<div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Mark,</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">I agree that Sara's edits make this point more clear and succinct. The prior version, while accurate, may have been hard to track.</div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif"><br></div><div class="gmail_default" style="font-family:verdana,sans-serif">Greg S.</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, Aug 22, 2016 at 6:57 PM, Mark Svancarek via gnso-rds-pdp-wg <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext">Actually, I am now liking Sara Bockey’s edits, which dispense with some of this language.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Consumers, the domain name industry, governments, intellectual property owners, and registrants all have a vested interest in an RDS system which contains accurate and complete registration data, and which is secure, resilient, accessible,
auditable, and performs well. <s>These stakeholders have similar yet distinct requirements regarding the particular data which should be collected and the conditions under which it can be viewed.</s> Additionally, some registrants desire anonymity and their
requirements regarding data collection and data access may be at odds with others.
<s>Members of the global population of end-users, whether they are individuals, organizations, companies, or other groups, may fall into either camp depending on circumstances.</s><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:windowtext"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:windowtext"> Sam Lanfranco [mailto:<a href="mailto:sam@lanfranco.net" target="_blank">sam@lanfranco.net</a>]
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<b>Sent:</b> Monday, August 22, 2016 3:55 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Mark Svancarek <<a href="mailto:marksv@microsoft.com" target="_blank">marksv@microsoft.com</a>>; Greg Aaron <<a href="mailto:gca@icginc.com" target="_blank">gca@icginc.com</a>>; Gomes, Chuck <<a href="mailto:cgomes@verisign.com" target="_blank">cgomes@verisign.com</a>>; Ayden Férdeline <<a href="mailto:icann@ferdeline.com" target="_blank">icann@ferdeline.com</a>><span class=""><br>
<b>Cc:</b> RDS PDP WG <<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a>><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For WG Review - Redlined Problem Statement<u></u><u></u></span></span></p>
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<p>Mark, Greg, et. al., <u></u><u></u></p><div><div class="h5">
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom:12.0pt">In an effort to keep things both simple and clear,
<i>might not "Camp #2" below simply be a specific example of those in Camp #1</i> who want data to be "provided/available" under restricted conditions.
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Maybe the Camp #1 wording could be further tuned to say "... Various stakeholders may have different and distinct requirements..."
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This replaces "..have similar yet distinct requirements..." and inserts a conditional "may" in front of "have".
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#660000">On 8/22/2016 6:43 PM, Mark Svancarek wrote:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#660000">Resending – I see that the current draft has some changes which obscure the original 2-camps distinction.</span><u></u><u></u></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#660000">Camp #1:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><i><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#660000">Consumers, the domain name industry, governments, and intellectual property owners, and individual registrants all have a vested interest
in an RDS system which contains accurate and complete registration data…. These stakeholders have similar yet distinct requirements regarding the particular data which should be collected and the conditions under which it can be viewed.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#660000">Camp #2:</span><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-left:.5in"><i><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#660000">Additionally, there are some entities which desire anonymity for free speech and personal safety reasons, and their requirements regarding
data collection and data access may be at odds with the aforementioned stakeholders.
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