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    <p>Mark, Greg, et. al.,  <br>
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    In an effort to keep things both simple and clear, <i>might not
      "Camp #2" below simply be a specific example of those in Camp #1</i>
    who want data to be "provided/available" under restricted
    conditions. <br>
    <br>
    Maybe the Camp #1 wording could be further tuned to say "... Various
    stakeholders may have different and distinct requirements..." <br>
    This replaces "..have similar yet distinct requirements..." and
    inserts a conditional "may" in front of "have". <br>
    <br>
    Sam L. <br>
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    <div class="moz-cite-prefix"><font color="#660000">On 8/22/2016 6:43
        PM, Mark Svancarek wrote:<br>
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              style="font-size: 11pt; font-family:
              &quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;">Resending – I see that
              the current draft has some changes which obscure the
              original 2-camps distinction.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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        <p class="MsoNormal"><font color="#660000"><span
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            color="#660000"><i><span style="font-size: 11pt;
                font-family: &quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;">Consumers,
                the domain name industry, governments, and intellectual
                property owners, and individual registrants all have a
                vested interest in an RDS system which contains accurate
                and complete registration data…. These stakeholders have
                similar yet distinct requirements regarding the
                particular data which should be collected and the
                conditions under which it can be viewed. 
                <o:p></o:p></span></i></font></p>
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              style="font-size: 11pt; font-family:
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            color="#660000"><i><span style="font-size: 11pt;
                font-family: &quot;Calibri&quot;,sans-serif;">Additionally,
                there are some entities which desire anonymity for free
                speech and personal safety reasons, and their
                requirements regarding data collection and data access
                may be at odds with the aforementioned stakeholders.
                <o:p></o:p></span></i></font></p>
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