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<p>Mark, Greg, et. al., <br>
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In an effort to keep things both simple and clear, <i>might not
"Camp #2" below simply be a specific example of those in Camp #1</i>
who want data to be "provided/available" under restricted
conditions. <br>
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Maybe the Camp #1 wording could be further tuned to say "... Various
stakeholders may have different and distinct requirements..." <br>
This replaces "..have similar yet distinct requirements..." and
inserts a conditional "may" in front of "have". <br>
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Sam L. <br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix"><font color="#660000">On 8/22/2016 6:43
PM, Mark Svancarek wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font color="#660000"><span
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the current draft has some changes which obscure the
original 2-camps distinction.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font color="#660000"><span
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><font
color="#660000"><i><span style="font-size: 11pt;
font-family: "Calibri",sans-serif;">Consumers,
the domain name industry, governments, and intellectual
property owners, and individual registrants all have a
vested interest in an RDS system which contains accurate
and complete registration data…. These stakeholders have
similar yet distinct requirements regarding the
particular data which should be collected and the
conditions under which it can be viewed.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><font color="#660000"><span
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><font
color="#660000"><i><span style="font-size: 11pt;
font-family: "Calibri",sans-serif;">Additionally,
there are some entities which desire anonymity for free
speech and personal safety reasons, and their
requirements regarding data collection and data access
may be at odds with the aforementioned stakeholders.
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