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<p>Greg, As I understand it the "two camps" are just the providers
of data and the users of data. <br>
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<p>The wording might be <font color="#660000">"...or other groups,
may have interests as providers of data or as users of data
depending on circumstances."</font><br>
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Sam L.<br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix"><font size="-1">On 8/18/2016 2:58 PM,
Greg Aaron wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="-1"><a moz-do-not-send="true"
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are turned on.<o:p></o:p></span></a></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="-1"><span
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext">The
first paragraph now quotes from the WG’s charter. The
last draft paraphrased, which left out relevant sections
of the WG’s mission. (Quoting from source docs can help
us avoid omissions, scope creep, etc.)<o:p></o:p></span></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="-1"><span
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="-1"><span
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext">A
question: the last draft said “Members of the global
population of end-users, whether they are individuals,
organizations, companies, or other groups, may fall into
either camp depending on circumstances.”
<o:p></o:p></span></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="-1"><span
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style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext">What
are the two camps being referred to, and what are we
trying to say with this sentence? It does not seem to
be about anonymous registrants in the preceding
sentence, otherwise we’d say “registrants” rather than
“end-users.” Are we trying to say that there is a wide
range of end-users and they may have various views on
the issues depending on their use cases and
circumstances? <o:p></o:p></span></span></font></p>
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best,<o:p></o:p></span></span></font></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><font size="-1"><span
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