<p dir="ltr">Have read both versions although I didn't see the changes that were made by Scott as I couldn't see the difference as I'm on my phone the structure and intent is correct in what we are delivering. Hope this helps</p>
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<p dir="ltr">Richard </p>
<br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr">On Wed, Sep 28, 2016, 13:18 Hollenbeck, Scott <<a href="mailto:shollenbeck@verisign.com">shollenbeck@verisign.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1f497d">I found (and fixed) two more instances of “gTLD domain names”. Update attached.<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"">From:</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif""> <a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a> [mailto:<a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-rds-pdp-wg-bounces@icann.org</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Marika Konings<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, September 28, 2016 1:12 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> <a href="mailto:gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org" target="_blank">gnso-rds-pdp-wg@icann.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> [gnso-rds-pdp-wg] For your review - updated RDS Statement of Purpose<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Please find attached for your review the updated statement of purpose which aims to reflect the changes discussed during yesterday’s meeting. You are all encouraged to review this version, especially the section
‘<span style="color:black">Specific Purposes for Registration Data and Registration Directory Services’, and share your input with the mailing list prior to next week’s meeting. Also note that a couple of WG members (Marc & Fabrizio) volunteered to provide
updated language for two specific parts of the document which have been flagged accordingly, so please hold your comments on those parts until the proposed language has been circulated.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Best regards,<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;color:black">Marika</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt"><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-autospace:none"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt">Marika Konings</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Cambria","serif""><u></u><u></u></span></p>
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