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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D">Sara’s redline is more constrained but does it omit our main job, which is to resolve/manage/accommodate/mitigate the divergent and sometimes contradictory
interests in RDS which the earlier draft rather succinctly identified? (I realize all those verbs are different, and not sure which is the best.)
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org [mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Andrew Sullivan<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, August 23, 2016 9:44 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For WG Review - Redlined Problem Statement<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 05:42:17PM +0000, Sara Bockey wrote:<br>
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> The problem statement should be explicit and to the point, without extraneous wording or viewpoints. Accordingly, my proposed revisions are attached.<br>
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I think this is vastly better because it is more constrained.<br>
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Andrew Sullivan<br>
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