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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">I apologize for
missing the last two meetings. I was travelling and had
difficulty connecting. I have listened to the call of the
21st, and I am going to listen to the next one as soon as it
arrives. I have a number of concerns with the current draft
purpose statement, and am consulting my NCSG colleagues on a
proposed redraft which I have done. As soon as I hear back
from them I will share it with the list, understanding that
this is not the same as being on the call. My concerns are
basically the following:</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">1. The purpose of the
purpose clause exercise was, as far as I understood it, to
come up with a succinct purpose for the exercise in which we
are engaged....to limit the exercise to the minimum until
such time as we have agreed on policy, as it is generally
understood that many policy issues have crept into the WHOIS
and RDS without benefit of a full PDP delberation. Our remit
is not to assume those policy issues are a fait accompli, it
is to examine them, thus the limited scope of the purpose
clause. It is a business requirements statement for the
exercise.<br>
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">2. Several implicit
assumptions appear to have crept in, namely that an RDS is
necessary, and that data will be released through it. We have
not got there yet. Discussion of rationales for the RDS is
straying way too far, in my view. <br>
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">3. While a statement
of purpose is necessary for the interpretation of ICANN's
policies with respect to the collection, use, retention and
disclosure of personal information in the context of its
registration activities, this is not it. We cannot through
this exercise set up a purpose for that, because it requires
policy decisions, and we are not there yet. A goal can be
compliance with national and regional law, and with
internationally recognized human rights obligations, but not
crafting the actual purpose statement. I hope that is clear,
it is a wee bit convoluted.</font></font></p>
<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">I will send my
proposed redline version as soon as possible. Apologies once
again for missing the calls.<br>
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<p><font size="+1"><font face="Lucida Grande">Stephanie Perrin</font></font><br>
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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 2016-09-28 13:17, Hollenbeck, Scott
wrote:<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">I found (and
fixed) two more instances of “gTLD domain names”. Update
attached.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">
<a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>
[<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org">mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Marika Konings<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, September 28, 2016 1:12 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a class="moz-txt-link-abbreviated" href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For your review -
updated RDS Statement of Purpose<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Dear All,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Please
find attached for your review the updated statement of
purpose which aims to reflect the changes discussed during
yesterday’s meeting. You are all encouraged to review this
version, especially the section ‘<span style="color:black">Specific
Purposes for Registration Data and Registration
Directory Services’, and share your input with the
mailing list prior to next week’s meeting. Also note
that a couple of WG members (Marc & Fabrizio)
volunteered to provide updated language for two specific
parts of the document which have been flagged
accordingly, so please hold your comments on those parts
until the proposed language has been circulated.
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style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Best regards,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span
style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Marika</span><span
style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
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Leader for the GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned
Names and Numbers (ICANN) </span><span
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