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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Sara,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">I agree with you that “</span>it’s not part of ICANN’s remit to resolve stakeholder tensions<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">”
but I think it is important to note that this is a problem statement for this WG, not for ICANN in general. And I do believe that the WG will have to try to find solutions to mitigate the tensions among stakeholders with regard to possible RDS requirements
and policies. In fact, I believe that this is a key point of the overall problem statement. If I am incorrect on that, then I encourage members of the small drafting team to correct me as well as anyone in the WG.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Chuck<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Sara Bockey<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, August 18, 2016 5:59 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Ayden Férdeline; Andrew Sullivan<br>
<b>Cc:</b> gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For WG Review - Redlined Problem Statement<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"GT Walsheim Light"">Thank you, Ayden, this is very helpful.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"GT Walsheim Light"">I’ve added one comment to the document for consideration.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"GT Walsheim Light"">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"GT Walsheim Light""><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"GT Walsheim Light"">Sara
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">From:
</span></b><span style="font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black"><<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>> on behalf of Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com">icann@ferdeline.com</a>></span><span style="font-family:MingLiU;color:black"><br>
</span><b><span style="font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Reply-To: </span>
</b><span style="font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com">icann@ferdeline.com</a>></span><span style="font-family:MingLiU;color:black"><br>
</span><b><span style="font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Date: </span>
</b><span style="font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:black">Thursday, August 18, 2016 at 2:06 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Andrew Sullivan <<a href="mailto:ajs@anvilwalrusden.com">ajs@anvilwalrusden.com</a>><br>
<b>Cc: </b>"<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>" <<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject: </b>Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For WG Review - Redlined Problem Statement<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Greetings all,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please find attached a revised redlined problem statement. I have taken care to incorporate comments which were made on the list over the past 24 hours, while preserving more of the work of the problem statement team. Thanks!<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best wishes,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Ayden<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Subject: Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For WG Review - Redlined Problem Statement<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Local Time: August 18, 2016 9:02 PM<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">UTC Time: August 18, 2016 8:02 PM<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">From: <a href="mailto:ajs@anvilwalrusden.com">ajs@anvilwalrusden.com</a><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">To: <a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I am comfortable, I think, with this version.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">I wonder a little about "[various stakeholders] have vested interests<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">in an RDS system that contains accurate and complete registration data<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">…." Quote apart from the "vested" quibble we had the other day, the<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">rest of the ¶ goes on to talk about how some want the RDS to be less<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">complete than others. So I worry that this part of the problem<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">statement might be attempting to assert a conclusion that we're<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">actually debating.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 06:58:43PM +0000, Greg Aaron wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Attached is a revised draft, as requested. Red-line and comments are turned on.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> The first paragraph now quotes from the WG’s charter. The last draft paraphrased, which left out relevant sections of the WG’s mission. (Quoting from source docs can help us avoid omissions, scope creep, etc.)<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> A question: the last draft said “Members of the global population of end-users, whether they are individuals, organizations, companies, or other groups, may fall into either camp depending on circumstances.”<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> What are the two camps being referred to, and what are we trying to say with this sentence? It does not seem to be about anonymous registrants in the preceding sentence, otherwise we’d say “registrants” rather than “end-users.” Are we
trying to say that there is a wide range of end-users and they may have various views on the issues depending on their use cases and circumstances?<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> All best,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> --Greg<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> From: Gomes, Chuck [<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com">mailto:cgomes@verisign.com</a>]<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Sent: Wednesday, August 17, 2016 12:25 PM<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Cc: RDS PDP WG <<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Subject: RE: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For WG Review - Redlined Problem Statement<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Hopefully, Greg will consider Sam’s comments in creating a new redline version along with any other comments that might be submitted before he creates it.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Greg – If you are unable to create a new redline, please let me know and I will ensure that it gets done. The advantage of you doing it is that you get to make the calls regarding how your comments are applied as well as how to apply
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Chuck<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> From: <a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org%3cmailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">
gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>> [<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>] On Behalf Of Sam Lanfranco<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Sent: Wednesday, August 17, 2016 11:59 AM<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> To: Ayden Férdeline; Greg Aaron<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Cc: RDS PDP WG<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Subject: Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For WG Review - Redlined Problem Statement<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> I want to quibble a bit about wording here.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> First, we normally think of "Consumers" as "end-users" so adding end-users may be redundant.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Second, vested interest is normally taken to mean "a personal stake or involvement" in something like an undertaking (e.g. policy making) or state of affairs (e.g. policy implementation), or something with an expectation of financial
gain. Those who are stakeholders have, by definition, a vested interest. I don't like the proposed wording around "claim to". If there is a claim issue here, it is whether or not one qualifies as a stakeholder,. It is not whether or not stakeholders have a
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Sam L., NPOC/CSIH<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> On 8/17/2016 11:00 AM, Ayden Férdeline wrote:<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Hi Greg,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Thank you for taking the time to suggest these revisions. I would like to respectfully submit that we maintain, in the first paragraph, the reference to the "ever-evolving global Internet."<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> With regards to the second paragraph, you suggested: “Consumers, the domain name industry, governments, intellectual property owners, registrants, and a variety of other stakeholders all have a vested interest in an RDS system…”<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> A fairer framing would be: “Consumers, the domain name industry, governments, intellectual property owners, registrants, end-users, and a variety of other stakeholders claim to have a vested interest in an RDS system…”<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Best wishes,<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Ayden Férdeline<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> linkedin.com/in/ferdeline<<a href="http://www.linkedin.com/in/ferdeline">http://www.linkedin.com/in/ferdeline</a>><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Local Time: August 17, 2016 3:45 PM<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> UTC Time: August 17, 2016 2:45 PM<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> From: <a href="mailto:gca@icginc.com%3cmailto:gca@icginc.com">
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<p class="MsoNormal">> To: <a href="mailto:lisa@corecom.com,gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org%3cmailto:lisa@corecom.com,gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org">
lisa@corecom.com,gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org<mailto:lisa@corecom.com,gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Thanks to the drafting team. My comments are as follows.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> First paragraph: the addition of “(domain name)” does not help, and makes the sentence more confusing.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> First paragraph: as per the meeting notes, “ever-evolving global Internet” is probably not necessary. (And divining the future is difficult.)<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Top of second paragraph: Add the words “a variety of other stakeholders’” so as to read: “Consumers, the domain name industry, governments, intellectual property owners, registrants, and a variety of other stakeholders all have a vested
interest in an RDS system…” The current list in the draft is not comprehensive, and other stakeholders have been identified by our WG, the EWG, etc. We cannot imply that the current list is authoritative or complete.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Second paragraph: “performant” is not a defined word in the English language; it’s more software developer slang. In a document like this, I suggest we use words that are well-defined and our global audience can rely upon. I think we
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Third paragraph: Regarding this section: “This understanding will enable the Working Group to ensure the policies which enable an effective RDS also define a secure and safe environment for commerce and communication.” This formulation
seems overly broad. While security, abuse, and privacy are considerations, a “safe environment for commerce and communication” on the Internet is much broader than those, and involves far more than registration data.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> So, what are drafters aiming at here, and can a reasonable scope and intent be expressed? I wonder if that sentence is needed at all.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Third paragraph: “within the RDS”. Do you mean “that uses the RDS”? “Within the RDS” implies being embedded somehow. As always, use of the term “system” can be confusing if not defined on context, since sometimes in this WG “system” refers
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<p class="MsoNormal">> From: <a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org%3cmailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">
gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org<mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>> [<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>] On Behalf Of Lisa Phifer<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Sent: Wednesday, August 17, 2016 2:35 AM<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> To: RDS PDP WG <<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>><<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org">mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Subject: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For WG Review - Redlined Problem Statement<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Attached please find a redlined version of the problem statement produced by the drafting team for WG review. This redline includes edits discussed during today's WG call.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Action item: WG to review redline version of the problem statement and share any further comments/edits with the mailing list ahead of next week's meeting.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">> Thank you to the drafting team for their work, and to all WG members for reviewing the attached redline with the goal of finalizing this statement on the next WG call.<o:p></o:p></p>
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