possible, but I think your summaries went beyond paraphrasing. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">With best wishes,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">--Greg<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a> [<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Ayden Férdeline<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, May 26, 2016 9:24 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Gomes, Chuck &lt;<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com">cgomes@verisign.com</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] Sign-Up Sheet - Task 8<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Hi Lisa,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">I would like to add the following six possible requirements to the list please. These have been inspired by the report from the UN Special Rapporteur on the Right to Privacy, though I have adjusted the wording
 where necessary for the purposes of this exercise.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><b><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Foundational Questions (FQ)</span></b><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">The RDS must foster cyberpeace. Cyberspace will be destroyed by cyberwar and cybersurveillance if privacy is not respected online. Cyberspace will not be a peaceful sphere if the RDS enables, in any form, threats
 posed by terrorists, the activities of some States, organised crime, and/or corporations acting illegitimately.<o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
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<p><b><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Privacy (PR)</span></b><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Any collection of personal data must be both conscious and consenting. Where individuals are aware that they are making data available for public view, it must be made clear the extent of the risk to them and
 their reputation were this data to be used or misused.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo2">
<span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">The RDS must not be used to allow the good name and/or reputation of a citizen to be attacked and/or destroyed. There must be concrete safeguards protecting privacy, and real remedies for violations to privacy,
 dignity and reputation online which are or were enabled by the RDS.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l2 level1 lfo2">
<span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">In the event that the decision is made for the RDS to contain personal data, the RDS must actively and regularly raise awareness amongst those individuals whose personal data is stored to help them understand
 what privacy is, what their privacy rights are, and how their privacy may be infringed upon. Information must also be actively provided on how privacy risks can be mitigated or minimised, and on what remedies are available if necessary. It is not sufficient
 for this information to be communicated solely via electronic means.<o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
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<p><b><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Gated Access (GA)</span></b><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">If there is gated access, the RDS must feature strong encryption.<o:p></o:p></span></li><li class="MsoNormal" style="mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo3">
<span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">The RDS must not be engineered to contain any back-doors. By introducing a technical input into an encryption product that would enable any party, even authorities, access to data, would also make encrypted data
 vulnerable to criminals, terrorists and foreign intelligence services, among others. This would have an undesirable consequence for the security of data stored in the RDS.<o:p></o:p></span></li></ul>
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<p><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Best wishes,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Ayden Férdeline<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">On Thu, May 26, 2016 2:06 PM, Gomes, Chuck
<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com" target="_blank">cgomes@verisign.com</a> wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I think it would be helpful if the instructions for using the wiki were distributed to the full WG again.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">
</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</span></a></span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">
 [</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</span></a></span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Lisa Phifer<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, May 25, 2016 9:50 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> “Ayden Férdeline”<br>
<b>Cc:</b> </span><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</span></a></span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Tahoma&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] Sign-Up Sheet - Task 8<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p style="margin-bottom:12.0pt"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Hi Ayden,
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Thanks for volunteering to cover this document. I have added your name to the sign-up sheet.
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Thanks too for letting us know that you had trouble editing the sign-up sheet to add your name. You must log in to the wiki in order to edit a page, but no edit restrictions are defined for that wiki page. If you have logged in but do not see an “Edit” button
 at the upper right of the sign-up sheet, please let us know.<br>
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Best, Lisa<br>
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At 03:09 PM 5/25/2016, Ayden Férdeline wrote:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Hi Lisa,<br>
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I would like to review the following document for requirements please:<br>
<br>
<a href="https://links5.mixmaxusercontent.com/aMjjKHWxnLSD3SEwj/l/CHxJdUTNoYMNgePHQ?messageId=2tuqVnr2DYNdkaiua&amp;rn=&amp;re=i02bj5SbvNWZy92YAF2cpxmI">Human Rights Council - Report by the UN Special Rapporteur on the right to privacy (2016)</a><br>
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I do not appear to have the ability to edit the wiki page - I wonder if global editing is enabled?Â
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Best wishes,<br>
<br>
Ayden<br>
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On Tue, May 24, 2016 7:46 PM, Lisa Phifer <a href="mailto:lisa@corecom.com">lisa@corecom.com</a> wrote:
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<p style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Per <a href="https://community.icann.org/x/KA6OAw">
RDS PDP WG Call 24 May, 2016</a>, Action item #3: Staff to create a sign-up list to facilitate volunteers coming forward to review documents and identify possible requirements. WG members to sign up to review documents for possible requirements within 48 hours
 of circulation of sign-up sheet (see attached document, also posted on the WG’s wiki at
<a href="https://community.icann.org/x/shOOAw">https://community.icann.org/x/shOOAw</a>).
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<p style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Instructions: The
<a href="https://community.icann.org/x/shOOAw">wiki sign-up sheet</a> is to be used by RDS PDP WG members to volunteer to extract possible requirements for gTLD registration data or directory services (see
<a href="https://community.icann.org/x/8waOAw">https://community.icann.org/x/8waOAw</a></span><span style="font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;"> )</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">. To volunteer, visit the wiki sign-up sheet at
<a href="https://community.icann.org/x/shOOAw">https://community.icann.org/x/shOOAw</a>. Sign up for a key input document that is familiar to you by picking an unassigned document from the sign-up sheet and entering your name in the â€œVolunteerâ€</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&#157;</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">
 column. You may volunteer to review multiple documents, but please sign up for only one document at a time to give all a chance to contribute in parallel. If you are unable to access the wiki sign-up sheet, you may reply to this email asking staff to sign
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<span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">How to submit possible requirements: Send all possible requirements via email to
<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>. For each possible requirement:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-family:Symbol">·       </span><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;Identify the associated charter question(s);<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-family:Symbol">·       </span><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;Succinctly quote or paraphrase a possible requirement, focusing on phase 1 policy requirements;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&nbsp;Cite the source document by title and hyperlink. Possible requirements may also be submitted from new sources not already listed below.
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<p style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">For example, Greg just submitted this possible User/Purpose requirement quoted from SAC055: â€œThere is a critical need for a policy asserting the purpose of collecting and maintaining
 registration data. This policy should address the operational concerns of the parties who collect, maintain or use this data as it relates to ICANN’s remit.â€</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">&#157;</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">
 Additional examples can be found in draft 1 of the possible requirements list, posted at
<a href="https://community.icann.org/x/8waOAw">https://community.icann.org/x/8waOAw</a>.
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<p style="margin-left:.5in"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;">Due date: WG members are encouraged to make progress on this task before the next WG call (31 May 2016), at which time the WG will assess progress and determine a reasonable extension
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Ayden Férdeline<br>
<a href="https://community.icann.org/display/gnsosoi/Ayden&#43;Férdeline&#43;SOI">Statement of Interest</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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