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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande"> and here is the draft
redline version</font></font><br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2016-09-28 22:34, Stephanie Perrin
wrote:<br>
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">I apologize for
missing the last two meetings. I was travelling and had
difficulty connecting. I have listened to the call of the
21st, and I am going to listen to the next one as soon as it
arrives. I have a number of concerns with the current draft
purpose statement, and am consulting my NCSG colleagues on a
proposed redraft which I have done. As soon as I hear back
from them I will share it with the list, understanding that
this is not the same as being on the call. My concerns are
basically the following:</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">1. The purpose of
the purpose clause exercise was, as far as I understood it,
to come up with a succinct purpose for the exercise in which
we are engaged....to limit the exercise to the minimum until
such time as we have agreed on policy, as it is generally
understood that many policy issues have crept into the WHOIS
and RDS without benefit of a full PDP delberation. Our
remit is not to assume those policy issues are a fait
accompli, it is to examine them, thus the limited scope of
the purpose clause. It is a business requirements statement
for the exercise.<br>
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">2. Several implicit
assumptions appear to have crept in, namely that an RDS is
necessary, and that data will be released through it. We
have not got there yet. Discussion of rationales for the
RDS is straying way too far, in my view. <br>
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">3. While a
statement of purpose is necessary for the interpretation of
ICANN's policies with respect to the collection, use,
retention and disclosure of personal information in the
context of its registration activities, this is not it. We
cannot through this exercise set up a purpose for that,
because it requires policy decisions, and we are not there
yet. A goal can be compliance with national and regional
law, and with internationally recognized human rights
obligations, but not crafting the actual purpose statement.
I hope that is clear, it is a wee bit convoluted.</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">I will send my
proposed redline version as soon as possible. Apologies
once again for missing the calls.<br>
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Stephanie Perrin</font></font><br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2016-09-28 13:17, Hollenbeck,
Scott wrote:<br>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Marika Konings<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, September 28, 2016 1:12 PM<br>
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<b>Subject:</b> [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For your review -
updated RDS Statement of Purpose<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Please
find attached for your review the updated statement of
purpose which aims to reflect the changes discussed
during yesterday’s meeting. You are all encouraged to
review this version, especially the section ‘<span
style="color:black">Specific Purposes for Registration
Data and Registration Directory Services’, and share
your input with the mailing list prior to next week’s
meeting. Also note that a couple of WG members (Marc
& Fabrizio) volunteered to provide updated
language for two specific parts of the document which
have been flagged accordingly, so please hold your
comments on those parts until the proposed language
has been circulated. <o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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